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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update Nams... loved everything in this part... d lovely relationship between kunwar n Shakthi is amazing Wich u have described so perfectl👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago

sry nams dis tim im late..

xamz
amazing updt...
luvd it..
amar's p.o.v ws amazing..
shakti ws rocking...
thnkgod he broke up wid charlie..
luv u 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazng update...
Luvd it so mch...
Wen will bth f dem confess...
Waitng fr der cnfession...
Glad ki amar broke-up wid charlie...
Waitng fr nxt part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved recent update 😃
oh god these both r really big idiots. 😡
Ek to hai jo sab samajh k bhi nahi bol paa raha hai n he is still confused abt her feelings for him n god knows kab tak rahega confuse 😕. Shaks was so embarrassed that's y she couldn't call him either or sms him. Muks knew very well that she was hiding something.🥱 But Shaks was completely ignoring him n now when she is leaving they still didn't meet. 😲 Whereas the whole gang was there with her to enjoy the fullest n when she asked about him they told that he was busy with d shoot. 😔
Kunwar's pov was nice n flashback as well which showed n proved that they have some special bonding more than friends n now still they need confirmation? 😛 Can u ever do it with your best buddy? 😉 I was sure about these happenings with him that only that b***h Chapma can do that n hurt him,😈 but y he goes back to Shaks every time he has a break up?😳 He should first confront his feelings n share it with her what will he do when she would b away? 🤔
Jealousy is obvious n thank god it stopped Karan doing something disastrous. Dharmesh is more sure than him. 😆
Hope he goes to meet her giving her surprising her n revealing his feelings for her. 😳
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nams dii wen will u update d next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nams, u r definitely stuffed wid brilliance. Wat an update man, I m totally spellbound. U r too gud in describing POVs. I m so happy ki finally Champa se Amar ka break up ho gya, ahh, finally.

Well, ab toh confession kara de . I luved d Shaks + Muks convo. Dharmesh+ Kunwar convo was also much needed. Looking frwd to the next update eagerly.

Nams, u r a true rockstar⭐️

Keep smiling n dun take dat rona-dhona novels seriously, okay.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
it ws awesome.loved it!!
w8ng 4 the next update eagerly
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Posted: 13 years ago

okay guys updating in a hurry.. ignore typos error sorry.. and after reading dis temme.. what do u think.. 'is this last chapter ?' or will i update one more chapter ?? think think.. im unpredictable remember tat.. hope u like dis chapter.. i spent exactly 40 mins in writting dis and 6 mins thinking abt it.. hope u wud like it.. 😳 doesnt this looks like last chapter ?? 😉😆 hahahaha😳


CHAPTER SIX


Last day in Mumbai.. im not a emotional champ but today i was feeling low.. i nevr stayed away from my parents for dis long.. nd now I had 2 go away for nearely 3 months.. for a far country.. yet the proudness and happiness was all around im pursuing my dreams wasn't tat a big deal ??

My flight was at 6pm.. it was already 10am.. wen I woke up.. all asked me to take some more rest so tat I wud b completely tension free and relaxed.. but something was eating me up.. I don't knw what it is.. I kept myself calm.. but today im going.. im going to NYC for 3 months.. shudnt I call him ?? no no I will not!! Huh mei kyu call karu!?

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*ting tong* *ting tong*

Finally the door opened.. my eyes closed in anticipation..! damn damn pls let him nt open the door pls pls.. aaah wat was I praying for ?? uss gadhe ke gar ke saamne kade hokar im praying let him not open the door!! First of all why im here!??

UR BIGGEST IDIOT!! I blurted out loud this time.. what a perfect timing! He he nly opened the door and heard nothing bt my words wich I was cursing for myself..!!! but prolly he thout I told it to him..

I froze seeing him.. he was in his shirt and sweat pants.. I cud clearely see he was dancing.. infact he was dancing hard.. no it isn't for any rehersals he seems to be low. He was taking his frustration out.. I cud clearely see.. our eye lock broke..

He raised his eye brows 'what ??' I asked trying to b normal..

'biggest idiot ???'

'ya ofcourz koi shark ??' I chuckled inside thinking how characters had changed.. I told it to myself here he thout it for himself! Wow!!

'kunwar muje tumse yahi kade hokar baat karna hoga ??'

'umm wo sorry come in..'

Yes he was surprised to c me.. but some uneasy in his face.. whats it ?? I wondered..

'shaks tumara flight ??' he suddenly asked in realisation!

'6pm ko hai.. u dint cum home yday toh socha jaane se pehle kudh milke jaaun.. hope u don't have any commitments for some time.. do u ??'

He sighed.. 'no shaku bhai im all urs..!!!'

My heart skipped a beat wen I heard tat.. gosh I wish he wud b serious..!

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For the next one hour we chatted.. we laughed.. we teased .. all I can say we enjoyed.. after a long time I was smiling from my heart.. may b same wid him..

'shaks ..'

He called my name wen we sitting on his couch in the living room..

I looked at him..

' I will miss u..'

Gosh!! Kyu aise heart attacks deta hai muje..!? gosh !! I will miss him too..

I looked at him wid all the affection twinkling in my eyes.. I wish I wish he wud understand how I feel about him.. and at once he wud hug me saying..

Did my wish come true ??

He hugged me tight as if not letting me go..

I hugged him back trying to take all his presence capturing them in my arms safely..

'I will miss u shaks.. miss u a lot!!'

He said again.. I wiped my lone tear .. 'I will miss u too kunwar'

I don't knw till wen we wer in tat position..

After we broke first thing I did was 'sorry kunwar.. us din karan..'

He placed his fingers on my lips.. I cud still mutter 'thnkx' in bw his lips for wich he blinked..

'nxt time..' he started

'I will nevr lie to u.. promise!'

