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Hello guys...here I'm again with another OS...I know I m really unorganized and impatient 😆...but can't help it.Every time I think of VirMan,they give me new ideas...😉

Here it is...

Virat and Manvi were standing at the door.Vanshika was standing in front of them with aarti ki thali in her hands.Everyone was happy except Swamini bua.Manvi was about to enter the Vadhera house as the young daughter-in-law.Manvi was feeling really happy and her happiness could be seen in her eyes.It was such a strange feeling.She has come to the house innumerable times...but this time it was not the same.For all the past times,it was her sister's house.She came as a guest or as Jeevika's sister...But from now it was her house.She has a right to come & stay here.While thinking all these,she felt the touch of Virat's hand.Vanshika had done the aarti.It was the time for her greeha prabesh.

Vanshika: Beta apni daaine pao se iss kalash ko gira do.

Manvi dropped the kalash.

Vanshika: Ab iss thal pe apne pao rakkho...aur apne shubh kadmo se iss ghar ki dehliz ke andar aao.

Manvi put her foots in the thal and entered the house.Her joy was immeasurable but her body was giving up gradually.Virat felt that she was not feeling well.Then everyone went to do some customs with bride and groom...There was a bowl placed in front of them.

Kadambhari: Ab tum dono ko iss bowl mein rakkhi huyi ring ko dhundna parega...jaise mein bolu start ho jana.

Viran: Bhai,mein toh apni saali saheba ke side pe hoon!

Jeevika: Toh phir main bhi apne devar ke side pe hoon!

Manvi was excited.They both put their hands but Virat did not search for it.He wanted her to win.He just acted like he was also searching...Manvi found the ring.

Kadambhari: yeh lo Manvi jeet gayi...ab uska raj chalega Virat pe!

After all the customs Manvi got really weak.Though she had a smile on her face,Virat sensed it and made an eye contact with Viren.Viren looked at Manvi and also got that.

Viren: Arreh maa,hamare yahan pe koyi ek rasam hoti hai na?

Vanshika: Kaun si rasam beta?

Viren: Woh hi jisme dulha dulhaan ko utha ke kamre tak leke jata hai...mere khayal se baki saari rasmein toh ho hi chuki hai,ab yeh ek rasam bhi puri kar lete hai.

Vanshika: Kyun nahi...!

Manvi was feeling very shy.After their marriage,it was first time when Virat was about to take her in his arms.Virat carried her to the room.Then Kadambhari and Jeevika came.

Kadambhari: Abhi dulhe ko andar entry mana hai...!

Virat: lekin..!

Kadambhari: Hum usse andar le ja sakte hain sahi salamat.

Virat did not argued any longer...after a while he entered the room.Manvi was sitting on the bed with a veil just like a new bride.Virat sat on the bed and removed her veil.

Virat: Manvi kya jarurat hai iss ghunghat ki..!

Manvi: Jarurat kyun nahi hai...aj toh mein nayi nawili dulhaan hoon!

Virat: Ha,mujhe pata hai...lekin iss tarah se tumhe uneasy feel hoga!

Manvi: Arreh itni si uneasiness toh main haste haste seh sakti hoon...meri itni care bhi mat karo!

Virat: Kyun nahi karoo?akhir aap dulhaan thehri...!ek bat hain Manvi.

Manvi: Kya?

Virat: Tum bohat bhari ho gayi ho...!

Then he started laughing and got up.Manvi held his hand.

Manvi: Virat tumhe pata tha na ke mujhe weak lag raha hai..?

Virat also held her hand and shook his head in yes gesture...Manvi walked to the window.Virat also came to her.It was a moon lit night.besides,the sky was flooded with millions of stars.He hugged her from behind.

Manvi: Aaj mammi-papa ki bohat yaad aa rahi hai,Virat!

Virat: Main janta hoon.lekin woh toh hamesha hi tumhare sath hai...tum hi toh kehti ho ke woh taare ban geye hai aur dekho aaj asman taaro se roshan hai...kyun ki woh bhi aaj tumhe bohat yaad kar rahe hai.

Manvi: Kya pata kitne din aur yaad karenge?

Virat: Aisa kyun?

Manvi: Kyun ki sayad jald hi main bhi unke pas chali jayoon!

Virat got upset and about to leave.Manvi stopped him by holding his hand.

Manvi: Sorry!

Virat: Tum aisa kyun karti ho Manvi?

Manvi: Kaha na sorry!

Virat: No,that's not enough!Hamesha aisi batein karke tumhe kya milta hai?

Manvi: Tumhara gussa...jo ki tumhare pyaar ka ehsas dilata hai...!

Virat: Yeh mat samajhna ke yeh sunke main apna gussa bhul jayunga!

Then Manvi acted like she was fainting.

Virat: Manvi tumhe kya hua?Tum thik toh ho?

She opened her eyes.

Manvi: Abhi toh thik hoon...lekin agar tum aise hi gussa rahe toh jald hi bimaar ho jayung...!

Virat: Meri drama queen!Akhir mujhe mana hi liya!thik hai main gussa nahi hoon!

Manvi: Mujhe pata tha!

She had a big smile on her face.

Virat: Abhi rest kar lo.kal tumhe chemo session ke liye bhi jana hai.

Manvi: Phir se!

Virat: Koi bahana nahi...It's an order!

Manvi: Ok pati dev ji...!

Virat: Good patni devi ji...!

Manvi: Yeh patni devi ji kya hai?

Virat: Jasie pati dev ji,waise patni devi ji...!

They laughed together.

Manvi: Pata hai kya Virat!

Virat: Kya?

Manvi: Aaj tak main kehti thi ke di sabse lucky hai ki unhe jiju mile hai...lekin aaj...

Virat: Aaj kya?

Manvi: Aaj main yeh yakin se keh sakti hoon ke duniya mein mujhse lucky koyi ho hi nahi sakta!!!!

sajan ghar aana tha,sajan ghar aaye hai

piya maan bhana tha,piya maan bhaye hai

har khushi hai ab tumhari,mujhe de do gham

janemaan janemaan janemaan

janemaan

sajan ghar aana tha,sajan ghar aaye tum

piya maan bhana tha,piya maan bhaye tum

har khushi hai ab tumhari,mujhe de do gham

janemaan janemaan janemaan

janemaan



guys if u don't like it or find it boring then it's totally okay...I totally understand your feelings,believe me...😆...U r always welcome...🤗

in case if u like it then U r welcome too...😳🤗


if u r interested here is

Index of My Works!

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Khush94 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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first to comment.
it was lovely.
i can totally imagine these scenes
keep writing

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Posted: 13 years ago
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dont say that...itzzz really good and looking forward 4 more updates...thnx 4 pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's really good, You write so well, all your SO all
so beautiful!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its beautiful ❤️ If you do write again, I'd love to receive a PM 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww so romantic n sweet i lovd it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww, it was so adorable! Thanks for the PM and keep writing more, and PM me again :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Simple and sweet... Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was beautiful ..
short and sweeet
please cont writing and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I didnt like it because I loved it keep writing and
pm me when u do write again

Ps: thanks for the pm x

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