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Posted: 13 years ago
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before bashing me out hear it Barun is not doing any new show this is my 1st FF and its totally diff from the plot of IPKKND, only Barun is common in it.
I got this idea when I saw video of Barun and Panchi Bora (kitni mast hain jindagi and kayamath) in their ad together, they really looked good together. the title I am weak at this so anyone can suggest m.😆
ok here it goes:

cast:
Barun Sobti as Dr.Barun Singh. He is only son of his parents and ghar ka laadla.
Panchi Bora as Panchi Ahuja later Singh. She is the eldest daughter with two small sister and one small brother.
Karan Wahi as Karan Kumar. He is Panchi's ex-boyfriend.
other cast will be revealed in the story...

Story:
1st scene:
It's a wedding night. A big day for Barun. He is getting married. It is arranged, his mother is too happy. She also likes the girl. Barun was 1st unsure about this relation ship but when he met Panchi, he instantly fell for her.
Flashback
Barun, a little nervous infront of mirror-"Hi, I am Barun, mein Life Care Hospital mein as senoir consultant kaam karta hu"..."tsk, jyada posy ho gaya ...hmm ok, hi I am Barun mein ek doctor hu, aap kya karta hain ya aap kya padrahi hain"
just then his mother enters- "kya hua kya kar rahe ho, tie to thik se lagao(making his tie) haye mera beta kitna aacha lagraha hain" (Barun shares a beautiful relation with his mother, he is his mother's laadla.)
In Panchi's house, Barun and his family arrive. Panchi's father_"aaiya aaiya andar aaiya bhethiya na mein abhi Panchi ko bulata hu"..."are Mrs Ahuja, jara Panchiko bulayi".
Panchi in red and golden anarkalisuit steps down the stairs. She is no different from an angel. Barun is left startled. Oh love at first site. He felt she is made for him he for her. Both family decide to leave them alone together. They talk a little. Barun shares everything from his 1st smoke to 1st gf. He sees Panchi a little tensed. He tries to ask her if any thing is wrong.
Barun:kya hua aapki tabiyaat to thik hain na, mein kab se bole ja ra ha hu aap bhi kuch boliye na, kya karti hain aap, aapki pasand na pasand kya hain"
Panchi: ji, ji mein thik hu, mein abhi final yr mein padhai karrahi hu, kuch mahiney baad board hain uskey baad padhai khattam ho jayegi, ji mujhey padhney ka aur painting ka bahut soukh hain
Barun: to padhai k baad kya plan hain aapka
Panchi: pata nahi, aage ka socha nahin hain meiney
Barun:(smiles)you know yeh arrange marriage ka funda mujhey samaj mein nahin aata tha, aap meri ma ko bahut pasand hain, aur aaj aapko dekhkar mujhey bhi aap bahut pasand aayi.
Hearing this Panchi was too surprised.
Barun: dekhiye jyatatar gharmomein meiney dekha hain ladkiyon pe bahut pressure hota hain, aapki raye mere bare mein jo bhi hain aap mujhey saaf saaf bata saktey hain. Aage jake koi bhi misunderstanding na rahe.
Panchi is abt to say something, her mother comes and tell them to come downstairs everyone is waiting. Barun then leaves.
Back to wedding, everything is settled, Barun's mother do puja and sends off the baarat. Here Panchi is getting ready. But she is not happy. Some girls come running and shout baraat aagayi. Everyone leaves then Panchi opens one of the drawer of her dressing table, takes out one bottle and drinks it. Barun is welcomed. He sits in the mandaap. Panchi is brought. She is looking awesomely beautiful. Marun just stares at her. The red colour, the mehendi every thing si perfect. The marriage is over. Panchi looks pale. Everyone thinks its due to hectic process of marriage. So they quickly do bidaai. Panchi cries a lothugs her mother, bids goodbye to her father, caresses her sisters. She sits in the car and her small brother pushes it. She last time says to him-" padhai thik se karna aur mummy papa ka khayal rakhna".
She does not look good. Barun puts her hand on her hand. she is too cold. Barun looks at her. She faints on his shoulder.

this is it for now, if you like it press "like button" do comment and tell me if it is good and should i continue

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sikhni_ thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow panchi n barun ,,both r ma fav ...nice start continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear... Lovd it. U hav to hav to continue. I just love Barun- Prachi ads.. They r so cute together...!! Love to read a different story...!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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---- pregnant 🤪 -----------

😉 vo karan ka bacha ...

lol ..i like him too .he is too chocolateee ...actually starberry

continue ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice continue😊 curious abt her what she drank n what happens to her?? hey add pics of all the character... it will look gd n reader like me who dnt know panchi and karan can imagine scene and face while reading
thanks for pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lolz when i saw the title i was like but now i am like 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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God plz continue very nice dear.. waiting fo your next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey nice story... plz cont..!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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niceee...i love this new show :DDD...plzzz continueee:)))))))))))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: veenuasr

Nice continue😊 curious abt her what she drank n what happens to her?? hey add pics of all the character... it will look gd n reader like me who dnt know panchi and karan can imagine scene and face while reading
thanks for pm..



actually i do not know how to put pictures otherwise I would have done that, can you teach me

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