I said assuring him.. but he was silent.. may b he dint want to promise..

'kunwar tumei kuch kehna hai ??' I asked him still holding his hands.. he dint speak anythn..

I sighed..

'I knw Charlie aur tum..'

'we are not together anymore.. I hate her!! Tum sahi thi shaks.. im im really sorry..' he said hugging me again..

I tried to console him.. he was such a baby at times..

Something somwer was getting cleared in my head.. somewer I felt he felt the same for me as I feel for him..

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'I have to go..' I said picking up my bag..

He smiled weakely.. bt I cud clearely read he wanted me to stay but I had 2 go.. I had to..

I took out a gift frm my bag.. and handed it to him.. he amazed..

But again he was guilt.. as if I don't y..

'kunwar muje pata hai u don't have a gud bye gift fr me.. but I wanted 2 give it to u..'

'im sorry shaks muje laga..'

'ki tumse mile bager mei chali jaongi ??'

He sighed and smiled..

'best friends ?? aren't we ??' I asked cupping his face..

'take care kunwar.. ab mei yahan nhi rahoongi toh hawa mei mat udna samje!! And keep calling me or else wapas aane ke baa dil surely strangle u to death..' I laughed as tears collected on my eyes..

I kissed his forhead..

Nd looked deep in his eyes..

'shaks u better leave.. kya pata NYC mei tera prince charming tere liye wait kar rha ho'

I was stunned wid his sudden words.. WTH was tat ?? HUH duffer!!!! Achanak ?? I can nevr understand dis confused soul seriously!!!

I kissed his cheeks and whispered.. 'may be.. im waiting .. for my prince.. –kunwar'

I said as I left out of the house.. and once again looking back I said 'il miss u..' and I left..

He was stunned.. I cud realise tat…

'I wish tum mera ishara samaj paate kunwar.. ur my prince.. im waiting u ..!!! gadha.. I knw u will never say !! may b not or may b yes..! *sigh

I went to airport..

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'may be.. im waiting.. for my prince.. kunwar ??'

Yeh kya tha ??

Shaks I wish I cud have told u before! I wish ..

I opened the gift.. it was photo frame..

it was pic.. basically this was taken when all our DID frenz including mukti wer playing truth or dare..

shaks was randomely asked 'whom do love ?' well tat time I remember she was single.. *sigh how I anticipated thinking she wud say my name..*sigh..

so wen she was about to answer she looked at me.. and our eyes met.. and mukti had clicked dis pic.. I don't remember when was the lst time I saw dis pic.. but today she had given it to me.. I smiled.. but it had a caption down..

'only u.. forever'

I froze..

I dint understand what did tat mean.. but recollecting the situation.. I understood THIS WAS HER ANSWER!! DAMMIT!!!!!

All I remember after that was running in the streets of Mumbai toward the airport..

I caught up a taxi..

And then recalled one more incident..

'shaks!! Mere life aisa kuch nhi hone wala alright!!'

'hoga!!'

'shaks for god sake its not a movie!!!'

'I knw! Lekin tum bahut fimly ho! On tat basis trust me.. ek din tum apne love ke liye airport toh zaroor baag ke jaoge!! I BET!!'

'will c!! I have never lost the bet! Shaks tum har jaogi!!'

'will c kunwar mark my words'

I chuckeled how it had cum true!! I asked the taxi driver to make it fast..

It was already 5.45.. DAMNN!!

Fimlom mei kitna asaan hai!!!they wud reach somehow but real life mei itna asaan nhi hai.. in movies its obvious yaa toh hero sahi waqt pe pahunch jayega ya fir heroin apna flight cancel kardegi.. but real life mei NO WAYS!! What shud I do now!! Argghhh

'BHAIYYAA PLS PLS TEJ CHALAU!!!!plss!!!!'

And then there u go TRAFFIC BLOCK!! Shaks trust me once I confess I will surely take badla from u!!! ab tumare liye pagalon ki tarah BAAGNA PADEGA!!! Huh!!!

I paid the taxi and ran..

Ran ran ran.. 2 minutes to 6pm!

I reached the arrival terminal instead of departure HOGAYA SATYNAASH!!!!

Somehow I manged to reach to the departure terminal.. but *sigh by then all the passengers wer already on their way towards the plane.. they dint allow me to get in.. but jab BHAI police mei hot oh kuch toh faida honi chahiye na ??

Finally I reached wer shaks ki maa, mukti and neeti wer standing.. I tried to peep if shaks was ther.. but I cud c her back..

No please don't expect me to scream..

She turned after my million prayers to god.. she smiled..

'I knew it kunwar tum aoge'

Shaks is evry far away from kunwar.. both of them cant hear wat they are saying..

'GOSH!! U won shaks..! u won..the bet.. im here running all the way..! only for u.. nd it will b only u.. forever.. I promise..'

She smiled again and I smiled back wid a tear in my eye..

I took my fone and msgd her..

'u won the bet shakku bai!! U won..!!'

I knew she wud understand.. this.. and I sent another msg.. 'it was.. it is.. and it will be only u.. forever..!'

I indicated her to check her fone.. she nodded and disappeared..

'DAMN!! Kunwar tu b na.. jaake ILU nhi bol skte the like SRK..' mukti said half dreamingly and half cursing.. I sighed and shook my disbelivingly.. usse kya pata yahan tak baag ke aane mei meri jaan hi chali gayi thi.. lekin SRK probably 10-12 bara takes to le hi lega.. and me I did it all in one! Isn't tat great ??

I chuckled as I went out of the airport..


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review time!! hit the like button and dont forget to review.. lemme c how many likes will i get for dis chapter 😉😉


lov ya all thnkx for all the reviews until now🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsm update nams

Finally kunwar got what is it in shaks heart

Thanx for pm
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago

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