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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update.i always loved blushing sharon.sharey convo was cute,n i really liked new couple shita instead of taarey...next time please pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shahdevanshi

lved d update...pls update sun...and pm me...


thnx..update vll b done soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyy guyzz..sorry we noe we din't update for many days..we r extremly sorry actually wer a bit busy..SORRY 😭..so hers's d nxt part..

4th chapter..

In d rehersal hall..
Swayam :tanni itni late kyu ho gyi tum ??*angry lulk*
Tanni:btaya na bhai..vo notes lene gyi thi..aap itna kyu gussa ho rhe ho
Swayam calms dwn..
Swayam: sorry,tanni vo ..vo shivam..uhh chodo..thk tm baitho
Tanni:bhai ..shivam??!!kaun tha..
Neha :sir dard he is..
Tanni: kyu?? *curious luk*
Bharat:aare dushman h vo hamara'
Tanni:..dushman..??..
Nilesh:dushman nhi sbse bada dushman..usse ki vajah se (*luks @sharon*..She luks a bit disturbed..he dsn't speak further)
Tanni : use ki vajah se kya??..
Swayam angry n frustrated..
Swayam:*almost shouting*Tanni tumhe kamm krna h toh karo nhi toh mat kro'v all hv to prepare fr an upcoming..so kya tum plz hume kamm krne dogi???
Everybody shocked..
Tanni :so..so..sorry bhai..vo aap log ko gussa dekha toh pucha..sorry..
Goes n sits in a corner
Neha: swayam why u scolding tanni??..shivam ka gussa is pe kyu nikal rhe ho..
Rey:yaa dude..she is ri8..uss shivam ka gussa tanni pe kyu nikal rhe ho..
Swayam:sorry tanni vo..
Tanni cuts in between
Tanni: its okay bhai chodiye na..
Swayam :I dun noe guyzz'isko pure Mumbai mei srf hamara hi clg mila join krne ko..i mean jo kch hua'usne jo kch kiya Sharon ke sath..
Sharon turns and luks at swayam..
Swayam realizes his mistake and bites his tongue
Everybody coughs n ahm ahem n ol..
Rey:swayam jo kch hua vo sb ke sath hua..tujhe nhi lagta ki Sharon ke sath ham per bhi thodi sympathy dikhani chahiye tujhe..*mischievous luk*
Swayam:aare mera matlb tha ki..ki..sharon n grp!..ha ha..mai bol hi raha tha ki tumne beech mei rok diya..
Nilesh:pr dude hmne toh kch nhi kaha tha..vo toh tu Sharon ko dekhne mei "busy" ho gaya tha ..
Vicky:ha ha..ankhoon mei doob gaya tha..
Everyone:ooo
Sharon glares at niCky bt cannot stop a small smile cumng on hr face
Swayam:guyzz tumlog kch zyaada hi films dekhne lage ho!!...
Sharon:yess gys..ab kch kamm kare..
Vishakha:luks like sum1 is being supportive..ohho..
Bharat:ha toh uss din swyam ne uss shivam ko kya patak patak ke maara tha
Vicky:ha toh koi uski laila ke sath panga le toh uska majnu kaise chup rhega
Sharon blushes bt turns around to hide hr face
Swayam:guyzz..u ppl r seriously crazy!!..
Tanni(voiceover):ye shivam h kaun jisko bhai ne maara tha..bhai toh kabhi gussa nhi hote h..hmm)
Rey: okay guyzz bht mazak uda liya..ab thoda charity event pe bhi focus krna chahiye,so wat do u guys thk..hm sab ko kya krna chahiye,paisa collect krna ke liye??..hmm'.
Vicky:fete!
Sharon:Vicky hm scul mei nhi h!!!...fete nhi kr skte..
Vicky:bt kitna mazza aata tha..ghumne mei..ice-creams,sandwiches n..iss baar deewani ke sath ghumne mei kitna aaccha lagta
Neha:aww..cute you r babu
Vicky:but sbse cute tum ho kagu..
N they start praising each other..they wer disturbd by d bell..
Rey:guyzz bell banj chuki h..tym fr d lecture ..baad mei decide krte charity evnt ke bare mei..
Nilesh:hmm guyzz chalo
Everybody shocked..
Swayam:tu kab se cls jaldi jaane laga??
Nilesh:aare aur thoda deri iska*pointing at Vicky * ka drama dekha na toh ,toh mai pagla jaoonga..subh se kagu ye kagu vo..deewani ye deewani vo kr rha h
Vicky:aare meri deewani ke bare kch mat bolna!!
Nilesh:ha ha ekdum nhi..deewani n uska psycho deewana..n shws tongue n teases Vicky
Vicky runs aftr nilesh n they both went outside d rehearsal hall
Evey1 share a small laugh 😆 n then leave fr d classes

IN DEHRADUN:

A girl is lying unconsciously on a bed with white pillows and sheets. Tablets and syrups surround her and she has been bandaged around her wrist. Her mother sits nearby in a tool and holds her hand firmly, not wanting her to go. A tear escapes her mother's eye and runs down her cheek as she remembers the happenings of that day.

