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Hey as you all know I am tina. But this story will be written by my sis again, don't worry she will continue her A bond to Cherish FF also . Here she has given the teaser.


OK SO GUYSS!WELL I GUESS SOME OF U MIGHT HAVE LIKED MY FIRST FF DAT WAS BOND TO CHERISH!
WELL M HERE AGAIN WITH A NEW STORY ON VIRIKA! IN DIS STORY IS DIFFERENT AGAIN BEFORE
STRTING I'LL JST GIVE A INTRODUCTION AND HOW D CHARACTERS R!! HOPE U GUYSS LYK MY
EFFORTS WHICH M PUTTING!LOL :P!! DO TELL ME HOW'S IT THRU MY SIS TINAA!!AND U GUYS
CAN EVEN SUGGEST! I WUD LOVE TO PUT WAT U ALL WANT! AND WELL WE HAVE BIT OF VIRMAN
HERE AND A NEW JODI DAT WILL BE INTRODUCED!! NOT TAKING MUCH TYM I'LL PROCEED TO
THE INTODUCTION! AND PLZ COMMENT! OR ATLEAST LYK WILL WORK!THANKS FOR GIVING UR
PRECIOUS TYM ON MY EFFORTS!

-INTRODUCTION-

Jeevika and Manvi two sisters from hrishikesh had a dream to be pilot and now dere dreams
were fulfilled dey were selected!dey were asked to go to mumbai for learning d basic
things as dey were jst d begginers now!
Viren and Virat brothers from chandigarh had d same dream to be pilots and were asked
to cum to mumbai too and learn!
All d 4 were d only students who got selected! and were asked to cum to mumbai for
dere lessons and dere first fly by dere own will be taking place in june when d
seniors will feel dey r ready to do! till dat tym dey can assist d passengers and
help dem! dey all selected jet! so dere first trip was in jet airways! and dere was
a rule! dat dere dey have to work in pairs!one boy and one girl!both M&J and V&V
were on dere way to mumbai now! all4 were nervous yet exited!

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WELL NOW I FIRST WANT FEEDBACK DEN I'LL THINK OF WRITING IT FURTHER!WELL I HAVE LOTS MORE
STORED!! BUT I NEED TO ASK U GUYS DAT IF U LYKED IT DEN I'LL CONTINUE OR ELSE!I'LL THINK
MY WIRITING SKILLS OUR NT TOLERABLE! LOL :P NEED FEEDBACKSS!!

Thanks to both my sisters Tina (virenjeevika) and Ani ( Anika)
Love you guys!

Index-
Teaser- page 1
Part 1- page 2
Part 2- page 3
Part 3- page 6
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Love it 😃
Tinaaaji Tusse great ho 😆 And my Baby Sister I Love you too..
Continue soon... I want to know what will happen when they meet and pair up.. So excited 😃
TinaJi Love YouJi 🤗
Baby sister keep up the good work!
Ani 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome ...wanna see pair of viren jeevika..iactually imagine them in pilot uniform..
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hey
The concept is really amaIng . Plz add me in your pmlist
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i really like it.. pls continue n pm me when u update..
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it seems interesting
continue it n pm please
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Hey guys! my sis is back again! handing it over to her now!!


hey guys i got to knw u guyss need update in english!dis tym m trying to write in english m nt
so good at english so u may come acorss some grammatical mistakes or so! i'll use a bit hindi
also!and yes guys m sorry if dere is any spelling mistake! i write whn its 1 at night and it
take me a bit long!after writing i dont check wat i have written hope u guyss lyk my efforts!
and BIG THANK YOU! for all d lyk's and comments really appreciate!and yes guyss part1 is a
long update!hope u all will enjoy! and i think it will take 2 or 3 days for nxt update!and yes
guyss i started virika'slove story too early i knw dat!! so plzz sorry! but i cant help myself
from writing it!! LOL :P

-CHARACTERS-

Jeevika:a young girl of 26!elder sister of manvi!!bubbly,sweet,shy,helpful and caring girl!
whose nt used to talk to boys!she was exited as she is selected and is going mumbai yet nervous
dat with whom will she be paired up!will he a nice guy!will he be accomodate with her..more den
dis she was scared as she never travelled in airplane!though she wanted to a be a pilot!

Viren:a heartthrob of 28!elder brother of virat!sweet,loving and caring boy!who always used to
stay away from girls!the time he got to knw a girl will be paired with him!he got nervous!what
type of girl she must be!rather den dat he was happy dat both d brothers r going to fulfill
dere dreams now!

