FF#TUM KAISI MOHABBAT KARTE HO ch# 26, pg 69, 1/6

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Posted: 13 years ago

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annokhi pls update next 😊

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Originally posted by: Maria.Creationz
can't wait for the next part 😃 plz update soon😊GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

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Originally posted by: HARSHITI12
nice but too short..

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Originally posted by: vrushika
hi di!!! see i was knowing.. that junnon is gonna be prem..
yippe!!! its prem.. prem prem... i was knowing first only,..
who coulod have been around whole time .. other then prem..
he is such a cutie pie..
this was a total exciting superb update...
love it.. di.. awesome awesome awesome!!!!
it was such a cutie pie..
thank u so much for such a fab update..
and i loved all teh dialogues.. especially that
uska saviour bhi main uska fiancee cousin bhi main..
awesome dialogue di...
love it.. thank u thank u thank u
love ya loads... now i m really really excited for the next part do update soon..
take care.. keep smiling!!!!

lots of love
vrushika!!!

thank u vrush tumhare comments dil khush kar daitey hain...

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Originally posted by: Oblivious
thanks for the awesome update ...
its amazing ...

thanks for the pm ...

and please update soon ...

thank u so much...

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#306

Originally posted by: kiran_28
i knew it, i knew itPrem hi junoon hai.
awsme update yaar
thnx 4 pm
plc update nxt chap soon

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Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi
That was really awesome.. waiting for the next part..

continue soon..

thanks for the pm..

take care

thank u so much sadi...😃

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Originally posted by: AASUS
Hey

Interesting update. Wow so mystery is revealed!

I thought may be Prem was Junoon but on my occation it didn't make sense. They were in different place at same time. This makes Prem a superman though 😕
no assus.. jab prem ka part ata tou junoon kahin bhi nahi hota, or jab junoon ka part or prem k part ki timing main fark hai... if u remember...

We also got to know how interested Prem is about Heer.

Earlier he didn't show the passionate side of him before to anyone.

Great job Khwahish and thank you.

All the best for future chapters.

thank u so much... i m sooo happy...

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Originally posted by: seema.sharma86
annokhi pls update next 😊

ye lo update...😃😉

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CHAPTER # 20

Kunal enter in Agni villa. A letter in his hand. Heer came from downstairs. Kunal stop her.

Kunal: Heer ji! Rukiye ek minute.
Heer stop.

Heer: Yes!

Kunal: Wo ye letter post man de k gaya tha lekin is pe kisi "Sargam Agni" ka naam likha hai aur is ghar main "Sargam" kisi ka naam hai nai to...
Heer (smile): Ye mera hai.
Kunal: What? But aapka naam to Heer...
Heer: Yah Heer hai lekin mera original name infact mera registered name Sargam Agni hai. "Heer" to baad main dadi aur bari dadi ne rakha tha.
Kunal: OMG! (in mind) Iska matlab jis Sargam k milne ki dua main Prem Heer ka rishta jurne se pehle karta tha aur jis k na milne ki dua maine Prem Heer ka rishta fix hojane k baad ki wo ye hi hai. Iska matlab Prem jis Sargam ka naam high fever ki condition main barbarata rehta hai wo Heer hi hai. Heer hi uski Sargam hai. (angry on Prem) Aur wo gadha mujhe itne time se ullo bana raha hai. Dekh lunga tumhe main Prem. Ek taraf Heer ki bajate rehte ho aur dusri taraf us k dusre naam ki mala japte rehte ho. Dekh lunga tumko to main.
Heer: Kahan kho gaye?
Kunal: Aaan haaan! Kahin nai. Ye aapka letter.
Kunal give letter and leave.

