~Redeeming Love *~[In Active- till further notice]

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So this is a SS/FF ..
No. of parts i hv still not decided ..
This is a bit different from the leaugue ..
So i'll try my best to solve all the confusions ..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Prologue (1+2).. ...

Rose quartz is pink quartz that is often called the "Love Stone."
It is a stone of unconditional love that opens the heart to all forms of love: self-love, family love, platonic love, and romantic love...
its rightly said that ...
" lovable doorway...shabby red...Home is where the Heart is..."

And this love stone has immense power ! ..enough to spread purity .till thousands of years..

And this immense power / stone is "Saved" by the spirits ..
These spirits are of two types .
A bad one and a evil one ..
M not talking about dead spirits ..
They are alive ..
In between us ..Staying peacefully like us ..
No complains , No demands ..
They make love ..they too hate ..
Yes ! they are like this ..
They love ..they hate ..they do everything but for a purpose ...Purpose to save themselves ..
*Redeeming basically means .
"bringing about salvation or redemption from sin / Compensating for some fault or defect
and here "
*Redeeming love means : Redeeming for love ..redeeming for own fault ..


Okay so till now things will be bit clear !!
So last time when i updated this i didn't added this spirit thingy right !!
As i did'nt said anything like they are normal ! did i ?
Yes they aren't !! 😉

They are those spirits ..which are born to protect this " love stone "
All things happened were same .. kriyaansh sworan meeting ..their confession .. and so on ..But ya !! the whole atmosphere was abnormal ..They all knew who they are .. ya like in horror fictional movies ..here you gonna read romance ..horror suspence ..

I will be giving those needed flashbacks.. time to time ..



story line ------ so its about 5-6 years since their colg is over ..Evrything was silent ..going good..They were together ..waiting to explore more of what they had ..They knew through their parents and uncle ... what they ought to do together being one ..strong ..is all was to save

"We always believe our first love is our last, and our last love is our First "
------- kriyaansh -------


the cutest couple ever ...
though distances tried to separate them but its said " bonded hearts never break..."
they have lived all the phases of a "relationship"
they were enemies ... they fought ... with full honesty
then they became .friends ...
then vo spl. walle friends ...
but soon their lives were jumbled up ... they had break up ...
but its said that
"Like an old photograph
Time can make a feeling fade
But the memory of a first love
Never fades away "...

soon they reframed their broken love story ... n lived those dreamy day of GF-BF ...
N now ...they are ..."Engaged " ..yes ...you heard that right ...they are engaged n now taking full pleasure of this -- "half right's "-- ... n will be getting full rights of having each other soon ... ❤️
Both had those lovely powers ..which their dance style's gave them ..
Kriya ..had that power of hypnotisim through her contemporary And ya i an nother thing which she realises later !!... and rey ..he could set stage literally on fire through ..his moves ..
But what will happen when those tricky scars of past . ... came back ...into life ... with more pains . n more struggle ...
Ya stuggle and pain when kriya's stuggling past flashes her badly ..will rey help her out ..
ps. i will disclose the past once the time come's ..
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------ sworan-----------


a "newly married couple-- yes they are married...
known for their cute romantic fights ...
With their true feeling they showed up the worlds how different worlds merge up n give a beautiful pace for the both ...
though they experienced a lot difficulties yet they remain togethr ...
The love they had . was blissful ..
Sharon ..she could easly capture one's nerve through her moves .
And swayum he could read eye's .. he was so perfect in that ..
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Its said that ... the more you love the person you love ...the more you get to know bout those unwrapped emotions which are safe ...in you lover's heart ...

How on earth are you ever going to explain in terms of chemistry and physics so important a biological phenomenon as first love?
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--- viha ------
the cutest filmy couple ...
so adorable ...so cute ...so pure ...!!
neha ..her eye's can deviate any unwanted question growing in the person in front..
And vicky .. he can any thing ..those unbelievable streches .. anything ..his body was perfect a blend ..
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will add oder's power's too later ...
so tell now is everyhting clear ohh wait .. black illusion is left nah !!
The black illusion ...
The toughest battle to become the winner's winner's of special power's ...
Power's which our team need's badly to get the things in their hands ..
Only selected spiritual groups can go ahead in it ..
more things to be disclosed later ..
Ya It is run by the three evil Mentor's ..!!

Will these three mentor's ..Hurt kriya and sharon ???
What is their role in the whole story ??

To know the answer ..go back to ->



Life is essentially a cheat and its conditions are those of defeat; the redeeming things are not happiness and pleasure but the deeper satisfactions that come out of struggle. ..


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* buddy me for pmz ..*


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Edited by upasna_mishti - 13 years ago
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Chapter One *~




* 9 : 45 * MoNdAy MoRnInG ~


* tringgg * * tringgg* * tringgg*

"Kriya ! alarm baj rha h !!! " Rey spoke out ... in a sleepy tone .


" Kriyaaa! a-l-a-a-a-r-m ...!!! " he again spoke out n this time in a loud pitch ... hiding himself below the pilow ...