*FLASHBACK*

In the morning-

Girl- maa, I really don't wanna eat anything. U plz go to your office na..

Mother- arey but beta, kuch toh kha lo. Kriya tumne kal sham se kuch ni khaya..plz kch toh kha lo..

Kriya- theek hai maa...main kch der me pakka kch kha loongi. Ab aap jao maa aapko late ho rha h..

Mother- acha thk hai, lekin pakka tum khana zaroor. Fridge me juice hai, bread hai, fruits hai.. jo mann kre kha lena..

Kriya- thk hai maa..ab aap jao plzz'

And then she pushes her mum out of the door.

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

Mother- *sighs* kash maine tumhe aaj yu ghar par na choda hota. Tum itni weak ho gyi thi still maine tumhe akela chod diya..sry beta..sry..

She tightens her grip and holds kriya even more firmly and keeps her head on her hand. She keeps mumbling sry as she remembers what she saw when she came back from office.

*FLASHBACK*

She came back home from the office and ran the door bell a several times. No one responded from inside. She gave Kriya a call but she just heard her daughter's cell ringing from inside. She brought the spare key of the house from her neighbor and quickly placed it in the key hole. She twisted the key and the door felt open. She pushed the door and saw no one in the hall. She threw her bag on the sofa and ran towards Kriya's room. The room was empty too. She saw the bathroom door locked and went to the kitchen. The scene in the kitchen was horrifying. Her daughter lay on the floor, unconscious. A knife was nearby all wet in the blood drooping continuously from her wrist. She ran towards her, bent on her knees and pulled Kriya tightly into a hug. She ran quickly to the drawing room, picked the receiver of the telephone and carelessly dialed a hospital's number. The ambulance came after some time and she was shifted to the hospital.

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

The tears from kriya's mother's eye now ran continuously just as her blood had been running a few hours earlier. Her mother lifts her head and dries off her tears from the corner of her duppata. Soon Kriya gains back her consciousness. She slowly opens her eyes and sees a blurring image of her mother crying. She begins to speak'

Kriya- maa.. I'm sry maa..

Her mother keeps a finger on her lips and says..

Mother- shhh'u need rest now. We'll talk later. Relax..

Kriya closes her eyes back'


BACK IN MUMBAI:


After the class:

Sharon- rey..r u free now??..

Rey- yupp..

Sharon- swayam u??..

Vicky- obviously Sharon.. Swayam tere liye kabhi busy rehta h kya..??...

He nudges nilesh and they have a high five. Sharon blushes but then ignoring their teases asks Swayam again.

Sharon- swyam??.. busy ho??..

Sw- nai..kch kaam tha??..

Sh- haan wo main soch rhi thi ki abi free period h toh charity event ka kch discuss kr le.

Sw- hmm..okay..

Rey- cool..so lets go.

They leave for the rehearsal hall. While going, Swayam excuses himself and goes to the boys' locker room. Rey and Sharon go to the rehearsal hall.

Sharon- ugh..vicky aor nil kabhi nhi sudhrenge. Kahi bhi kabhi bhi shuru ho jate h..

Rey- haan..par tumhe bhi toh passand h na..

Sharon- arey..mujhe kab ye acha lagne lag gya??..

Rey- acha.. toh tum hamesha blush ko krti rehti ho jab gang tum dono k bare me kch bolta h..

Sh- rey main blush nhi krti..(still blushing☺️, her head is down)

Rey- c'mon Sharon. U r still blushing. Look..

He makes her stand infront of the mirror. She tucks her hair behind her hair then slowly raises her head and sees her reflection in the mirror. She looks pink. She turns around to reply rey.

Sh- no rey.. aisa kch ni h..swayam k..

She stops mid way saying this when she sees swayam standing near the door.

swayam- mere bare me kch baat ho rha hai??..

He walks in.

rey- haan..sharon tere bare me hi bol rhi thi ki...

sharon interupts in between..

sharon- ki tum itna late kyo laga rhe ho.

swayam- hmm..yani tumhe mujjhe dekhne ka mann kr rha tha??..

sharon again starts blushing and looks down.

sharon- dekhne ka mann ni kr rha tha..wo..wo toh hume late ho rha tha na..discussion k liye..islie..haan bas issi liye..

swayam- still...sun k khushi hui ki tum mere bare me baat kr rhi thi ..

sharon raises her head and fixes her sight on swayam 's eyes.. those charming beautiful eyes which hypnotized sharon for the umpteenth time. She didn't replied swayam but just kept staring at those eyes. Swayam also din't say anything.. he was happy that sharon was looking into his eyes. He hoped that she might see his love for her in those moments. Rey saw the 2 lost in each other and thought to himself.." they both are so madly in love with each other.. yet why aren't they together.. they should be together.. they are meant to be with each other.. they are the perfect match.. and i'l make sure that they come together.. that they be together forever... " Rey didn't wanted to disturb them but they had to discuss for the event so he tried to bring them back from their dreams.

