NEW FANFIC of jai&bani 18/07 part11 added

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 5

After the phone…….. jai look at bani who is very tense but does say anything…….. jai reach out to get a glass of water…….. but cause of his hand he couldn't …………. And bani come there and help he to get a glass of water ……………. While bani giving him a glass of water jai just stare at her……………..

Jai: bani phone pe kyon tha

Bani don't know what to say: who wrong number tha……………….

Jai look at her with the expression that he knew that she was lying …. But does says anything…….and goes to sleep………….. bani who look very sad lie on her side of the bed …………….. but thinking: cause of me mr walia's life is in danger…………. Oh god help my I don't know what to do ……….. who is this man why is he doing like this…………….

Next morning bani wake up and see jai ……… when he is trying to put on his shirt but he can't cause of his hand…………..bani stand up

Bani: mr walia do you need help……………coming near him

Jai: no it ok ……………….. and try but he can't………………… bani seeing this goes near him ………

Bani: let me do it…………….

Jai just stare at her while she lift jai's hand and help him wear his shirt and then she put on his scarf …………. Meanwhile jai is just looking at her…………

Bani: mr walia can I says something

Jai: yes ……….with a hope…….

Bani: don't go office today………..

Jai : what ……………….. smile appear on his face as he thought like bani want him to stay……………… seeing his face….. and says: mr walia your hand is hurt and it would be better if you stay at home and rest………………….

Jai expression changes again to a dull one and reply: I have to go ………….. and goes from there……….

As jai leave the room bani receive a message again says………….. if ypu can stop your husband from going out of the house or otherwise………………..

Reading this bani get scary and run after jai:

Jai is about to sit in car………… where bani come out calling his name………….

Bani: mr walia………… mr walia………….

Jai surprise and stand there……

Jai: what happen bani why are you running like this ……….. you should n't run like this at this stage……………..

Bani keep looking at him………..

Jai; bani now tell me what is it…………..

Bani not knowing what to say…….just repeat herself and says: you should stay cause of your health……………

Jai with a lower tone: nothing is wrong with my health and what would I do staying at home………….. turn to go…….

Bani: mr walia

Jai: nahi bani

Bani think of something: mr walia ……..jai turn around

Jai: what bani

Bani: woh I have to go to nursing home and masi says …………. After a phase that you have to come with me…………..

Jai look a bit happy: ok so that was the reason ………… you should have tell me before…………..then i……….

Bani: I will get ready…………. Go in the house and follow by jai……..

Bani get ready and they go to the nursing home for check up…………..

They reach there………………… but bani told jai……………….

Mr walia you stay here

Jai who have a shock look ………………….. yes you stay here I will go In alone

You don't need to come ………………….saying this she goes …………….. and jai eyes well up with tears………………..

He went a stand to a side lost in thought………………. At the background the music aadat start playing…………..

Bani done her check up and her baby is 3 months old ………..

Doctor : every thing is fine mrs walia…………..

Bani smile: ok……………….

And come out of the room and walk toward the exist door where she again receive a message says: if you can then safe your husband………………

Reading this she run out of the nursing home………… bani look around but can't find jai

Jai who is lost thought don't' know a van coming toward him very fast………

Bani notice this and then see jai standing in there she start ruining toward him and calling out: mr walia ath jaye hai………………. Mr walia move from there……….. but jai couldn't hear anything ………….. and the van is coming very close when bani reach there and pull jai toward her and the van drive off………………..

Bani in anger tone: mr walia appko kya howa tha ………………… couldn't you see the van was coming toward you ……………….. jai is shock and stareing at her……………. And she continue ………………….. if anything happen to you then what would i………….she stop there and stare at jai…………..

Jai: bani……….. I did know the van was coming toward me………………I am sorry ………in lower tone…………….. bani give him a look and says: let go home…………….

Jai notice that something is not right…………………

In the car bani receive another message………………. This time you have safe him but not next time………………………

Bani look horrifying………………… seeing bani jai ask : what happen bani ……………

Bani shake and says: nothing………………. But jai notice and says: when ever the phone rings you get like this let me see what is it on …………….. get the phone of bani……………. And read the message………..

He is shock …………….

Jai: bani what is this………………….

Bnai tell him every thing………………

Listening to this he is shock and think who could it be…………………….