Manvi:bindaas girl of 22!younger sister of jeevika!cute,naughty and very sweet hearted person!
she used to play with boys only! and she was thinking d boy opposite to her shud be a bindaas
person with whom she can accomodate easiely and if dat person dnt talk much den i'll make him
speak!

Virat:handsome hunk of 24! younger brother of viren!mischevious,fun loving and caring!as he
got to knw a girl will be opposite him,a wide smile on his face appeared!he was really happy
after knwing dis!

Aditya:senior of all 4 of dem! he is a successfull pilot! and love to work with her wife sia
who too is a pilot!head of d boys!

Sia:wife of aditya and a inspiration for everygirl to be like her!head of girls!

PART 1-

On dere way both viren and virat's bus was stopped in front of a small garden restaurant!viren
asked d driver wats it!driver said bus can't move more den dis dere is some technical problem
u need to arrange a car!both viren and virat moved out of d bus and were sitting dere thinking
wat to do!
Same happend with manvi and jeevika and luckily dere bus stopped near dat garden only dey both
went and took seat dere jst opposite to viren and virat!

virat:bhai what do u think we shud do knw?
viren:i guess we shud call mumbai and inform bcoz i dnt think we r going to get a taxi over here!
virat:yes! i think d same!call dem!
viren called aditya!
viren:helleo!goodafternoon sir! its viren here!
aditya:hey viren!i guess u guys shud have reached here by now!
viren:actually sir from d bus we were cuming had some technical problem and dey r saying we
need to get a car and go but here i can't find any taxi!
aditya:okay i got it were r u!every junior whnever is going to cum dey all get stucked dere(giggle)
anyways i'll arrange for a car and wil let u knw!
viren:thank you so much sir!
virat:what happend?
viren:he is arranging for a car!
virat:thank god!

manvi:di what shud we do knw!?
jeevika:i think we shud inform dere in mumbai!hopefully we will get a help!
manvi:yes!! go on!
jeevika called sia!
jeevika:goodafternoon maam! jeevika speaking!
sia:oh jeevika! so u reached mumbai?
jeevika:no ma'am actually bcoz of some problem our bus is nt working and we need to arrange for
a car and here no were i can find it!
sia:ohh i got it!! our every junior even me was stucked dere! well i'll ask and tell u!
jeevika:thank you ma'am!

sia went to aditya!

sia:adii!! both jeevika and manvi r stucked d place were we did! so from were dey will get a car?
aditya:ohh dey both too!!
sia: dey both too means!viren and virat too r dere!?
adi:yes!! i got jst one car! and dey all need to cum here y dnt dey cum along and do tel dem abt
dere pairs! i'll inform viren abt dis! and yess sia! i got a car but dat driver need to leave as
he took urgent leave!
sia:ohh! haan so u ask viren he'll dirve safely den virat! he can drive and come! its jst abt 25
kms!
adi:yes i'll ask dem u inform jeevika!i'll call viren!
sia:done!

viren's phone rang! he picked it up!
viren:helleo!
adi:viren i arranged for a car!but d problem is d driver will hand u d keys and will leave as he
is on urgent leave so u need to drive till ur hostel!wil it be fine?
viren:ofcourse sir!
adi:make sure ur driving! coz i knw virat drives too fast! and yes d girls who were paired opp
u brothers dere only!dere bus was stucked too! so u need to bring dem too! SAFELY!
viren:sure sir!and sir dere names!?
adi: yes! d girl whose paired opp to u is jeevika! and opp virat is manvi!
viren:fine sir! thank you!
adi:see u in ur hostel!
virat:what happ bhai?
viren: he is sent a car for us!and i'll drive till our hostel not u! and yes d girls paired opp
to us here! so dey will accompany us!and haan d girl opp to u is manvi and opp to me is jeevika!
virat:oh ok so manvi!