Rey- ahem ahem.. sharon.. umm..discuss krna shuru kre.. ab toh swayam bhi aa gya..

Both come back from their fantasies.

sharon- haan toh maine kab roka hai..lets start..

And then they start working. While working, there were many moments when sharon wanted to admire swayam but resisted herself from doing it as she knew that rey would make fun of her if he sees it. But swayam din't minded those teases. He looked at sharon whenever he wanted to.. admired her as much as he wanted and fell into love with sharon all over again a million times. Well.. he actually fall in love with Sharon every time he sees her, even more than before. At times, when swayam was looking at her and sharon turned to look at him.. their eyes would meet and a magic would be created. When the work is over, they pack their things.

Sharon- hmm..chalo..itna kaam toh ho gya. Baki kaam kal krenge..

rey- yeah..it was a hectic day..

Sharon- okay then..bye..

Rey- bye sharon...

sharon- bye swayam..

Swayam gets confused as it was the first time that Sharon had told him bye. their eyes meet again and sharon realizes what she just spoke. She gets embarrassed 😳 and she turns around to leave but before she could go swayam replied..

Swayam- bye Sharon..

Sharon turns around and gets even more embarrassed when she sees swayam smiling. She quickly turns back and fled away.

rey- oho..kya baat hai.. Sharon ne aj tumhe khud bye bola..

He gives a pat on swayam's back.

swayam- kabhi kabhi toh main bhi usse nhi samajh pata..

together- girls..!!

they share a laugh and then bid each other farewell.

Rey walks out f d rehersall hall and goes to the atrium.

Rey(voiceover):shit!..ye papers ko toh vice prini ci se sign karne the'hmm abhi krwa leta hun..abhi toh clg mei hi honge..
He walks towards vice princi's office
Bt he stops in his track wen he sees shivam entering vp's office
Rey(voiceovr):ye shivam vp ke office kyu jaa rha h..khi complain??!!..nahi complain toh nahi karega' bt u can't expect anything frm him,I shud btr chek kya kar raha h vo
He went near vp's office n cautiously peeped through d window,he cud see them n cud also hear thm talking
In vp's office..
Vp:r u sure u want to participate in d charity event..i don't thnk those ppl like you..
Shivam :I noe sir bt I vl manage,afterol I hv to stay in dis clg..n I genuinely want to help in d charity event
Vp:okay..as u wish bt tell me if u have any problem
Shivam:yess sir,definately ..okay sir I shud leave now its tym for my next class
Vp:okay ,u may leave
Shivam ws abt to leave ,wen vp called him
Vp:bt I thnk u shud reconsider u decision shivam..i won't b able to help u alwaz beta
Shivam:don't worry dad..everythings fine..
Shivam leaves vp's office
Rey sees shivam cumng out n thus moves away from d window
Rey(voiceover):dad!!!!..vp sir shivam ke dad h!!!!..god no wondr isse iss clg mei itni easily admission mill gyi'ab pata chal vo uss din isko n isko frnz ko kyu support kr rhe the n hamari baat nhi sun rhe the.Gosh ab hume sab wrks mei iss include krna padega or else vp vl kill us'hmmm .I shud btr tell every1 abt it.



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u cn throw joota chappals tomatoes n eggs..we noe its not nic..bt sorry we cud not write anythng btr than ths dimag mei kch nhi aa rha tha choory..😭

still..do like and comment..😉

Edited by muzzy_sk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update. Sharon Swayam scene are way too cute. And just loved the way Swayam lost control and shouted at Tani. And now waiting eagerly to see Kriya's trak to be included too the main story soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesumm updt...
loved the teasin session of the gang...
nd wat happened to kria...gosh
Vp is shivam's dad...wat more twists r on the way
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update 👍🏼 Loved Swaron moments. Rey teasing sharon and sharon blushing because of swayam is very cute.
Loved how you wrote Swayam falls in love with Sharon every time he sees her and even more than before.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I loved the fact that the update was long...It's so cute that the whole gang teases SwaRon...My fav bit was ShaRey's convo in the rehearsal hall !! And Shivam is VP's son...that's an interesting twist..Looking forward to the next update !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update..it was reallie cute
loved ShaRey'sconvo in d rehearsel hall..
n sharon blushng..awwiee it was so cute
n dat shivam is vp's son..
Update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
felt bad for kriya
plz kriya ka track jaldi shuru karo
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update 😊😊😊

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