Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#761

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660099">Tonight after replying everyone😳</font>

tanzie updating yay!!!!party time...*dancing* *dancing*😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta
sorry for not replying to last update as my net was not working

awesome update

loved it

I love the was u describe the feelings of charachters in ur ffs

Piya feeling jealous of Abhay's boss lol

cont soon thanks for the pm

No problem pari. Im glad u commented. feelings are what makes the words alive so to me its important. will update tonight

Originally posted by: --peehu--
tanzie that was awesome...loved it...right now i am loving the slow proceeding story...i know this is the calmness before the actual storm...

Thanks peehu. n yes you are right...

Originally posted by: coolcats123
i luved d updates ...
pls pm me to...

Thanks... will surely do 😳

Originally posted by: Eowyn
Abhiya have started the blissful journey of love.
I liked the way you guys added the dialogue in the prologue to the story!
Brilliant.
Gr8 job Tanz and Heena.
Love you.

Thanks a lot Nidha. and i have to remind you heena doesn't write the SS anymore... she has left it long ago. she is busy with exams na... so she cant contribute her.e..

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: bellaaa
loved yar...
its awsome part not boring at all...
the way they going together its amazing...
hope tht new boss didnt come btw my abhiya...hehe

Thanks Beenish. new boss wont be a problem 😆

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
amazing update tanzie..
lvd hw their realtionship is growing...u really wrote that very well...
abhay and piya are in their dreamland nw and i just hope no more troubles for sometime..
thanks for pm

Thanks Megha. glad u liked it. no more trouble for now.

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
I"m really loving this story of your keep going it is really good to read
thanks for the pm

Thanks a lot.

Originally posted by: Cute_Gal
Awesome Update...
Loved It... Carry On..
Thanxxx 4 D Pm..😊

Glad you loved it dear. my pleasure.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: hema_rawat
beautiful update tanzie ...
i loved it ...
its not boring at all ...

Thanks hema.

Originally posted by: SheIsTheOne
Oh!!!!My!!!!God!!!!...😲 Awesome update...👏Loved every bit of it...Abhay-Piya are just so passionate about each other...😳 I liked their little family talk...😳 Abhay is so sweet...he wants to earn money honestly so that he can support Piya...awww.😳..how cute..😳..and Piya...seriously dude...I'm still not able to digest the fact that she's a doctor.😆..really...worse situations can really take people to unlikely tracks...like modelling...😛 your imagination is awesome ya...i must say...and...hmm...Abhay...he entered the bathroom without knocking...😲 Naughty boy...😉 😆 Abhay-Piya's love is just so passionate...😳.whether it's in Pyaar Kii...or any Abhiya FF or anything else...Abhiya's love-story is always passionate and amazing...😳 Abhay Piya=Love Redefined..😳..Abhiya redefined love,passion,romance,sacrifice,pain,grief and happiness...Just love them...😳
Over all...awesome chapter..🤗..please update soon as you can...😳 and ya...thanks for the PM...😃

Thanks a lot dear. future talking, family feelings.. its all new for them for i wanted them to give some time to explore the new feelings. Abhay was crazily waiting to see Pia.. wat to do 😛 I always said in this SS their relationship is very passionate. n yes, Abhiya are passionate anyway. love them too and hell lot...thats why write about them... will update tonight dear... my pleasure..

Originally posted by: ..Monica..
Loved the update Tanzie
The way you carried Abhiya's relationship slow & steady was beautiful & loved how Abhiya cant live without each other even for 2 days
They are the most intense & passionate lovers that I have ever seen
Continue soon & thanks for the PM

Thanks Monica. wanted to show how their relationship is building up. 😳 will update tonight,,,

Originally posted by: ilove99
hmm...i thought something fishy would happen that abhay on his first day had to attend seminar ..but nothing happened😆good!!
Abhiya really r drug to each other..and pia,she didn't even touched oily food and achanak se all this😆wah!
update soon...

I knew everyone would think that 😆 Pyaar ka side effect 😆

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra
wao update..hy dear.u didnt snd me pm dis tym😭

sorry if I missed dear... will PM u next time a😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: kuttu
Wow nice way to see their relationship growing. abhay seems to be taking it slow and steady while Pia is on a roller coster ride. She also seems to be very clingy and insecure. She just cannot see Abahy away from her. So is that going to come in the way of their things. Abhay still seems to have reservations and Pia is like head on. A very contrasting relationship I would say. don't know if this is the way you wanted it potrayed.
But it was a nice part to see how two people are trying to build a relationship.

It is very contrasting relationship in a way that both people r very different and how they are trying to building up a strong relationship. and despite their differences they are so passionate about each other.

Originally posted by: sdoll
Lovely and romantic update.. very cute.. i actually luv this type of scenes..

Thanks Aditi 😳

Originally posted by: meerubzara
superb story👍🏼
nice update
abhiya chmstry ws awosome
last moments were passionate,romentic & hot
conti soon

Thank you dear. glad u liked it.

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987
MINDBLOWING update!
Just loveed d growing n maturing relationship of abhiya,how u portrayed their feelings,their growing understanding for a family life especially abhay.
Pia seems to be very possessive,obssessive over abhay as she considers him d only truth in her life full of lies n betrayals.abhay also is very loving,caring,passionate n devoted lover but is taking time in understanding norms of a family life.
AT D END they r ABHIYA d epitome of love n love personified where there is no existence of two beings but a single personified love which is created by burning to ashes n then ressurection n reincarnation as a single being ABHIYA.

Thanks a lot dear. they never lived a proper family life so they are trying to find their solace in each other. Pia is indeed very possessive about Abhay and so is him. next update u will see his part.

woww... beautifully said... couldn't have said it better myself 👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni
awesome update !!!!