jeevika's phone rang!she picked it up!
jeevika:yes ma'am!
sia: jeevika we arranged for a car! and boys whose opp u guys r stucked dere too!
dey will accompany u! opp to u is viren and opp to manvi is virat and yes as d driver is on a
urgent leave he is going to give d keys to viren and viren will bring u guys to d hostel and yes
make sure neither manvi nor virat sit in d front seat opp to viren coz i kwn both r naughty dey
will definately irritate viren!
jeevika:sure ma'am!
sia:don't worry! u guys will be safely here! viren is dere he is intelligent and we asked him
to be protective for u gurls! don't worry!
jeevika: yes ma'am thank you!
manvi:what happend?
jeevika:dey sent a car for us!and d boys opp to us r here only!d boy opp to u is virat and opp
to me is viren! and virenji is going to drive d car!and sia ma'am ask not to let u or virat sit
it d front seat!m nervous mannu!
manvi:ohoo virenji!di dnt worry i'll sit in back and i promise i won't do anything and di dnt
be nervous!ma'am told na he is nt lyk dt!so chill!!and m always dere na!!now smilee!!

both sia and adi called dem again and informed dere will be a golden hondacity so u can meet
dere!

viren and virat were waiting for manvi and jeevika!manvi and jeevika took quite more tym to find
the car! as dey found! manvi saw to boys standing dere!
manvi:dii see dere r dey! nt bad in lookwise!
jeevika:shut up mannu!
virat saw dem cumingg!
virat:bhai see dere r dey!dey look beautiful!
viren:virat plz dnt start ur flirting over here!and yes i got to knw dt d road is on consruction
so we might take tym to reach! coz its 30kms!
virat:i thought its 25kms!
viren:i thought d same! but dere dt person said dt its 30 kms!and its 6!so we shud leave!
virat:yes but let dem cum!let us introduce den!
jeevika and manvi came and were standing in front of dem!
manvi:viren and virat?
viren:yes! m viren and dis is virat!manvi and jeevika rite?
manvi:yes m manvi and dis is jeevika!
viren:nice to meet u!
manvi:same here!
viren:hii (to jeevika)
jeevika:hi!
virat:helleo!(to manvi)
manvi:hii!
viren:well u guys give me ur luggage i'll put it in d boot!and den we will leave coz d road is on
construction so may be it will take time!
jeevika:i'll help u up!
viren:sure!
as jeevika was moving a man passing by pushed her! and jeevika fell on viren's arm!clutching his
shirt!
both were lost in each oder's eyes! and on d first go dey saw love in each oder's eyes!
manvi:dii u alright?
den dey broke apart and were standingg!
viren:u fine?
jeevika:yes!sumone pushed me so i...
viren:ok let it be!cumon eeveryone lets move frm here its already 6:15! it can take us tym!
viren went and was sitiing on driving seat!manvi and virat sat on d back seat and jeevika in
front seat!
d road was horrible! very slowly dey were moving!
viren:well do u guyss need anything?
manvi:like!?
viren:i mean u want to drink water!?
manvi:not water but yes i want to eat sumthing and i dnt have anything neither i can find anyplace
over here!
jeevika:mannnu u had chips na?now again?
manvi:dii!plz m hungry!
viren:ok i'll give u sumthingg! jst a sec!
viren stopped d car and went out and took his small bag out of it!
he came inside d car and gave it to manvi!
viren:here u go!! m dam sure dere mst be sumthingg inside! maa wud have definately kept sumthing!
manvi:ur so lucky dat u have mom n dad! our parents left us whn we were small!
viren stared at jeevika and jeevika too was looking at him!
viren:we r nt so lucky! we dnt have our dad with us!
virat:lets jst change d topic and eat!
viren was drivingg while virat and manvi were wating and jeevika was drinking water!
viren's phone rang and it ws vanshika on d line! he put d cell on speaker and was tlking!
vanshika:beta! u reached mumbai?
viren:no maa we r still on our way!will reach soon!
vanshika:ohh yes u mst be driving na?
viren:yes maa dat m doing i kept d cell on speaker!
vanshika:i wont take much tym but jst wanted to ask did u both had sumthing i shud say 4 now!
manvi:helleo auntyy! i am manvii!
vanshika:helleo beta how r u?
manvi:m good! aunty hows u!?
vanshika:m fine!missing dese 2 boys!
manvi:di say hi to aunty!
jeevika:namaste aunty!m jeevika!
vanshika:namaste beta!
virat:maa i had chips!
vanshika:ok and wat abt u both manvi and jeevika?
manvi:aunty i had chips too!
jeevika:aunty i was nt feeling hungry so i jst drank water!
vanshika:and wat abt u viren!?
viren:umm maa woh woh maine!
vanshika:virenn! u need to take ur medicines!wat i asked u,u need to eat on time and have to take
medicine on time!
viren:maa if it wud have been only me and virat den i wud have stopped car and mst had sumthing but
we have manvi and jeevika with us! and dis area is nt so safe! i have to be protected over dem!
vanshika:i knw dat beta! den fine! i have anoder option!virat u feed viren and viren will drive!
virat:maa! I m sitting at back! i'll nt be able to feed him properly!
vanshika:but its important for viren to take his medicine!
viren:maa i'll have dem as soon as i'l reach campus! i promise!
