-Maryam thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nk-naitik
ak-akshara
short forms^

OS:
naitik: akshara akshara! office ke liye late ho raha hai
ak: aye baba aye!
ak comes up and gives naitik his things, he kisses on her cheek waves to duggu and says bye..
he leaves,
about half an hour later akshara recieves a call from an unknown number saying that there has been a car accident and naitik has died..she cuts the phone and nearly faints.
meanwhile g3 comes up and sees aks condition.
ak suddenly: maa, naitik mar gaye.. woh nahi rahe maa!
g3 takes her hand and rushes downstairs when the whole house finds out they are struck with grief 😭
g3 n bma hug while crying...ak falls on the floor without a word..rj,vish,dadi and others come..varsha takes care of duggu while rj and vish help in comforting everyone..rj goes to ak who is sitting on the floor but ak gets up all of a sudden and runs towards the door there she screams with pain NAITIK NAITIKK and then she bursts her heart out and cries non-stop..rj goes and hugs her..🤢
rashmi,nikhil,mohit and nandini give everyone food as it is evening and no one has eaten anything.. they all eat and fall asleep..g3 cant sleep..she has managed to cool down and accept the truth...she starts looking for ak who hasnt eaten anything yet.. she looks everywhere but she cant find her..then she goes outside for fresh air she sees ak lying in the grass in the garden she goes towards her and looks at her face still covered with wet tears.. she fell asleep while crying
g3 wakes her up..she wakes up still completely out of her senses..
ak : maa, naitik chale gaye. woh mujhe akele chod kar kyun chale gaye..
g3: beta chalo utho!
she helps her in standing up and makes her sit ona sofa inside, and gives her food, ak vomitss it all out ...they both lie down, g3 falls asleep..but after a while her eyes open she sees ak on the door step sobbing..quietly, she leaves her there as she knows its very hard for her..
next day, ak is trying to be strong and wakes up wears a plain saree.
g3 comes in the kitchen
ak; sorry maa, kal main kisi ka khayal nahi rakh paye liken mei khud toot gaye thi maa
g3: beta koi baat nahi
g3 gives everyone breakfast after which RB (rajbanna) gets a call from the police..they say that nk's body hasnt been found..they were sad, 😭



four days went by in mourning and sadness..

AND THEN THINGS started to get a little normal.. g3 handles everything takes care of duggu because ak is still a bit lost.. that night ak is sitting on the door step and looking at the sky and remembering the time she used to sit with nk in his arms and stare at the stars and the moon.
when all of a sudden she sees someone at the gate..its a man, his image is a little blur because of the tears in her eyes..she quickly wipes them and sees the man comes towards her.. she thinks she's imagining it till he comes very close, its her very own naitik.. ak screaams loudlyy that everyone comes rushing, then suddenly she pulls himtowards her and hugs him very tightly..she doesnt let goo..everyone comes down and is shocked to see nk
and ak then leaves him..he gets up and hugs everyone, they are delighted especially g3 to see her son alive...
nk starts telling what happened
there was a truck and two cars they both hit each other and then the man in the other car was hit by the truck driver ..the truck driver was a brutal man and he made sure the man died..
then somehow their identities got exchanged and the news was spread that he had died whereas the truck driver took nk with him as he had witnessed the whole situation.. nk said: they then beat me up with a iron rod on my back... ak gasps😲
nk: and locked me up until i broke the window and managed to escape then i took a bus n came here
all are shocked,
g3: okay go upstairs now u must be tired,
ak goes with him ..she takes off his shirt and helps him
he lies down so she puts the cream on his back and his wounds it hurts so he grabs ak's hand.. ak kisses his hands and cries and tells him that she cant live without him..
they hug and he says ak i love you more than anything
ak: you are my life nk my life is nothing without you
then they hug and fall asleep in eaach others arms
while duggu sleeps with g3😉


HAPPY ENDING!!😃
x THE END x

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sona_naksh thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#2

Although d os is nice but i cont want it to happen in d show like dis...can never imagine naksh like dis...i to cried reading dis only agar show me hua to ro ro kar mar hi jaayenge...
shayal1436 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#3
Ouch
I liked the end 😊
-Maryam thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
Sorry for those who didn't like it,
i was just trying to do something a little different with a lot of pain,
and thanks those who liked it.
i myself, would hate for this to happen in the show.. was just trying, really sorry!
ill treat you guys to a romantic OS 😊
457639 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#5
for once, i did get tears in my eyes..😭

such is my love for Naitik and Akshara, even in thoughts, i can't see them separate..
it was a nice try certainly! but i so wish it doesn't happen in the show, or else, Naitik mare na mare, main zarur mar jaaungi..

end was good..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
nice creativity but pls dont separate naksh,
i read tat some lines my heart is so much pain really , u r script and writting skill is awesome
😭 we cant even imagination also

the ending is super u have good script writing skills 👏,
we need more naksh os in different situation in sweetest way😃

Edited by kumarandils - 13 years ago
457639 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: Mayo2424

Sorry for those who didn't like it,

i was just trying to do something a little different with a lot of pain,
and thanks those who liked it.
i myself, would hate for this to happen in the show.. was just trying, really sorry!
ill treat you guys to a romantic OS 😊

hey please don't say sorry..😊

everybody has a different taste.. personally, i love tragic love stories.. I love P.S. i love you to that extent that i have put it in my signature box..😆

majority of the people here like romance and blushing in the OS.. but please don't feel disheartened.. the OS was indeed very, very, very good..😃
do write more..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ur OS was good infact very nice...but i cant imagine naksh without each other in my wildest dream.😭
waiting 4 ur next romantic 1.😉
sonu. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww..!! Aisa hua toh may maarjaungi.i can never imagin this in my badest dream also..
Good wrtiing..
Keep writing more ..per see ki..next time aisa heartatack yaar im very senty taking naksh..
-Maryam thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
you guys are really sweet and encouraginggg😃

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