Abhiya relation growing strong!!!! i m glad now abhiya life is peaceful !!! update was so romantic !!!! both r so caring and i m loving pia possessive behavior toward abhay !!11 hope they remain happy together !!!!!continue soon !!!

Thanks Sandy. i hope so too

Originally posted by: Pavi.Dravid119
Gosh Gosh Goshhh!!..

Shame on me that i had not read this SS before, seriously shame on me.. 🥱

Tanzie, Heena - I read it today and i loved it so much!!.. Seriously!!..

Pls don't hit me nah - I'll be regular now 😃

The SS is simply fantabulous 👏

No problem pavi... der aye durust aye 😆

heena doesn't write it anymore since she is busy with studies and she has loads of exam coming up... so I continue it alone... glad u liked it dear... 😳

Originally posted by: pkyekfanclub
beautiful * clap * as always I don't need to say it * smile * aww Abhay cooked for Pia and she ate all those oily food which she always avoids just for him and also she didn't let Abhay know that he forgot to put salt in 1 veg dish so that he won't be sad so sweet of her and Abhay's 45 year old boss putting eyes on him LOL see Abhay ka asar har age ki lady par yahi hota hai * LOL * loved the way both were missing eachother seriously like Abhay even I don't want to think what will happen if some day they need to get seprated from eachother forever just want them happy and together sorry like button is not working

Thanks a lot Ankita. glad u notices that part because most people didn't. it was really sweet of her na he forgot to put salt but she didnt say anything. no worries about the LIKE button... glad u commented...

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
What a lovely gift I get after I come back...eee Love love love it!

Thank you jee 😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

#767

Originally posted by: 411996
thax fr such lovely update!!!!! update was awsm!!!! its nt at all boring... y u think lyk tht????? its was stupendo fantabulsly fantastical!!! abhiya ki relationship, unki understanding was so perfect!!!!!!
and abhay ki us witchy boss ko abhiya se dur rkhana ppplzzz!
and ya abhi un dono ko thoda or khush rehne do... i no ke chand chup nhi bhethega... :-( use itni jaldi vaaps mt lana.! abhiya ko thoda or vakt ek saath bithane do!!!! and ppplzzz next 1 jaldi update kro... m waiting!!!!

glad u liked it. dont worry, Abhay's witchy boss wont be near him.

will try my best... will update tonight...

Originally posted by: pallavisarkar
thnx for d pm
sorry for late reply
very hot n lovely updt
cont soon
awesome gr8t 👏👏

Thanks a lot.

Originally posted by: cuteriya08
i really dnt knw wat to say😉 as its more than fabulous...😳 as i m new here i dnt knw any one😲 i must say i m lovvvinnnggg ittt... 👏😛😉😊

Thanks Riya. glad u liked it. welcome to IF dear... glad u liked my FF...

Originally posted by: -Chinky-
Hello Hii 😃
I remember you once told that you suck at writing romantic scenes. Really ? What a joke it was ?!! "Beautifully destroyed" - I read this chapter 4 times. 😈 😳 Mere bare mein jo sochna hai,soch lo. I know I am already spoiled 😎 🤣
Seriously that was the most passionate writing I have ever read. To say the least,i loved it to bits <3

The next chapter is also too too cute.. I was listening to 'dil ibadat' while reading it.. You can imagine my condition 😍
I miss pkyek so much 😭
Hoping beyond hope that we will ever get pkyek season 2 !!! 😒
Anyways, I hate abhay's boss 😡
Huh..itna kaam bhi koi karwata hai kya :-/
But the last scene compensated everything <3

Brilliant update(s) :P 🤗

only hello hi...no bye bye 🤣

you read it 4 times 😲 someone told me they read it 5 times... it was good.. for once Im satisfied... 😳
wpww Dil ibadat n Abhiya combination is heavenly offcourse. I miss abhiya like anything..thats why i write about them na... Abhay's boss wont do anything.. dont worry...
glad u liked it...
love u 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#769

YIPPEE

Am first

I still cant believe it 😃 I always wanted to be the first one to reserve a post for my comment in my fav SS but well could never achieve tat so far 😭 I was so glad I was online and kept a tab on your comments. The moment u said u'd post it that night I kept on refreshing the page n when I saw the half done update believe me I was tempted to read it but I hit the Post Reply button to reserve it first 😆

Coming to the update it was fantastic as usual 👏 Misha's bit was hilarious 🤣 I so love tat gal I tell ya 😃 Her timings impeccable 😉 Pia telling her tat Abhay is her life was so awww 😍

Y do I feel this James guy will backstab Abhay? 😕 For one there's no such thing called permenant friendship nor permenant enemity in their world So Chand is her father after all 🤢 I had thought so 😕

The best part of the update for me was the one where Abhay teaches her how to use the gun. It was so realistic, I could literally imagine each and every minute detail 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 BANG ON! Superb!

I suppose it might turn dark from the next update onwards right? 😭 But now tat Chand knows Pia is his daughter he still wants to kill her? 😡 What kind of a father is he? 🤢 He's horrible even for a gangster

BRILLIANT UPDATE Tanzie 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Keep up the gr8 job 👍🏼

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Posted: 13 years ago

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🤣misha ...and loved abhays possesiveness😛😛he is cho cweet ...and pia learning shooting ...gud she is getting ready to face prob...and her dream 🤔is it going to come true...i guess so...and abhays master ...tanzie get this character little late ...need abhiya dose for nxt 2 updates😛 btw can i request something i want some passionate romance in nxt update *making small face*😳😛

Nice update 🤗

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