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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya

Awesome update!
Uff took me a lot of time to read 5 parts lol!
Really this part killed me gal!
Bechara Vicky tried so many methods to appease her!!
Ha ha Situps OMGGG! LOL!
Bechare Khurana Brothers lol!
Whole family had a full time entertainment lol!
Awwhh Geet could really bring grown up men on their knees with her naivety and cuteness haaayyyee!!
He he Gooddd!! Her counting lol! I need to learn Maths again ROFL!!!!!!!!
Omg Kaminaa Brij phir aagaya!
Ha ha Rimi deserves that lol!
OMG What Boom? Where?


Awww it always feels so nice to read your super comments sweety!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey i'm back i'm back
i'm back i'm back..
read all parts
now waiting..
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Posted: 13 years ago

A A super big thanks to all the 116 people who liked my update...😳
Your beautiful comments made me update today at any cost...😆

PMs for this part will be sent tomorrow!! Thanks for bearing with me...😳
Thank you for all the love guys!!!..😳

PART - 43

While earth shattering screams and successive sounds of explosion could be heard at one place, at another place far off in the city was bubbling with the sounds of erotic laughter!!! Unaware of the calamity that just took place, which was about to turn everything in their lives… For the better or for the worse, only Geet's babaji knew…

KHURANA MANSION

Maan and Vicky were subjected to endless teasing and snide remarks!! They had heaved a sigh of relief when Geet's classic counting had finally reached hundred after THREE HOURS!!! But poor them, their relief was short lived as immediately after that began the extreme grilling session by their audience… Or rather say their Family!!!

"Kya baat hai Maan bete… Abb humein samajh mein aaya ki aapne itne dedication ke saath apni body par kyun work kiya!!! After all abb aisi punishment ke liye to dolon sholon ki kaafi zaroorat hai…"

Dadima winked at Maan; while Maan's mouth opened so wide that it almost reached the floor…

"Aur nahi toh kya Maa ji… Aakhir Maan bete ke wo saare Tai chi ke rounds kaam aa hi gaye…" Rano chirped in thoroughly enjoying her dear son oops son-in-law's plight…

"Bilkul sahi keh rahe hai aap… Par mera Vicky bhi koi kam nahi hai… Abb mere samajh mein aaya ki saari ki saari ladkiyan iss parr kyun lattooo hui rehti thi… Mujhe toh unke dimaag par doubt tha… Ki after all unhe mere iss gadhe bete mein pasand kya aata hai…" Naina added with a hidden smirk…

Now it was poor Vicky's turn to be mortified… He couldn't believe that his own mom had just called him a GADHA!!!!

"Chup bilku chup!! Koi nahi pareshan karega hamare beton ko…" Raj chided the women of the house…

Maan and Vicky felt extremely glad that their grilling session was finally over… They looked gratefully at their dad… But their happiness was short lived…

"Aur nahi toh kya… humein toh inn par fakr hona chaiyeh…"

Everyone including Geet, who was sitting on a recliner and enjoying herself, got confused…

"Arrey aap log mujhe aise kyon dekh rahe ho??? Mujhe fakr hai ki mere nalayak beton ko ek kaam toh atleast theek sey aata hai… I am proud ki if nothing else, they are fantastic at doing sit ups…"

Laughter erupted once again in the room… While Maan and Vicky made baby faces, though they were feeling very happy from within to see their family so relaxed and happy after such a long time...

Their family time was disturbed by Maan's phone's shrill ringtone… He looked at the caller and his eye colour changed… He looked up and saw that everyone was looking at him…

"Umm… wo office se ek important call hai… Main aata hoon…"

He left the room after saying that, while everyone shrugged knowing how possessive Maan is about his work, and now diverted their attention towards the second bakra… aka Vicky…

TERRACE

As soon as Maan saw that the detective was calling him, he immediately left the room and came on the terrace… He knew that something very serious had cropped up or else the detective was directed to always called him in his office hours only, except in the case of some emergency…

In his anxiousness he accidently pressed the speaker button… And also failed to notice the figure who had followed him on the terrace…

"Hello…"

"Sir… Sir… Ek bahut badi problem ho gayi hai…"

"kya hua?? WHAT HAPPENED??"

