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agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#191

So sorry guys ...!!
i will b taking this much tym oly frm july as my studies are started !!
all the happy days are now gonna end soon !!

will update this tommorow 😃 ...

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: yogini64
Upi . . . Tu is story ko bhul gayi? 😔

Arre nai bhuli rey !!
i was stuck wid oder updates fir arsha week aa gaya tha !! n den sabne mera dimag kha liya tha rolling hearts walle ki update dene ko !! 😭 ..

isski update aabi b mere lappy me saved h - broken ..
kal sham tal i will try to update it ..

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agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#193

updating !!! who is interested for the update ..😉

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#194

hehe snigu ruk abi !!!!☺️ ...

aur muje ye bta midnight wala kab update karegi 😭

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Snigdha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#195

Today or tommorow pakka...😳😃

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#196

ab tune promise kiya h !!! krna padega n remember cheating krni h 🤣 !!!!

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#197

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Hey guys firstly m so sorry for the delay ...

And i know the time i took to update was huge so this update should b long bit it's bit short ..😭

As i'll try to update this regularly ..😃

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CHAPTER- 3

The surpize box Mystry .

The box was small actually it was of heart shaped ..draped in red velvet cloth ..
She opened it ..
1. 2. 3...

There comes her favorite gelletino ..How she luvd it ..PLus this one was special ..with choco.. filling on top ..giving a cute brownie look .. but the seasoning done was the surprize for her ...With small letter's *R &k * Written on it
It was cute ..damn cute ...
For which all she could give was a "kiss"..

continued ...

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Rey woke from his sweet dreams ..

"shit !! why do important things happen when you need to shut your eye's badly " he said ..

There was a mail ..waiting for him ..

He opened his laptop n ..n As soon as he opened it ..he felt like everything around him was sparkling ..

The black illusion ..- India's no.1 Dirt Dance battleground ...

he checked it ..

"Finally it's here .after 3 years of rigrrus trial ..we are here ..at the top of the world .." he said ..

"The black Illusion ."

Show what you hv' got ..

The street invites you to embrace this oportunity ..

Come and fight for the right .. fight for your survival ..

For other details contact imediately ..

Signing off ..
- The illusionistic department .

He quickly called kriya ..and told her to appear at his place with group immidiately..

And there all was ..in next min...few on sofa's bitting their nails ...waiting for rey to speak up the matter ..And few on vediocall ..

He showed all that mail ..everyone was shocked ..

Is this real ..

Are they really going to b there ...

"Yes !!!! " came the answer ..

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All were walking on a black road ...totally black ...Not A single living being around ..

Pure silence ..

The street lights were dim ...

No one is here ???... how can this be possible ..

Those tree's -dark , were apearing as they gonna eat them up in any second ..

All were terrified..With those sweat drops on their forehead ..

Yes ! the situation was intense.

Should we leave ...???

No !! we can't ..!!

It was not at all appearing as if this place was "Dance streat .." ..??

What the matter ..where are all ..??

These questions were bugging up thier minds ..

Not all the member's were their ..Sharon and swayum was about to arrive ...

Rey : Guys what to do now ...!! lets move ahead hope we find anybody to ask !"

And their quest started ..For almost 5 minutes they were waking ..and walking ..

But soon they could feel the thumping sond of booster's ..

"Yes there we are ..."..

A fade sound reached their ear's ...and soon it grew louder ..and louder ...

It was like something big was waiting for them .

.Something unexpected for the pity lives ..

How can one run from his own fate ..?? No there's no way out ..

This was wriiten to happen ..and here it is ..Again those storms gonna strike the hail ..

The peaceful lives have to struggle through this !!

No other option left ...

No way back to home ...

It's do or die ...

Soon after those heavy steps they saw first sign board..

Welcome to death dance valley ..

hell is waiting for you ..

Don't be afraid ..There's no help here ..

Help yourself ..

Dance with passion ..

Dance with fire..

-take left turn from ahead ...

Why these sign boards are like this ..

"Shit !! they are scary .."

The group ..walked ahead.

vishakha got a call from sharon ..

"Vish ! we are here ..you guys ! go ahead we'll catch you soon .."

Sharon confirmed ..

Wow ! now we have to wait for this void to end !!!

It was complete uneasy ..

These empty voids were like licking their their fresh wounds .

Their hearts were beating with high speeds ..

No one coul'd understood why this was ??...

But kriya ! she was in a desperate condition ..

Every beat made her alert .!! "watch out girl ...this time not again ..."

This time ..??

What does she mean ..has she been here ...

Rey comforted her ..He held his hand ..tightly ..nodded with warmth..

He knew ..this journey was not going to be easy ..

He knew he have to catch those flakes which may try to hurt his love ...

"No i will not let this happen to her ... never ...anf if he came infront of us ..i will..take all revenge ..the impending one's .." he smirked..

Who is " he "..??

Rey texted swayum to come asap ..

The group finally stopped ..In front of a huge enterance ..It lead to a place somewhere in basement..

Ahh there it was the door to hell ..? or to heaven ..??

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Here it was ol next update will b on Wednesday or so ...

do hit the like tab ..

Shower some some ..😭..

luv ya ol ..upi ...<3

pms' on way ..😃

Edited by upasna_mishti - 14 years ago

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#198

Res

Unres

Yupiee...first one to comment!!😉😆

Surprise box...wow!!! N dat also in heart shaped one..!!

Amazing...*R n K* Dis was totally freaking superb!!

Why do important things happen in dreams!!😆😆

I had a dream yesterday nite abt my state entrance xam...better if it wont cum real🤣🤣

India's No. 1 Dance battle ground n the black illusion...*fight for survival*..

I highly doubt on dem...hope no fights in future!!

So Rey was sure he was going for it...

Empty street dim...not appearing like dance street!!😲😲

Big thing...do or die...u planned to torture us too😆😆

"Welcome to death dance valley ..
hell is waiting for you ..
Don't be afraid ..There's no help here ..
Help yourself ..
Dance with passion ..
Dance with fire..
-take left turn from ahead ..."

I personally loved d above lines more..

Hurt his love...

Something is really fishy...is it a dance battle with a bet or a harsh treatment??

Door Of Heaven N hell I guess..

Amazing Update Pasto!!

Loved it tons!!

🤗🤗

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 14 years ago

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 14 years ago

#199

res

unres

this one is scary update... n hell confusing...

Welcome to death dance valley ..

hell is waiting for you ..

Don't be afraid ..There's no help here ..

Help yourself ..

Dance with passion ..

Dance with fire..

-take left turn from ahead ...

I liked these lines... but I am damn confused as to what is the past about... and what is it, that is bothering Kria and... a lot many questions...

hope it gets clarified in the coming parts...

thanks for the pm

Edited by shenz_kriyaansh - 14 years ago

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Palakh Aggarwal

@RudrakshPreesha

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#200

res

unres

d update was scary lol🤣

Edited by pkriyaansh - 14 years ago

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