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rev4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

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For a moment, I thought it was Viren but then when I saw the dates I realized it was not him. After reading your comments, made senses. It was so beautifully written and Jeevika-Virat relationship is simply amazing. How she relieved him from the burden that he was carrying about being the cause of his dad's demise.

Loved it alot

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Maya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

OMG OMG OMG!!! This is superb!!! I swear, you HAVE to write more...Have to! Its unbelievably awesome!

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Sarah Ashraf

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Posted: 13 years ago

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You're amazing with these os's. How great would it be to have an os from you every week or two ;) i think im asking for too much. And well you did write one recently. Still its sheer pleasure reading your stories. The emotions and relationships are so beautifully described in your stories that i can never praise you enough. Thanks for the lovely time that i spend reading these :)

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Loveleen Brar

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Ok so like I said in your Violet Hill OS I had read this one the first time you posted it also but was not a member then so now am replying.

Aww that was so sweet and kinda funny, kinda cute. A bunch of mixed emotions actually. I would love to see this kind of Devar-Bhabi bonding in the show. It was so sweet how Virat was more attached to the baby than Jeevika was. It was like their dream.

There was not much involvement of Viren and Manvi in it so it was very different an angle that we never get to see in indian serials. But truly I would love to see Jeevika and Virat this comfortable with each other. It was so cute. Something completely new.

I love how you want the show to explore aspects of relationships never explored before some that are kind of just there to be there with no real emotions and connection.

Loved it. Keep writing and update the others soon.

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Latika Gurung

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

I love to see this type of chemistry of devar-bhabi in the show also...i loved ur os please continue soon...

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ehmmbh_luvr

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Posted: 13 years ago

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i luvd it n i must say u r superbly talented...u,ve written some awesome stuff yr...both parts wre so heart touching...u must continue!😃

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..Zainab..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

wow!!! update soon nd pm me

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delete1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: rev4eva
For a moment, I thought it was Viren but then when I saw the dates I realized it was not him. After reading your comments, made senses. It was so beautifully written and Jeevika-Virat relationship is simply amazing. How she relieved him from the burden that he was carrying about being the cause of his dad's demise.

Loved it alot

Yeah, typo with the dates, had to go back and edit :L I really wish V-J were like this onscreen, hasn't been much development relationship wise :P Thanks for the comment rev =]

Originally posted by: Khushnav
OMG OMG OMG!!! This is superb!!! I swear, you HAVE to write more...Have to! Its unbelievably awesome!

Oh, thank you :) That's really sweet :) I will deffo write some more in the future =]

Originally posted by: aa_mnhs
You're amazing with these os's. How great would it be to have an os from you every week or two ;) i think im asking for too much. And well you did write one recently. Still its sheer pleasure reading your stories. The emotions and relationships are so beautifully described in your stories that i can never praise you enough. Thanks for the lovely time that i spend reading these :)

Hey Sarah :) As much as I would love to do the regular OS's, I'm really really really sorry because I'm not half as committed as Amitoj is with hers :L Thank you for reading my OS's, bringing out of the graveyard of the forum lol. Thanks once again, I've really been enjoying reading your comments today =]

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delete1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: loveleen12
Ok so like I said in your Violet Hill OS I had read this one the first time you posted it also but was not a member then so now am replying.

Aww that was so sweet and kinda funny, kinda cute. A bunch of mixed emotions actually. I would love to see this kind of Devar-Bhabi bonding in the show. It was so sweet how Virat was more attached to the baby than Jeevika was. It was like their dream.

There was not much involvement of Viren and Manvi in it so it was very different an angle that we never get to see in indian serials. But truly I would love to see Jeevika and Virat this comfortable with each other. It was so cute. Something completely new.

I love how you want the show to explore aspects of relationships never explored before some that are kind of just there to be there with no real emotions and connection.

Loved it. Keep writing and update the others soon.

Aw, I'm glad you're a member now because I freakin' love your comments, they really do bring a smile to my face :)

I wanted the first part to be a bit comical cause my aunt was honestly ranting and raving her head off when she gave birth to my little cousin and poor me had to witness her 'tamasha' :L The second, I guess I wrote on a whim. I got kinda bored with my fanfic so I thought might as well revisit some old material and that kinda came to life.

I think Virat would be a hands on uncle; he absolutely loves Viren to death and in my head, he'd be on par with Viren in terms of how much they spoilt the kid. And plus when I wrote this, it was straight after the wedding so you know, there was tons of scope of where the characters could go; unfortunately according to the current track, not so much :L

As for Jeevika, she's strong, she's lived a hard life filled with misery and heart break as has Virat. In my mind, Jeevika's still mourning but this is her way where she spends her thoughts in the world in her head where it's just her and her son. And yeah, with Manvi and Viren involvement, it's go off on a completely different tangent so I thought best to leave it to the simplicity of what Jeevika and Virat could have. (And plus, once you've been through freakin' labour with someone, I think it's pretty obvious you will feel closer to that person :L)

I love how you ended with that because I think it just sums me up :) If the CVs don't give us depth then I guess it's up to the writers to do it :L Thanks again for your comments, loved reading them today =]

Originally posted by: latika19
I love to see this type of chemistry of devar-bhabi in the show also...i loved ur os please continue soon...

I know how you feel, Devhar-Bhabhi needs to be explored like pronto, there's only so much of wary Jeevika and love sick Virat I can take :L Thanks for commenting =]

Originally posted by: ehmmbh_luvr
i luvd it n i must say u r superbly talented...u,ve written some awesome stuff yr...both parts wre so heart touching...u must continue!😃

I honestly love reading all these comments, they really are touching :) Thank you so much for commenting and appreciating this =]

Originally posted by: littles12
wow!!! update soon nd pm me

Aww thank you for commenting :) I think I'm just gonna leave it as a two part 'coz I have no idea where I'd go with this but thank you for the request =]

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