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Anmol: Bas Prem! Band karo ye Junoon, Soulmate ka khel. Ab to tumhari engagement hogayi hai.
Prem: Nai Bhai!
Anmol: Kyun nai? Mazak samajh k rakha hai tumne. Band karo ye khel warna main Heer ko ja k sab kuch bata dunga.
Prem: Aap aisa kuch nai kar sakte.
Anmol: Prem! Plz maan jao. Aakhir kyun nai mante?
Prem: Main Heer ko badalna chahta hun. Us main confidence develop karna chahta hun aur maturity b.
Anmol: What do you mean by maturity? Tumhe wo immature dikhai deti hai? (angry)
Prem: Nai! Lekin ye baat baat pe hansna, oot patang harkaten karna, bachon ki tarah uchal kood, non serious rehna. Ye sab mujhe nai pasand.
Anmol: Tum us se pyar karte ho?
Prem: Junoon ki had tak.
Anmol: Kehte hain jis se pyar ya muhabbat hoti hai uski har ada dil ko achi lagti hai. Phir tumhen itne aitraaz kyun? Kahin tumhara dawa ghalat to nai?
Prem: Matlab?
Anmol: Tum Heer se pyar hi nai karte. Junoon ki had to buhat dur ki baat hai.
Prem (yell): Jhoot hai ye. Main us se muhabbat karta hun wo b junoon ki had tak.
Anmol: Tum kaisi muhabbat karte ho? Ye kaisi muhabbat hai tumhari?
Prem: Main aisi hi muhabbat karta hun.
Anmol: Mujhe hairat hai k tumhen uski hansi pasand nai.
Prem: Maine ye kab kaha? Maine kaha k mujhe uska baat baat pe hansna pasand nai.
Anmol: Jis din wo hansna bhul gayi na Prem us din sab se ziyada tum tarpoge uski hansi ki aawaz sunne k liye.
Prem have no answer.
Anmol: "Uski oot patang harkaten" ye zinda dili kehlati hai Prem. Zindagi sab jeete hain lekin zinda dili k saath jeene wale buhat kam hote hain.
Laad, naaz, khwahishen to buhat baad ki baatain hogayin naa.
Prem: Lekin Heer ko to pata hai na.
Anmol: Honestly batao, kya tumhare papa Heer k papa ki jaga le sakte hain? Tumhari maa, tumhare bhai koi b? Nai Prem! Har insaan ki ek alag jaga hoti hai. Hum har shakhs ko uski ek alag jaga dete hain apni zindagi main, apne dil main. Wo tumhare maa, baap, bhai, behen ko apne maa, baap aur bhai ki jaga de sakti hai lekin tumhare apnon ko wo apne parivaar k logon se replace nai kar sakti.
Prem nazren jhuka k khara tha.
Anmol: "Wo non serious hai" jahan usey apni zimedari nibhani hoti hai, apna farz ada karna hota hai wahan wo apna 100% deti hai. Betiyan jab tak hasti, muskurati, larti, shor machati rehti hain tab tak sab ko chain rehta hai. Haan aitraaz b hote hain lekin jab wo chup ki chadar orh k apni zindagi k gari ko zabardasti ghasitne lagti hain tab har koi be chain hojata hai wo b jinhe aitraaz hota hai. Prem! Jao jaa k aaram se sab socho, samjho, ek side se nai alag alag point aur side se socho tab tumhe samajh aayega k kya sahi hai aur kya ghalat, jao.

Prem quietly move towards his room. Anmol close that room and exit. Junoon's room create in annexe of Rathods.

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Ahem move to and fro in room and thinking about Sanskriti's behaviour.
Ahem: Why she behave like this?
Is sawal ka us k paas koi jawab nai tha. Ahem buhat disturb tha. He decided.
Ahem: Main kal us se baat karunga. Puchunga k wo itna ajib behave kyun karti hai mere saath? Kyun bhagti hai mujhse? Kya usey ye rishta...? Nai! Aisa nai hosakta. Lekin is sawal ka jawab main Sanskriti se lena chahta hun.

Ahem sigh and sit on study chair.

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Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago