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Ayushi Budhia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ..dishu..
hey nice start. and i have an idea. why not make shiv meet phooli and learn about anandi's life. maybe he will be impressed with her seeing how she has fought against destiny and used her example to eradicate this social evil from jaitser.

I was thinking for the same but how??

Thank you for the Phooli Idea!!

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Kehkasha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

show phooli coming to meet anandi and enquiring about the divorce and make shiv hear their talks and out of his inquisitive nature he asks phooli about it...just my opinion but i know u will come up with better idea👍🏼

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Ayushi Budhia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: mjht_ArVi4ever
show phooli coming to meet anandi and enquiring about the divorce and make shiv hear their talks and out of his inquisitive nature he asks phooli about it...just my opinion but i know u will come up with better idea👍🏼

sure jaani i'll let Phooli be lucky enough to talk to a hunk like Shiv 😉 😆

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Kehkasha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ayushi.luvsid

sure jaani i'll let Phooli be lucky enough to talk to a hunk like Shiv 😉 😆

do one thing make me anandi's bachpan ki friend...mujhe aek chance mil jayega sid ke saath kuch ghante bitaneka😆😆... phooli ke roop mein mein waha(jaitser) pohonch jaati hoon😉

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Niki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Its a really nice start, I liked it... Please continue soon
And can you PM me when you update.??

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Rumjhum Laha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

very good start dear..update soon

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Ayushi Budhia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

GUYS KINDLY LIKE THE INDEX POST SO THAT I'LL PM ONLY THE INTERESTED ONES PLZZZ

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Monamie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

very very very nice start!!👏...pls continue soon..and pls do PM me when u'll update this😃

first FF of BV forum😳...and that is also on AnSh!!😍

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sush_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

gud one😊😳

please update soon😊

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Ayushi Budhia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

PART 2

"Ab mujhe chalna chahiye" She said givig a formal smile

He nodded the same way.

She turned to see no one around them and the whole ground was emptied. "dadi sa?" She said almost to herelf only, confused as was Shiv about not knowing when everyone just left while they talked for a few minutes..

"Lagta hai sab chale gaye" She turned back looking at shiv who looked even more confused and so CUTE his face at the moment 😍 made her giggle a li'l but she hid her smile.

He said,"A..um.. main aapko ghar chhodh dun i mean andhera hone wala hai?"

"Jee nahi koi baat nahi main chali jaungi..Kha ma KHa hi aapko taklif hogi" she replied simply.

"its okay with me aap chahein toh aa sakti" he extended his arm in the direction of the car.

She said nothing just walked in the direction and he walked with her... They both sat in the car as guards opened the doors for them. The way to home was silent. He dropped her home and went ahead.

"Thank you once again" she said simply

"It's okay" He replied the same way

SHE went inside the home and called out,"Dadi sa? aap sab kab aa gaye mujhe toh pata hi nahi chala."

"Thari bhali hove chhori, Tu toh wahan mele mein esi RAmh gayi(kho gayi or got involved) ki tane koi khabar hi naa thi. mane tujhe dhoondha to bhi nahi dikhi"

Just then Sumitra came,"Haan laado kahan gyi thi tu?"

"Maa main toh wahin thi pata nahi aap ab ko kee nahi milli, wo dadisa ne collector sahab ko Mela dikhane ko kaha tha to..." dadi sa cut in her ,"matlab tu yeh kahe h chhori ki mhari galati thi??? hm?"

"Naa naa dadisa mene esa kab kaha?" She was confused by DS' behaviour... 😕

"Ye bata Chhrori abhji tu kese kese aayi?? kisne yaad dil,aayi tane ghar ki ?" Dadisa asked curious to know if her plan worked or not!

"Dadisa wo aap log nahi mile to Collector ahab ne mujhe Ghar tak chhodha" Anandi said. DADI SA was the most happy person to hear this and 😡 too

"Thari Bhali hove chhori!" DS screamed Shiv GHar tak aaya or tune use andar aane ko bhi naa kaha??

"Haan laado unhone thaarti jaan bachayi kum se kum andar toh bula leti hum bhi unhe Shukryia keh dete?" Sumitra interrupted in a disappointing manner.

"Maa mene unhe Thank you keh toh diya tha naa or aate waqt dobara keh diya kaafi h naa or fir ab woh yahin rahenge har waqt uinhe shukriya hi thodi kehte rahenge?" SHe defended herself 😛

"Sochego kese ehsaan fdaramposh log hain pehle Chhori ko jaan bachayi phir ghar tak chhodhne aayo or gar ander bhi naa bulayo aehsaanfaramoshon (thankless people) ne

"Koi baat nahi maa as itna thak gayti hogi bhool gayi hogi! jaa laaado haath muhh dhole" Sumitra said

"JI maa" said anandi.

PRECAP: Shiv goes to anandi's school and finds gunni there teaching the girls and shares a small talk with her!!!

Edited by ayushi.luvsid - 13 years ago