* tringgg* * tringgg*

" Kriya alarm ...! " Rey said ... throwing his blanket off ...

The bed sheet was partially on bed ...n half of it was sweeping the floor ...


He brushed his hairs .. n hit himself hard with a pilow ...


"Shit !! not again ... O girl ...phir se ???? sudhar ja tu ladke " rey smirked to himself ... he got up finally leaving all his lovely dreams of his love midway ... He Saw that pity situation of his room ..
"Its 10 : am now ...so i ' am left with 2 hours to get ready ...( he said out calmly) ( then suddenly ) ...Wat ???? 2 hours only ?????? " He yelled out .
He quickly got into his shirt and his jeans ... searched for keys of car ... n left ...


* 10 :30*

He stopped at a bakery shop ... Went to the receptionist ...Showed her a recipt ... The receptionist gave him a bag ( red n golden colored with a beautiful ribbon on its top )

" Here's your order sir !! we are so glad to have a customer like you ! plz keep visiting !! " the receptionist said to rey in a flirty tone ... 🤣


"Oh !! my pleasure ...but sorry i may not be visiting here anymore ! as going back " He replied to her with his sparkeling eye's ...

He was an extremely handsome man. He had a mixture of blonde and light brown hair that gave him a natural, friendly aura and his eyes were a charming grey that looked to be of molten lava.

He left the place ...with a wide smile over his face ...
He reached home packed his left stuffs ... got ready ... checked some papers ... n left ... for " Airport "...


The plane rushed with great velocity over the runway ...All the passengers were fully dugged into their seats but rey ...He was flying in air ... he could'nt control his emotions ...his gestures was not in control of his mind ..but was in control of his heart ... He could feel the blood which was rushing through his veins ... n this was not because of the "take off " but because of the arrival of a "special moment
"...a moment which he had been dreaming from last few nights ...

He kept on gazing the clouds ... n smiled ...
People around him often noticed him doing that thing in a repeated mode ... They would also see at the clouds to find wat so fascinating was there ??...

* that's human's nature *
But none of them knew that what significance the clouds had for rey ...


Those clouds were congratulating him ..." see u are finally going to live your dream "... n also the same clouds must had been over her head also ...


See how love can postulate ...deep meanings out of " mere " things ... n this is call " the love gone wild "..

Finally a small cute 4 year girl asked him " wat was so interesting in those colorless clouds ??"

For which he just smiled ... He did'nt knew himself ...Or he does ??
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As by now everyone in the plane was sleeping ... some were eating too 🤣 n oder some ppl were watching those some ppl "eat" ... 🤣



Rey took out his i pod .. plugged the lead's in his ears n started searching his favorite song ...
Half of his playlist included rock songs ...He liked them but not that much ... he again searched finally he got some of his fav . songs .. but soon after hearing them a bit .He changed the track... n began to listen those "rock songs "...
( confused ?? read further )
S
ee how your likes became their likes n their likes become "yours" ...yes those "rock songs " were loaded by " kriya " ... he listened them but not that much ...but now it was a necessity to be involded in anything that would help him spend his time off... and what can be the best way to cut off the time ...love your "lovers things " ...❤️

He did'nt knew when his eye's got heavy n he slept ...he slept for hours ...
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An hour later Continuous announcements were made to awake passengers cuz plane was going to land in few seconds ...
Another announcement ...
And another one too ...

But rey ... he was sleeping ...still sleeping ... n still doing the same ...


Finally after continuos warnings ...That small 4 year girl pulled his jacket ..."Uncle utho nah !!! uncle ...uncle ..."



N rey he woke up with a stroke ...hearing the word ' uncle' ...


The plane landed n rey got off as fast he could .He arrived the departure arena where many people were stand with boards in their hands ...soon he read his name ...


He went ahead with full excitement ...but soon all his hopes shrug down .


"hello reyansh sir" driver's voice interrupted the silence withinhis mind . Rey hummed his acknowledgement and after a pause, he turned around and searched for her. but *sigh* he couldnt see her ...


"Aur koi nahi aya ...??? " he asked to the driver .


"Aayen h na sir !! " driver replied .


"KON !! kahan !! " rey said impatiently ..


" Sir wo aapko mil jayenge abi aap muje apne bags dijiye n yahan se seedha parking me jayiye ... wahan aapke liye cab wait kr rai h ..Muje mam ke pass abhi jaana n kuch bohot important kaam h !! " driver said ..


" kya ... parking ... cab ??? Mam ... kaam ?? " rey yelled out in full desponded tone ...


" Ok ! fir tum jaao apni Mam ka i-m-p-o-r-t-a-n-t kaam krne ..." n he left ..


As soon as he entered the parking lott he was ...fully irritated but as soon as he stepped in that spl. second ..


He saw his "girl" waiting for him on a bike !! ...His heart felt like jumping ...


His muscles did thousands of contractions n relaxations per second ...


yes !! thats kriya ...


She was wearing black skinny jeans with a purple jacket n a white and green top in it ... with white n blue snickers ...


She saw him ...finally after so many months ... her eye's were wet ... She so so wanted to hug him at that moment but she could'nt ...


