MG OS ~Aphrodite Goddess of Love~ REMOVED

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Posted: 13 years ago

I am removing my stories from here. I might publish some of them in future. Thanks for your support. Hope, I will find the same in future.

Keeping the epilogue as it is .. it was written on request

Edited by SayaneeH.Lecter - 9 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

~Edited~

I was expecting Mrityunjayi ka update from you!!! 😲

Chalo..koi nahi...Today I got to read this wonderful OS!!😃

Did I ever say that your stories are magical?? 😳(Waise yes a lot of times!!😆 )

I absolutely loved this part!

Starting from those two lines..I absolutely love that song "Tose naina laage"..and those lines itself brought a smile to my face. I'm gonna listen to that song after commenting!!

I guess your updates-selected songs-my playlist have some puraana rishta. 😆

Aww...when I read those words where Geet asks if he can paint her too..She sounded so innocent !Geet's husband ...Did he beat her?? 🤢 Why do some men treat women like dirt!!

One co-incidence completely changed Geet's life!! She came out of that confinement but again got caught in a cage..!!!

I felt bad for her when she said that she is "now doing it to satisfy her own stomach".

Eagerly waiting for the next part...pleej update soon !!

Waise what's with Maan being a sculptor first and now him being a painter and that too a short-haired one. 😉 😆

I always love the way you pen down the background ,the climate and all...it really sets the mood!!😊

P.S: When are we getting the updates of Mrityunjayi and SWK??!!! 😛

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago

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nonabebu

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice awsum well written pls post the second part soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesm👏

though maan s fascinatn wid geet helped him create his master piece

bt also changed her life.. for d better?!!

waiting 4 more!!

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Pooja Verma

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Posted: 13 years ago

your stories r always beautiful

nd dis one too is indeed beautiful

his one painting changes both of their life

he got d biggest achievement in his life nd she get thrown out of her house for no fault of her

waiting for next

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello Sayanee,I dont know how many likes and comments you will get but pls pls pls do post the 2nd part. Your story is outstanding and I always LOVE this kind of story with a touch of mystery and surprise.And there is no need to say I am crazy about MAANEET

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samirah

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow i just loved it, please update the next prt dear, i am eager to read it. plzzz

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 13 years ago

finally post karli tui eta dara abar bhalo kare pare lamba comment karbo so res this post
btw 2nd part post karis nahole he he me is evil
awesome, brilliant, beautiful , marvelous, mind blowing , out standing update
I'm speechless totally
so beautifully written
well and perfect title "Aphrodite Goddess of Love"
first really don't know what happen to geet is right or wrong
I'm really first time spell bound after reading her confession
maan paint her after using her imagination but it's perfectly matched with her and her husbands' left her , abandon her
his painting changes both lives maan N geet's life
maan life changed for betterment
he got all what he wants and desired but geet's life come to tragic one side to another side
without any fault geet got blamed
some times destiny plays a game we don't even know where our life will land for the next moment
maan is feeling guilty but when geet confessed don't feel sorrow as she doesn't regret
what a straight forward but honest confession
loved their conversation
it's so nice, beautiful
continue soon
P.S post kar jaldi next part 😛😛

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 13 years ago