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nicely written dear.sooo cute. waiting for next update
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Dee wonderful & cute ...😃
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Niceee update😊..waiting for the next one😃
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very nice update di, loved ua way of writing.. very wel written.. waiting for ua next update..
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very nice update dear, shall wait eagerly for the next update.
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Great work dear:))) Continue plllsss:))
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very nice next update pls
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realy nice update dear !!!!!!!!!!!
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thanks for all your comments , thank u so much
was really not in good mood for few days thinking about navya ending and so
have updated my post now , wrote doen what all i felt , rather to be true, i wanted the story to go on like this, please feel free to comment or write what you feel , wiil update my next post after this as soon as i finish typing 😊
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Mr Rakesh thought for a while and said : anant tum aaj mere office aa jao. Muje tumse kuch baatein karni hai.

anant didint understand first
rakesh : tum muje aise kyun dekh rahe ho, mei tumhe apne office mei join karne ke liye bula raha hoon, ye mat sochna ki mein tumpe aisaan kar rah hoon, mene tumhe jana hai, tumse baaten karne ke baad itna to zaroor patha hai ki tum bahut honest ho aur kaabil bhi ho, bas tumhare kaabiliyat ko mere office ke dwara dikhao. waise muje tum bahut psand ho, you are a gentleman
anant and navya was happy to hear this, anant : uncle please dont feel baad ki ye sab hone se mujpe aise hua hai , mei koi aur naukri bhi ..
rakesh: nahi anant, i really mean it, why cant u join us, u wil have good oppurtunities, agar tumhe acha nahi laga tho tum batha sakthe ho, mei tumhe nahi rokoonga.
Anant : ok uncle mein aaonga

Rakesh: ab muje chalna chahiye. I wil wait for u

he gave them his card And he left from there. Anant and navya had a little walk and returned back home. Anant was feeling refreshed. But something was disturbing him in his mind. He didn't know what. Navya had a bath, prepared breakfast and came up to him. He was totally lost in some world.Navya understood his tension. She hugged him from back and brought her head forward touching his face and gave a small hit on his head from left side with her head, mere pathi dev kya soch rahe hai, mein batao?

Anant: just gave a hmmm

Navya: yahi ki meri navya ka kya hoga agar mein job pe chala jaaonga. Vo muje bahut miss karegi and mein bhi use miss karronga

Anant: gave a smile but with low voltage

Navya : ye meri anant ka smile nahi hai, are average joke to maari hoon , phir hase kyu nahi?

Anant: kya navya , tume kya chahiye?

Navya: anant , tum itna mat socho. Sab acha hi hoga. Shayad pehli wali naukri issliye gayi kyunki tume koi aur acha milna tha, tumhari kaabiliyat uss job mein nahi, iss job mein dikhane ke liye. Agar hum dono apni zindagi mein yahan tak kar sakte hai to aaage kyun nahi, aur mein hameesha tumare saath hoon.

Anant: turned back and hugged her waist and looked at her: tum bahut achi ho, patha hai, jo hi kehti ho dil ko bahut sukoon miltha hai, ha mein thoda tensed hoon naya job naye log aur oopar se ek bahut bada business man , muje iss baat ka dar nahi hai ki mai kissi ko nahi jaantha, par agar phir se wahan muje baba , papa sab ka saamna karna pada ya phir koi oonch neech ho gayi tho? Navya mein jaroor khud ke apiroon pe khada rehna chahtha hoo, par patha nahi andar hi andar ek dar hai ab

Navya: kuch nahi hoga, mera anant sab kuch acha hi karega aur job hi karega sabse hatkar karega ki sab dekthe hi rah jayenge , aakhir mera anant jo hai aur mei jo uski biwi hoon

Anant : acha tumhara anant issliye, aur navya meri biwi issliye

Navya: aur nahi tho kya , issiliye tho tum ab tak sahi salamat ho, navya hai issliye

Anant now was back in his mood , navya wanted this smile to be back in his face. She ran from there to kitchen, anant couldn't catch her but ran back with his leg, he didn't bother about his leg much now, he managed to catch her and pulled her towards him and brought her near the wall,

Acha bachoo to tum muje satha rahi ho and was bringing his face nearer to hers

Navya gave a big amile: haa agar navya nahi hothi, to ye sab tumahare zindagi me hotha kya? Nahi na? aura b jab khud ki kaabiliyat dikha rahe ho tho, navya se panga?

Anant : tum bahut badmash ho gayi ho. And caught her hands and pressed to the wall

Navya felt a little pain but she was staring at anant with some sweetness in her eyes and anant knew that, but felt she was about to cry

He loosened the hold of his hand , navya suddenly broke out crying and hugged him and cried ,

Anant ; navya kya hua, haathon mein dard hua kya? Meine kuch galat kaha kya?

