'Run Away(The Everlasting Love)' 'Chap4/5,pg20/24' - Page 3

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Chapter 1

It was Sunday morning; sun was shining brightly in the state of Hyderabad India. It was a state where Urdu speaking Sunni Muslims lived.



"Bhanumati ne kunba jora, kahin ki eent aur kahin ka roar," utters Savita Khan as she passed a scratching comment on the kids of 21st century,While looking at the kids of different religion playing together from her room window. Savita was an elderly woman with a razor sharp tongue and a very short tempered woman. She was a widow of Mr Iqbal Khan and was the elder of the family and she is called as Amma bi. Without her consent nobody is even allowed to breath. Everything in the house runs on her order. She Have two sons Azaan, Zahid and a daughter Irsa.

Azaan was married to Ujala and have two kids Maan and zora While Zahid have two sons' omear and Alayaan.

Savita khan loved her sons more than her daughter. She was a sexist, she give importance to boys than girls. After marrying her daughter Irsa she never even cared to ask her how she was.

Savita asked her daughter in law Ujala who stood beside her with bowed head "when is Maan leaving for Boston?"

Ujala "tonight amma bi" She answered softly.

Savita "Tell him to meet me before leaving."

Ujala "Alright Amma bi"

Savita "Now you may leave and shut the curtains before leaving. I will take a little nap."

Maan being the first grandson was her favorite one. She was really proud of him as he was a responsible, obedient, intelligent and hard working Man. He would never do anything which would lead his family's name down.

Maan was packing his stuff when his mother came in.

Ujala "Maan meet Amma bi before leaving."

Maan "ok Ammi. Aren't you coming to the air port to see me off?"

Ujala "No, My legs are aching so I can't stand for long."

Maan was really annoyed at her mom "Ammi how many times I have to tell you that don't stand in the kitchen for a long time. I don't understand it that why don't amma bi hire a servant after all it's a huge mansion."

Ujala "Maan it's not like that she just likes my cooking and she doesn't trust servants for cooking and don't say anything to Amma bi."

Maan "I know ammi. I don't want to put you in trouble." Ujala patted her sons Cheek and left from there.

Maan was really possessive about his mom but due to her he was quiet because whatever he used to say or complain to amma bi, would always land ujala in trouble. Amma bi would always scold Ujala for that as she would assume that she is turning Maan against her.

Maan came to amma bi's room. He knocked at her room door before entering and said "Assalam o Alaikum amma bi! How are you?"

Savita "Walaikum Assalam! Come on in Maan, I was waiting for you. "

Maan sat on the bed beside her and said "Is there anything important you want to talk about?"

Savita thought for a while and then said "yes dear I just wanted to say that be aware of English women's in Boston and yes keep in mind that you will marry the one I will choose for you. Understand?"

Maan "Yes Amma bi!" though Maan wanted to protest but he couldn't because it will again cause trouble to Ujala.

Savita "Ok now you can go. You must be getting late." Savita kissed Maan's forehead and said "Assalam o Alaikum!"

Maan "Walaikum Assalam!"

Maan then went to meet his Ammi and Abu.

Azaan while hugging Maan said "Give us a call when you reach there."

Ujala "I will miss you ." she kissed his forehead and then huged him.

Maan kissed his mothers cheek and said "I will miss you too Ammi. Take care of yourself."

Zora hugged Maan and started to cry"Maan Bhai I will miss you so much."

Maan hugged her back and said "I will miss you too but don't worry I will be available on cell."

Maan and Zora were like best friend to each other when ever Amma bi would scold Zora he would always save her from her.

Somewhere in Hoshiarpur , India,

It was a small village in the Indian state of Punjab. Mr Rahul Nat was the Prince of that state. He was a really nice and helpful person. Everyone looked at him with pride and respect. Rahul Nat had two sons and two daughters and he loved them all equally. Mohinder , Rijinder,Ria and Reva.

Mohinder was married to Rano and had three kids,Geet,Riji and Brij.

"Come on Geet, we will miss your flight, It will probably take us two hours to reach Delhi from here." Shouted Brij.

Brij may look's nice from outside to everyone but from inside he is pure evil. He is the leader of underworld gang. Whenever any women would do something wrong like marring someone without parents will he would cut their throat because he thinks that women's don't have any right to marry someone of their choice.

"I am coming veer ji" Shouted Geet from her room.

Geet was beautiful girl with light brown eyes and brunette straight hairs and Vivacious by nature.

Geet hugged her darji and cried.

Darji "Take care of yourself and don't be friendly with the English men's there."

Geet "I know darji , don't worry."

She met all her family members and then left for Delhi to board her flight from there to Boston.

Precap:

First meeting.


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