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Geet's 9 year old boyfren. This is a shocking news!! Yet interesting😆
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awesome part
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Thank you all for the super encouraging comments and likes…..😳

Me sooo sooo happy….😳

here's the next Twisty update!!, Hope you like it!!!!.😳

PART - 42

Maan rubbed his temple knowing fully well that this time his Jaan would have got really angry and now there is nothing that is going to save him… He went in search of her, formulating a solid plan in his mind to pacify her… He saw Chandu going towards the kitchen…

"Chandu… Tumne Geet ko kahin dekha hai???"

"Jee sir… Woh Geet baby ji ko main ne neeche Vicky sir ke kamre mein jaate hue dekha tha…"

"Hmm… Theek hai… Tum jaao…"

After Chandu left, Maan marched towards Vicky's room… He didn't know how he would placate his Geet but he had to do it anyhow!!

VICKY's Room

Vicky was having a hard time… Ever since Geet had come in his room, she was just marching to and fro, from one corner to another while muttering something under her breath… He tried many times to ask her the problem but each time she snapped rudely at him… He couldn't say anything to her and her constant muttering and jogging was giving him a headache…

"Ufff… STOP IT GEET… TUMHARA IDHAR SEY UDHAR, UDHAR SEY IDHAR CHALNA MUJHE HEADACHE DE RAHA HAI… THIS IS MY ROOM DAMMIT… NOT SOME PUBLIC PARK… FOR HEAVENS SAKE WILL YOU TELL ME KI PROBLEM KYA HAI"

Geet halted hearing him shout… She gave him dagger looks as he interrupted her walk but soon those looks changed into a baby cry face…

"Kya hai… Waise hi mujhe itni irritation ho rahi hai and abb you are also troubling me…. Mujhe yaha aana hi nahi chaiyeh tha… Meri hi galti hai…"

Saying this, She started sobbing… Vicky was alarmed; he rushed forward and took Geet in his embrace… He gave himself a mental kick, as he knew how touchy she was nowadays due to her mood swing… And still he shouted on her… Log apne pair par kulhadi maarte hain, aur usne toh kulhadi par hi apna pair de maara….

"Shh… Shh… Calm down Doll… Shhh…. Aise rotey nahi… It's not good for the baby… Shh…"

"Ekk toh Maan ne aise mujhse baat ki upar sey main unsey naaraz bhi nahi ho paa rahi, kyunki mujhe unse naaraz hona hi nahi aata…. aur abb mera Superman bhi mujh par aise chilla raha hai…"

And then before he could make sense of anything Geet had said, to Vicky's horror, Geet started bawling her eyes out… Vicky immediately made her sit on the recliner and tried to calm her; But it proved to be futile…

"Okkk… achchha see main aaj tumhe tumhari favorite chaat shop par Golgappe aur… Haan Bhelpuri bhi khila kar laaoonga… theek hai na??? Please chup ho jaao doll…"

Geet cried even more badly…

"Achchaa I am sorry Doll… Tum chaho toh main tumhare saamne kaan pakad kar uthak bathak karta hoon… Okay see 1… 2…. 3… 4…"

He tried every method he knew to shush her but he was unsuccessful… His legs even stated paining due to all the sit-ups…

That's how Maan found them… Geet crying her eyes out and Vicky doing sit ups… He was pleasantly amused to see one of the world's best neurosurgeons doing sit ups for someone… but he was not surprised… After all here this someone was his Meet, who had the magic to capture the hearts of even a stranger at the click of her fingers…

"Thank god… Tum aa gaye Maan… Please help me dude…"

Maan entered the room giving pitying looks to Vicky who was making baby faces at him begging him for some help…

Geet was noticing all this from the corner of her eyes… She had stopped crying as soon as she had seen Maan… But she was still hiccupping due to her previous crying session…

"Geet please maan jaao na…"

"M… main…. Ekk shart … P… par maa.. maanoongi…"

Geet spoke slowly while eyeing Maan all the time…

Vicky was ecstatic to see that she had stopped crying finally…

"Haan haan Doll… Anything…"

"Aap dono abhi ke abhi mere saamne 50-50 sit ups karoge toh main dono ko maaf karoongi…"

Maan was very happy that his Geet, his Jaan was ready to forgive him, so he readily agreed… Even Vicky didn't want another crying scene to begin so he also agreed… But before that his mind's bulb finally lit up and he whispered in Maan's ear…

"Dude… Abb mere sab samajh aa gaya hai… You were the one because of whom am stuck here… Doll was angry at you aur yaha woh meri waat laga rahi hai… Kare koi aur bhare koi… I will see you dude…"

Maan smirked all this while hearing Vicky crib like a child…

"Yeh kya khusar phusar ho rahi hai… Jaldi jaldi start kRO nahi toh phir main 100 situps sey kam mein nahi maanoongi…."

Maan and Vicky looked at each other and started immediately while Geet counted…

"1… 1 and a half… one three fourth… 2… two one fourth…"

Both Vicky as well as Maan were horrified with Geet's counting style… Poor souls they had already done more than 50 sit ups but Hamari Geet ki counting toh abhi 10 tak bhi nahi pahuchi thi…😉

Sigh!! But bichare what could they do in front of her highness…

They looked up embarrassed when they heard sniggering sounds, only to find their parents, Dadima as well as Nakul and team looking at them amused and barely controlling their laughter…

"Arrrey ruk kyun gaye… Start once again or else 500 tak uthak bethak…"

Poor guys started once again immediately… And this time they also had super encouraging audience to cheer them… With Raj and Mohinder openly whistling seeing their plight while Rano and Dadima holding their stomach while laughing badly…

Naina was busy making a video of this once in a life time moment…

And thus the counting continued…

"26… 26 one eighth… 26 one fourth… 26 three eighth…"

And so on…😆

OUTSKIRTS of DELHI

Brij had devised a foolproof plan to get hold of all the Khurana as well as Handa property… He didn't want to use his card of ace till it was absolutely necessary…

After all, that card could backfire and ruin him in the bargain too…

"Rimi… Tu samajh gayi hai na ki tujhe kya karna hai??"

Rimi was hell scared of this man's psychopath nature… Last few days had been a living hell for her… She had no option but to agree to whatever he said… At least till she managed to get out from his clutches….

She nodded…

"MAINE SUNA NAHI…"

Rimi shivered and managed to squeak "Haan…"

"Theek hai toh phir…"

BOOM

Before he could say anything further, a loud explosion took place… Covering everything in BLOOD…


PRECAP

HOSPITAL, POLICE and BLOOD...😭


Me hopes that you liked it...😳

You can find all my work at my blog too - Ruchi's WORLD!!!!


PREV - PART 41 NEXT - PART 43

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Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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ad dear
this is for your couting
tooo good
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Nice Ruchs...tum toh statistics aur economics ko bahut achche se use kiya hai...statistics ka matlab hai...geet ko aise counting karvadiya...aur economics ka matlab hai...us brij apne plan kaamyaab hone se pehle hi usse na use karne par majboor kardiya...us bomb explosion se...nice am so laughing seeing maan aur vicky doing sit-ups...🤣😊👍🏼👏🤗

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