vanshika:but beta u knw na!?
viren:maa!
manvi:if aunty is saying it again and again den it mst be too important!jeevika di y dont u feed him
ur sitting beside him na?
viren:no its fine! i'll have it whn i'll reach campus! thanks manvi!
jeevika:no its fine! u drive! i'll!
dey both were staring at each oder!
vanshika:can u keep d cell on normal mode and talk to me jeevika!?
(jeevika was whispering)
jeevika:sure sunty 1 sec!! yes
vanshika:beta i jst wanted a small favour as i got to knw ur paired with viren!i knw he will nt have
his medicine on time! so can u jst remind him!
jeevika:sure aunty!
vanshika:thank u so much beta he need to take it 3 tymes a day! 1 at 8 in d morning!2nd at 2 in d
afternoon and 3rd at 8 at d nite! i hope u dnt mind!
jeevika:nt at all aunty!
vanshika:viren is nt so bad
jeevika:aunty he is nt at all bad!though he is too nice person!
vanshika:u knw beta i always wanted a girl and after talking to u both sisters i feel!i got my
daughters! my boys r lucky to have a friend lyk u both!
jeevika:aunty even we r lucky to have dem! and u knw aunty after talking to u!i feel lyk i got
my maa back! ur too sweet aunty!
vanshika:i wont mind if u both cal me maa! and yes i hope u dnt feel awkward after listening to me!
jeevika:no nt at all!
vanshika:i'll check u guys whn u'll reach dere!
jeevika:sure!bye!
vanshika:bye!
jeevika ur maa is too sweet!
viren:she is!
jeevika:so as u!(blushing)
viren:even u!(smiling)
manvi:di take dis packet of chips and feed him!
jeevika take d packet and she took out d chips and fed viren!
viren was looking at her lovingly!
soon dey were done!and after viren had his medicine!dere was a area were dey saw a lot of crowd!
viren:i guess sumthing happend dere!
virat:yes bhai!
jeevika:lets go and ask!
viren:noo!! let me stop d car in corner and i knw one shortcut we will go frm dere!
jeevika:y nt!!?
viren:its dangerous!though we will protect u guys! but still!
viren stopped d car in corner!
virat:i'll get down our luggages and den u all cum down! bhai u stay with dem!
wierd noises were cumingg and both manvi and jeevika were scared!
viren:dnt worry m with u both! nthing willever happend to u guys till m dere!
virat:cum out u guys!
viren:listen! virat u will be with manvi and i'll be with jeevika! we all wil be together but
still u'll nt leave manvi alone! and nor manvi u will leave virat!
manvi:yes i wil nt!
jeevika:virenji m too scared!
viren:m dere! nt to worry!virat take manvi's bag and i'll take jeevika's!
virat:yes bhai!
viren gave his hand to jeevika!she slowly held his hand and he tightened d grip!
manvi auntomatically held virat's hand!
manvi:suno virat mujhe chodh ke nhi jana haan!
virat:arre haan baba!
viren:cumon run guys! we shud nt be caught!
dey all were running! and jeevika got hurt in her hand!
manvi:dii!
viren:u guyss run i'll bring her! manvi i promise i wont let anything happend to ur sister!
jeevika:its nthingg u guyss run! we'll cum!
virat and manvii went running!
viren:show me ur hand!
jeevika:no its fine! its jst a scratch!
viren:yahh scratch! let me see! id nt wanna hear any excuse!
viren looked she got hurt near her wrist!
viren:dis is wat u cal scratch!
viren took out his handkechief and rapped it around!
viren;is it hurtingg?
jeevika:no m fine!
viren: u sure?
jeevika:yes!!
viren:m sorry i promised to protect u!
jeevika:its nt ur fault virenji!
viren:lets run!
dey started running again!
dey stopped at a place for jeevika to drink water!i'll take out water!
jeevika was standing a bit far away!and suddenly she felt sumone's hand on her shoulder!
jeevika turned taking manvi's name out and saw a drunk men standing in front of her!
men:ohh so ur alonee too! well m free!
jeevika shouted virenji!
viren turned and saw dt men holding jeevika! he ran and first released jeevika!
viren:how dare u to touch her!
men:who d hell r u!
viren:u dnt need to knw who am i! its better for u leave!
men:ahh not so easily i want d girl!
viren:u wont get dt! its better for u to leave now!
men:who r u to stop me!?saying lyk ur her boyfrnd!
viren:yes u got it rite! i am!
jeevika was staring at viren!
men:she is so beautiful!
viren went ahead and punched him!
dat man throwed a stone towardds viren!viren got hurt in his head!
jeevika:virenjiii!
viren pushed dt drunk man harder picked dere bags and ran with jeevika! den dey reached a place
which was really inside and dey felt dt dey r safe here!
jeevika was crying! viren held jeevika's face and said
viren:jeevika m soo sry!
jeevika:virenji i felt so scared dat men!
viren; m so sorry!
jeevika hugged viren!
jeevika:thank god u were with me!
viren consoled her and asked her to be quite!
they broke apart!
jeevika:ohh my god its bleeding too much! its all bcoz of mee!!
viren:no!! its nthingg!!
jeevika torn her dupatta and covered it in viren's head!
viren:thank you! i never came across a girl lyk u!
jeevika: and i never came across a boy lyk u!m lucky to have u with me!
viren:even m lucky to have u!