She turned her face to the other side ...

Rey rushed towards her n kept his hand over her shoulder making her turn towards him ...But she shrugged ...

He again tried to make her turn ...she refused ...


" Sholly nah baba ..." He said to her i a childish tone ..


"You know how much i' hv been waiting for this moments n tum...??" he said angrily...
Soon he felt a pair of hands running down his chest ... n He smiled ...it was her's ...

Her quickly embraced her in his arms ...
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" I felt so happy ..so strong ... like I was standing on my ground after a long waiting session... Watching your face ...i so wanted to touch his curved cheeks n feel them through my skin ... his sight was an medicine for my aching eye's who were waiting for him ... "
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She kept her face over his shoulder ..saying " But main abi bhi tumse naaraz hu ... tum bohot boore ho ...bohot ...!! matlab tumhe to bahana chahiye mujse door rehne ka ...hain na ?? kitne din ho gaye ...tumhe pata h ...?? Mujhe pata h tumne apni meetings and projects intentionally delay karwayi nah ... aur vo bhi 6 weeks ... n woh bhi itni door ... london ... ??? mujse baat mat karna ab ..."


She broke the hug n headed towards the bike ..


"But k-r-i-s-h-u ... meri baat to suno ...??? " he spoke with full energy n esp. stressing on word "krishu " ...

She smiled but hid her smile under her angry face ...

She sat on bike n indicated rey to take his place ... i.e behind her !!


Rey was left with no reason to argue anymore n just obeyed all her order's like an innocent lamb ...


in no time they were on road ... kriya driving the bike n that too bullet!!!!
With her shades on ...

Rey tried to get her attention but she shooed him away every time saying "don't disturb me ... m driving ! "

Rey again .. did the same ..i.e "distrubed " her !!


He slid his right hand in her jacket from behind and clutched her navel .. Sending those electric signals down her spine... She could sense those nerves which were filled with blood in his palm ..which was now playing with his navel ...


She took a sharp turn ...


"wohooow !! kriya !!! I know tum naaraz ho but itna naaraz kam se kam apni bike ke baare me to socho " rey shouted in her ears ...


"Rey ma bike ko chor dungi agar tumne ab kuch b kiya to !! " she yelled ...

This was what rey was waiting for ...

He went near her ... n planted a soft kiss over her nape ... n bit her lobe ...

She shriveled ...eventually the speed speed of bike slowed down ... rey took the accelerator in his hands ...with his one arm holding her waist from behind n other busy in handling the bike ...same with kriya ...

thank god !! the road was not a busy one ...!!

He slowly planted another kiss down her neck ...for which she held his arm ...
Both got back after a while realising the atmosphere ...

* a side look look hawa hawa *

{now u guys can imagine both of them !! at bike ... n that too like dis hehe }

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Kriya got back to her business i.e driving n rey got back his .i.e teasing her ...
He again held her from waist tightly ... n this time with both hands ...his chin resting over her shoulder ...

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precap - Air filled with love and mist ???
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so guys here was the first chapter ...
LOved it ????
was i too bad ??? :"(
So please comment ... scribble down your thoughts bout this piece ... n hit the post tab !!! n like tab too !!!

all the silent readers please come up and comment !!

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OKAY you all may b thinking are kriyaansh married ???
no ?? they are not ...
ahem ahem ... then what >????
wait till next updates !!!

Edited by upasna_mishti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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*Res*

**Unres**


Yay!!!!!First one to comment..


B4 complimenting ur SS...


Thank you so much Upi for dis SS..


Coming to d updt...


The start itself took us into higher expectations..


It was so awesome..


Rey dreaming abt Kriya n d way he was calling her as if she was his wife was really gud though they werent married.


Then d flight scene, d colourless clouds n all was very too gud.


"Uncle" part was too hilarious n funnny.


Airport scenes were rocking..


I cud imagine kriya on d bullet bike n rey behind her..


Their romace was mEgical ...


No words...it was an speechless updt.


U made me spellbound again.



Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow.. Upi aur ek kriyaansh ff...
Iske liye tujhe big jhappi...
Update was awsome...
Kria ka naraj hona and rey ka us ko mana na
i love it
and bike romance was wowww...
Aur next update jaldi jaldi kar na
love u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I really enjoyed reading this first part specially the way you started it.

Wow Kria riding a bike. Super cool.

KriYansh bike romance was also nice


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsm update... pls pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fabulous update...rey getting up dreaming of kria, listening the songs of his love...so nice
lovd the way u describd cloud with connection of love...girl caling him uncle...lolz
kria riding bike...whoa..how cool
the bike scene was amazing...just lovd it
(reminded of ArSha pic on bike)
thanx 4 d pm
update soon
Edited by --Kinjal-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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jaan it was superb..!! and starting was really AWESUM..<3 stry bhi intresting hai😉 waise u jaldi updating.. but kya kriyansh Married hai??
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awsomme dudee wooow really cool do pm me kriya ridng da bike totally funny but cn imagine itt update next 1 fats

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