Maan asked now dread filling his nerves…

"Sir… Yaha iss farmhouse par an ex.. exp… explosion took place…"

"Sir maine police ko bhi inform kar diya tha jaisa ki aapne kaha tha… toh they were also keeping a watch… Unka maan na hai ki yeh explosion Gas leakage ki wajah sey hua hai…"

Maan remained speechless barely able to understand anything…

"And Rimi… Brij???"

"Purre ghar ne aag pakad li hai sir…. Abhi 3 fire brigade already pahuch chuke hai but phir bhi aag control mein nahi aa rahi… Polcie aur sabhi ka maan na hai ki unke survival ke chance naa ke baraabar hai…"

Maan took a pause trying to digest the information…. He was still unable to come out of the shock… He took a deep breath and finally said…

"Theek hai… Main waha par kuchh der mein pahuchta hoon…"

"Okay sir…"

As Maan clicked shut the phone, he heard someone gasp and realized that he was not alone… He immediately turned and saw GEET….

FLASHBACK

Amongst all the fun earlier, apparently, one person didn't miss the change of facial expressions on Maan's face… That one person understood instantly that the call was not from office rather it was from someone that disturbed Maan… That one person knew Maan inside out thus she instantly understood the traces of fear and anxiousness on her dear husband's face… yes, it was none other that Geet…

PRESENT

"Geet…" Maan managed to whisper, completely taken aback as he least expected her here… He wished that she didn't hear anything but the look on her face told him clearly that she had heard every single word…

Geet stood horrified at the complete turn of events… She had heard everything since the phone was on speaker… It was true that she loathed her brother as well as that Rimi… but she never wished for something bad to happen to either of them… Whatever happened at the end of the day, Brij was his brother…. Related by blood to her… She couldn't believe that her brother was no more in this world… He had DIED…

She became completely white and her head started spinning, as her fragile body was unable to take so much stress… She started to fall down…

"GEEET…."

Maan shouted and lunged forward to reach her before she hits the ground but unfortunately, he got a little late…

Geet had already fallen down, dead unconscious…

Maan took her in his arms and desperately called out her name… He was hell scared to see her like this… He felt her pulse and was shocked as it was getting lower by the second… Amongst all this he suddenly realized that the back of Geet's head felt a little wet… He kept his hand there and saw that his whole hand got immediately covered in BLOOD…

PRECAP

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Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oye ye kya kiya...
bhaad me jaane dete us brij..
geet phir se hospital me😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
😲 😲abb kya hoga 😲
awesome update yar
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
Hope brij and Rimi are dead
Hope geet is fine and
nothing has happened to the baby
please update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
arrey yeh kya yaar geet ki bachche ko maardi...am feeling sad now...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
oye yeh brij aur rimi maare ishe acha kuch nah hain ..
but dont kill geet or baby..
as far as i know the doctors will say tat the baby is nomore..
so u ... dont do tat
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Posted: 13 years ago
Woww! Ruchi awesome update!
Bechare Maan and Vicky ko kisine nahi choda!!
Poor guys were so embarrassed! Full on paisa vasool entertainment Lol!! he he!!
he he Dad ne bhi nahi choda!!LOL!! Geet had so much of fun!!
OMG phone! Maan tensed!!
OMMGGG Brij n Rimi lapata so it seems hope they are dead!!
Poor Geet is so shocked! She heard all of it!! Hope she n baby are safe!! OMG Blood? Geet injured!!
Poor Maan panicking!!
Awwhh Geet could clearly read out when Maan is tensed!! Their love is so strong that it wil

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