manvi and virat reached a hut!and sat down dere!
manvi:were is dii virat! m tensed abt her!
virat:u need not to worry bhai is with her he wont let anything happend to her as he lykes her
from d tym he saw her!
manvi:ohh well u knw wat same here with dii!!hahaha!!
virat:well do u think dey will tell each oder!?
manvi:no!! dey both r same!! dey won't i bet!
virat:shud we help dem den?
manvi:yes! ok idea whn we all wil be sitting we will play truth and truth!! den we can make dem
say wat we want!
virat:yes! nice idea!

viren pointed towards d same hut were manvi and virat were!
viren: it think we shud go over dere!
jeevika:ji! plz be careful!
viren: m fine dont worry!
dey moved towards d hut and saw virat and manvi!!
manvi and virat saw dem and ran towards dem!
manvi hugged jeevika and virat hugged viren!
virat:bhai wat happend to u?
viren:its nthingg! rehende!waise bhi its too late now! i think so its safe to leave
tommo morning!till dt tym we will stay here!
manvii: see we all r bored and alone here! y dont we play truth truth!?
viren:truth-truth?
manvi:cant give dare na! and dat to here!!
viren:oh ya! okay!
all four of dem sat and manvi spinned d bottle!
it pointed towards viren!
virat:ohoo bhai! i'll ask u question !! umm! let me think!
manvi:i have my question ready so m asking him now! d tym it will be di's turn u ask her!
well dis question is for both of u! di for u too!
viren:and wats d question?
manvi:do u lyk my sister!?
viren was shocked and was thinking!dam dis virat can't keep a secret!
virat:bhai bolo!!
viren stared at jeevika and he found her blushing a bit!
viren:yes i do!
virat:and what abt u!
manvii:diii!
jeevika:urm! samee!
manvi and virat do hi5!
manvi:virat see what i said was true! wow!!
virat:yes even i am rite! congrats bhai!!
viren:i guess we shud sleep now! its too late!
viren was sitting in d corner and jeevika beside him!laying her head on his shoulder,manvi
besides jeevika and virat besides manviii!


OKAY GUYSS!! WELL I KNWW IT TURNED ITNO A RUBBISH IN BETWEEN! BUT I WAS NT GETTING ANYTHING!LOL
:P WELL!AB VIRIKA R IN LOVE! SO LET DEM IN LOVE ONLY! AND SORRY IF U ALL R DISSAPOINTED! IF YES
DEN DO COMMENT AND TELL! I'LL STOP WRITING!AND DO READ D NOTE ABOVE! THANKS!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing! amazing! amazing!!! tina your sis is an amazing writer!! i love it !! loved how you havent made jeevika shy !! PLEASEE UPDATE SOON! and tina pm me!!! you should definetly carry on! noth of your FF's are really good! you've kept me hooked on!!! 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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absolutely brilliant cant wait for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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TinaJi 🤗 thanks for posting it... Tusse great ho!
My baby sister.. Loved the long update!
Oh My God.. Viren and Jeevika in love.. So cute!
Virat and Manvi are like cupids 😉 Love the concept!
Continue soon
Love you Baby sister and TinaJi 😃
Edited by -Anika- - 13 years ago

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