Navya nodded her head to say no, but tightened her hold on him and said meri wajah se itna kuch hua tumare saath , aur mein kuch bhi nahi kar sakthi. Tum zaroor jeetoge anant, muje patha hai, agar mein nahi aathi, tho shayad tumahri zindagi kuch aur hi hothi. Aisa nahi

Anant : navya , yeh kya kah rahi ho, abhi abhi to badi bahadur jaisi baatein kar rahi thi aur achanak itni dukhi ho gayi. Haa tumhaari wajah se yeh sab hua hai. aur mera maan na hai ki sab acha hua hai, meine pyaar karna seekha , meine tumhe apne se zyada chaahna seekha , tumhaari kushi mere liye sab se ahmiyat ban gayi aur tumhare saath apni zindagi ki har par ko sarahna seekha. Navya agar tum meri zindagi mein nahi aathi to ye sab muje miltha kya, ek aam zindagi hothi par tumare saath zindagi jeena seekha hai meine.

Mei sirf tumare saath jeena chahtha hoon aur muje patha hai tumari zindagi sirf mei hoon issliye tum merer liye aisa sochthi ho ? agar mei tumhare bagair nahi jee saktha to tum bhi mere bagair nahi jee sakthi.

And hugged her . they both didn't need any gestures to say their love for eachother. Waise bh wo dono ek doosre ke liye hi tho jeethe hai. and they could feel their warmthness of their love in that hug.

Anant: navya mene tumhara mood kharab kiya na|? sorry aaj ke baad aise tension me nahi rahoonga, job hi hoga , zindadili se face karoonga ok , tumhara anant hai, tho aisa hi kahegaa na

This was enough to bring a smile on her face. She smiled and left her hold on him

Anant: are bas itnaa hi, aur pakdo na, kaske pakdo, bahut acha lagtha hai, aise and tried to told her again , she pulled a towel from the string and pushed him towards the bathroom

Jao jaake naha lo, tumhe jaana hai na, aise gande smell se jaaoge tho watchmen tumhe gate pe hi check out karega

Anant: navya tum bhi na' but navya closed the door , nahake aao , mein wait kar rahi hoo, breakfast ready hai,

And went to kitchen

Anant was ok now to have a bath , so he closed the door and went to get fresh.

Navya by this time had prepared noodles for him which was his favorite as doctor had taken all the restrictions on his food. now she made a glass of juice also

Anant was surprised to get the smell of noodles when he came out from the bathroom

Wah aaj mera day hai kya? Kya kya banaya hai?

Navya gave him noodles and juice, he happily had his food and then got ready. Both lit the lamp near ganesh ji and prayed , navya was praying for anant's successs in whatever he does. He then started for office, took the visiting card and then suddenly put the hand in other pocket, navya knew he was searching for phone, she immediately took hers and gave him

Ye lo , isse le jao, now anant remembered that his phone was damaged in that accident. He told : no , you keep it with you, there will be a pco somewhere near I willl call you. Tumhe phone ki zaroorat hai, yahan pe , phone ka bina, nahi, tumhare paas rakho

Navya felt as if anant was disturbed now : anant tum mere bare mei phikar mat karo. Acha tum kahte hai to phone mei rakthi hoon, tum muje office ka number de dena, mei call karoongi ok. Muje job hi zaroorat pade mei maa ya ritz ya appy ko phone pe bula loongi. Ok aur phir ab bache bhi aa jayenge naa tum phikar mat karo

Anant felt relieved now. He knew the children will be there and then only few more hours and he can be back by evening. After a long time he is again going to face the world out but was confident now as his experiences had taught him more. His only concern was for navya , as she will be alone . but thinking about bittoo and others he was feeling happy that she would be with them and that she can call if she needs any help.

Navya on the other side was just praying that everything should go on well with anant here on and that he should be able to face everything well, she knew anant had that capacity but still man hi man anant se pyaar usse uski yaad dilathi rahegi din bhar

Anant gave a sweet kiss to navya and gave back too. He demanded one more through his action and navya this time gave him one on his lips .anant was sooo happy ki he hugged her and gave a tight kiss on her neck bone and smiled at her naughtily. Navya turned him aback and pushed him towards the door

Navya : agar aisa hi chaltha raha na, tum office nahi jaaoge , aur phir muje '.

Anant : muje kya,?(leaning his back towards her)

Navya : anant kya kar rahe ho, mei gir jaoongi

Anant mei pakkad loonga

Navya tum kabhi nahi sudroge. Chalo , ab jao

Anant teek hai madam par

Navya : ab kya

Anant ek kiss aur

Navya : nahi bahut ho gaya

Anant nahi mein doonga tum mat do

Navya : anant (she shouted) by this time he pulled her towards him and kissed on her cheeks and ran away. Bye navya jaldi aaonga, apna khayal rakhna (navya was hearing this as anant went from there through the stairs)

Navya gave a smile and closed the door with the feeling of happiness or what not that her anant was back to his life once again and stood there thinking about him.

Edited by smivas - 13 years ago

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