MG ~( DESTINED LOVE AND PAIN) new thread pg 144 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: cutestar12

Nice prologue cont soon



thank you😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

congratulation for new FF
awesome & interesting start



thank you
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
NICE PROLOGUE... WAITING BUT ONE REQUEST USE ENGLISH DIALOGUES PLZZZ
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
congrats on ur new FF dear...
continue soon
will be waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
prologue
awesome dear...
so Diya is Maan and Geet's baby...
cont soon dear and pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waiting !!!

for next awesome update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ahh sad start

thnx for pm

do cont soon as i don't like to stop reading at mid 😆

much love rose😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start dear!!!!...

Loved it ... plzzz cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
THANK YOU GUYS FOR YOUR LOVE AND SUPPORT...

thanks all who liked and commented
here is the part 1...

NOTE: guys prologue will come after few updates so please bear with my writing



PART 1



It is one of the finest mornings in daarjeeling.The sun is about to rise in the sky . The early morning rays are seeking permission to peep into the room of the sweetest angels cuddling to each other . Little diya is sleeping hugging her mother tightly''''..

(guys imagine this I know I am not good in writing but still I felt this seems to be the adorable scene)

She is hiding her face in the bosom of her mother ... slightly sun rays falls on the face of innocent sleeping beauties , a small smile crept on her lips , she vaguely open her eyes to see her precious life sleeping peacefully by her side . she kissed her cheek and very softly and slowly detangled herself from her , carefully not to disturb her sleep''..

Geet went to the balcony adjoining her room . she sees the most serene sight of sun about to rise there is a orange hue in the sky . She stretched her hands to fill her memories with this place last time''..

Daarjeeling is and will be the most important place in her life''.this place is associated with many sweet recollections of her life'.no their life'her and diya's'..this is the only place where she first time experienced motherhood ''.her little gaurdian angel came to her life''it is the place where she first took diya in her hands '''

Her grief and pain that she had in her life vanished when she saw her for the first time''..

"SHE WAS THE LIKE THE RAY OF LIGHT IN MY DULL LIFE"
"SHE MADE MY LIFE WORTHY"
"TODAY I OWE HER TO MY PAST"

Geet: This place made me to live again '''.but today I have to leave this part of my life''.

My decision to go back to delhi will indeed change some of my decisions that I took before going away from him'''but my baby is now the most important she is the only person in my life whom I can say I have been related''and for her good I will face my past again'..

Her daughter was god's gift to her that she has got after suffering for no reasons'''

She was not responsible for the upheveal that has been caused in their lives three years back''it was him''

Maan'''''..

Geet: I will make sure to keep my away from that pain that I felt ''..my daughter , my baby is not at any fault '..

Geet again consoled herself with full self confidence ''''today she 'll be at the same place where she had been all her life , where she was brought up ''.where she was being loved ''she has gone through the most blissful and worst experiences of her life ''and she had created the memories of the same''

Geet: Today I will be returing to the same place where I was married ''.where I experienced the first dew of love'''his love like the first rain''., my first betrayed which left me shattered''.place where I was subjected to accusations '''

After coming out of her reverie geet went to freshen up and then to wake her princess doll'..

"DESTINY BRINGS US TOGETHER IT PARTS US... WE ARE JUST THE PUPPETS IN THE HANDS OF IT"

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Edited by suhaaana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
next start

bt short update


want long update next time

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