OS: The Weight of Gold

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Preeti

@preetihere

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Wowww...such a new way of making Arnav Khushi meet but my god, the number of years of separation are making me weep!
Good one!

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fffan123

@fffan123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

So heart touching and beautiful! 😍

Great work. 👏

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Aparna

@-aparna-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Such a beautiful piece of writing man
soo sad and hearttouching
u wrote on bracelate wow
loved it

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Anon

@infiresmayn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

This was so breathtakingly beautiful ... thank you so much for writing such an amazing piece! 👏

It was refreshing to read the story of Arnav/Khushi from the perspective of a third person, and even better that it was none other than Anjali's daughter's POV.

Through that one character you managed to portray so much emotion that I'm just left with tears streaming down my face - it was really that beautiful!

I LOVED IT and was probably one of the best OS's I've read!! 😃

And thanks for the PM, as well ⭐️

Now, it's time to catch up with some of your other works - I seriously can't get enough; I'm hooked! 😆

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insanelycrazy

@insanelycrazy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

this was beautifully written! arnav and arti's relationship was so pure, and i almost feel sorry for arnav, holding on to khushi with a bracelet.

and the arnav khushi in this story! she left 20 f**king years back but he still never let go?!! it's amazing how these 2 kind of never moved on and how he never let go off her memories. though she came back in the end!! yayyiee. i loved the reunion, it was utterly gorgeous :)