I have to go I will continue soon.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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please continue sooooooooon...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ohhhhhhhhhhhh myyyyyyyyy goddddddddddd.. that was soo goodd.. plz cont soon!!! 👏
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good job... plz continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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who could it be?

finally he knows!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i bet its roshini 😡
plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow!!

i have a request.. is it possible for u to keep ur ff together in one post, coz i
love to re read ffs..!! so is it possible u do that for me and rest...

please do continue!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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loved the suspense
pls cont soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 6

Jai is shock……………………
Jai: bani why didn't you tell me before………… all those incident were not accident they were don't by some one……………
Bani: mr walia I don't know who it is ……………….but that person……………want to kill me………..
Jai: nahi bani nothing would happen to you…….. I will find out how it could be…………
And I think I know how it is…………..
Bani with a question look: who can it be………………..
Jai: roshani………………..
Bani: roshani……………… but the person who call's it a man…………
Jai: so what she can make some one to do that………….
Bani: but how could she when she is not here …………………. She is in USA …………..
Jai: then who can it be…………… then he called …………
Hello police station……… mr walia here………
Police: oh hello sir
Jai: I want full security outside the walia mansion now…………
Police: ok sir I will do that right now
Jai: thank you…………….

Jai look at bani : let go home……………..
Bani: ji

They reach to the walia house and the police security was there…………..
Police: hello mr walia they way you wanted that now I am arrange the security …..
Jai: thank you………..
Then jai and bani went inside…………
Masi look at them and thinking everything has gone alright between them
Masi: you both have come back ………
Bani: ji masi
Masi: what did the doctor say……….
Jai looking at bani for answer as well……….
Bani: nothing much ……..the baby is normal………..
Masi thank god and tell bani that she should go and rest………….
Bani go to her bedroom………
Bani sitting on her bed when she sees someone reflection on the mirror ................ and near the window………..
She turn around to see who it was…………… but she can see any one………….. So she went near the window …………….. and look around to see ……………… suddenly one appear in front of her………….. she is too shock……………..
The person have a gun on him and his face is cover with a mask……
Bani scream: mr waliaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Listening to this jai run to his room…………………
The guy point the gun toward bani………………………. But then jai reaches in time and throw a vase at that guy……………… to which the guys gun fall out of this hand…………… and he start to run out of the window……………….. jai also run but then the security guide run after him and shooting at him to stop him…………….
Jai go to bani and ask her: are you ok…………….
Bani stay silence……………. Jai: bani are you ok… going near her and put his hand on bani's cheeks …………………
Bani hug jai and her eyes well up with tears…………..
Jai: bani it ok now the guide have gone after him ………..you don't worry……..
Bani look up at him ………… and they both have an eye contact when ….
Masi come in with a very worried tone ask: bani bahu are you ok ………….. why didn't your tell me………….
Bani doesn't say anything as she was scary………….
Jai: masi it ok now the guide have gone after him he would be soon in jail………….. masi: ok jai …………… you take care of her ……………… goodnight………..

Masi leaves……………….. jai tell bani to rest………….. and take her to the bed………and make her lie down………….. and jai stand up to go get change when bani hold his hand and say: mr walia stay here…….. I feel very scary ………….. stay near me………..holding his hand very tight………………
Looking at here condition jai sit back on the bed and tell bani: do worry I wouldn't go any where ok now you go to sleep……………….bani keep a hold on his hand and when to sleep………..

In the morning bani wake up finding herself in jai's arms……………….she look up at him and a smile appear on her face ……………….then there was a knock on the door which wake jai up as well………………. And he got up to go and open the door while bani get up and go to the bathroom ………..
Jai open the door and it was the police and he said: good morning mr walia
Jai: good morning
Police: the guy who come inside the house last night we has catch him and his name is Sami….. and I come here to tell you that now there is no danger…………………
Jai: oh thank you……….
Police: it my duty mr walia…………..
Then the police leave ……….. bani come out of the bathroom …………..
Jai look at bani: bani it was the DCP
Bani with a wooried look: what did he said
Jai: he said that they have got that guy and now there is nothing to worry about……..
Bani look bit relaxe ………….. and jai trun around to go to the bathroom when bani says: thanks mr walia
Jai: thanks for what ……………. Coming toward bani
Bani: for lastnight …………thanks for giving me support………..
Jai look at her and says: bani your are my wife and giving you support it my…………. He stop there bani keep look at him…………….. but then tony knock and come in
Tony: mr walia ……… mr abbay has come and want to meet you……….
Jai: ok I will be there…………..

In the hall

Jai: hello abbay
Abbay: hello jai
Jai: how come you are here………..
Abbay: I come to know how is bani as she has been attack
Jai: how do you know all this………….
Abbay: ohh I ask the guide out side………….any way I have come her to tell you that I will be going USA for some work for 5 months…………

Jai: ok ………………

Abbay: ok then I will leave now…………..bye see you after 5 months………….

Jai: ok bye………….

In the police station some one come to meets sami……………
Sami: sab I have done what you said ……….
That guy : I know and here is your award ………….. handing sami 2 laks……… when he hands Sami 2laks the guy is wearing white gloves……………….

Sami: thank you sir ……….. and then the other guy leave…………….

5 months later……………….

Where bani is on her 8 months pregnancy………..
Thing are going quit well with her and jai's relationship but then roshani come back from USA…………

See what going to happen when roshani come back? Would she do anything or not……….

Please reply back………….. thank you.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very gooooooooood

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