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Posted: 13 years ago
Upi story line was awesome.
Wow Kriyaansh are engaged but that past is something??
Hope they r nt affected again.Swaron wow they r married so full rights hai.tere dimag mai kya pak raha hai mai guess kar rahi hu.
Thanks for pm.
Update soon nah.waiting.


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Posted: 13 years ago
story line was awesome i loved it waiting for further update
and ii wish to see more on kriyaansh
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Posted: 13 years ago
its awesome
upsi...
love to know whats cooking in ur mind
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!!!
super cool concept
i really luved it

kriyannsh were awesome
kriya driving bike :P
lolz
n rey disturbing her ... hahahha
ROFL
:P

update next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
** chapter two ****

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after a romantic ride they reached home ...

Kriya parked the bike ... n told rey to got off n let her leave ...


" Kriya abi to tum milli ho mujse ..mene to tumhe theek se dekha b nahi h aur tum !!! theek h to fir tumhare gifts bhi me hi rakh lunga " rey teased her orbs .

"Huh ! rey tum na !! theek h me ruk jaati hu but for some time only ! *phew* tum na poore shaitan ho gaye ho " she replied in her dusky tone .

"Ye hui na 'baatcutter' waali baat " rey exclaimed n they left ...

A chuckle burst from his lips and from the corner of her eyes..


Upon arriving at the intimidating oak double doors of the rey's house , he opened it politely and entered after hearing a muffled " Ab jaldi chalo rey !! " from kriya ..

They entered , kriya was about to go in the kitchen area but rey ...

He hold her wrist h swirled her around ..."So miss , to hum kahan the "

"Rey !! leave me ...tum jao , you are looking tired , so go and fresh up !" she spoke out .

"Achcha aisa kya ?? theek h to chalo !! " rey hold her n headed towards the room .

"Rey ! par kahan ???" looking at him with questing angry eye's .

"Tumhi ne to kahan !!! " washroom " fresh nahi hona kya " rey answered her .

"Rey !!!!!!!!! choro muje !! Shaitan !! ma chali jaungi fir soch lo " she hit him .

"Achcha baba theek h !! me abi ata hun !! but agali baar tumhe nahi chorunga !! "mind it " he whispered in her ears n left .


The sound of her ragged breathing was the only thing in the room and eyes ablaze.

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When he came back ..(shirtless) he saw a note on his bed ! , 2 sandwiches , a garlic bread ..
"
rey!!
sorry m leaving tum khana kha lena !!! aur yaad h nah !! aaj 10 baje poora group online hoga !!so don't be late !! okay
- kriya
"
A sweet smile swept over his face "ye muje shaitan bolti h , khud kitni badi shaitan h !!"

Soon he heard tapping sound from his balcony ...

Crimson eyes immediately snapped open and narrowed when the sensitive hairs on the back of his neck stood on end. Bracing a hand on the ground, rey stood from his comfortable seating position and bent his knees. His eyes were silently roaming the quiet area around him.

Crickets chirped and rey's ears seemed to draw to the sound and he whirled around smoothly, his lithe legs bounding a few meters back to avoid the rustle of fabric and the dark figure that leapt into view.
Without jerking out of his ready position, rey straightened his legs and shoulders just the slightest and peered, stoically at the human shadow behind the curtain before him.holding the lantern in his hand he stepped ahead ...


"who is their ?" rey asked blandly, hands clenching at the ready.

"Some one you know " that shadow spoke out ..

But rey was pleased to hear that ...!!

"Soo !! what do you want ??" he questioned that humanly figure ..in a seductive tone ..

"ummm lemme think !! i want ... you " that shadow answred.. while coming out from the dark ...

"Ohhh !! me !! but m already booked " rey he told the shadow ...

"Oh! but that does'nt matter's me !! "the shadow answered ..

Rey slid his arms behind her waist ... n kissed her right cheek ...

She yelped after pinching herself and stared wide-eyed at the man before her

Her stomach dropping to her feet...

Rey : Tum gayi nahi ??

Kriya ...( yes its her ) : Hummm !! nahi gayi !! kyu jana chahiye tha ???

rey : humm nahi toh !! ...(giving a pause ) kriya you know ...

The way I feel about you. The more I have of you, the more I want. It's like fire, unquenched. The more fire feeds on, the more it grows. The more I... experience of you, the more I want to experience of you. (holding her )

Kriya : rey!! tum poore shaitan ho !!

Rey : ab tumne muje shaitan bna hi diya h toh !! thodi shaitani b to krni chahiye na muje "!!

He got bit close to her ...She bit on her lip, unsure of what that must have meant. He squeezed her hand, a gesture he hoped was reassuring. He made himself promise that nothing would happen if she didn't want it to. But God, he hoped she wanted him as badly as he wanted her. He put down the lantern he had held to light their path.

She still was frozen where she stood, her expression still unsure. Knowing they would get nowhere if he waited for her to make the first move, he decided to take subtle action. He tenderly brushed a few strands of her loose hair out of her face and let his hand rest on her cheek. She took in a deep breath and raised her hand to cover his. She moved away in a swift movement n she shrugged him n said

"We should go to bed... I mean, you should go to your bed, and I should go to mine... unless you wanted to go to the same bed as me... but I didn't mean it like that... I'll just be shutting up now."


Rey straightened immediately and stared coolly with expressionless eyes. The flawless planes of his face were soft with those loving emotions ..

kriya chuckled humorlessly and caught a drifting, healthy green leaf in the palm from the shrub beside .
Rey watched her movements carefully like he did with everything else. He watched the slow way kriya curled his fingers around the leaf ...
She swirled around n tossed that curled leaf on him ... n left ... saying " Buhbi jaan " !


11 pm :


FACEBOOK ..QUEST ...???
( so guys hv added a group facebook chat here do tell hows the idea ????? )

Rey's status = " back ...with bang .*winks * .."


comments (_) likes(sharon, swayum likes this ) ... unfollow post share ..

sharon : wow ! rey we will be back too !! vese kya kya kiya aane ke baad ...*evil smile*

swayum : haan rey bolo kya kya kiya *evil simy * * winks to sharon*

sharon : swayuum !!!! * blush *

Rey : hey love birds how is your moony (shrt form of honey moon )going ...

swayum : Dude !! badme bataunga .

sharon : swayum wot badme ...*kill you *

swayum : @ sharon ... arre i will tell him bout beautiful nature here ...

Rey : * rolf * *rolf * ... guys missing you here * rolf* vese tum dono kr kya rahe ho ..:p

Kriya : hey guys !! hey sworan ... hows your moony going ...:P hey rey ...

Rey : krishu ... <3

swayum :@ sharon ...lets leave ... arre in dono ko privacy chahiye nah ? :P

sharon : ohh haa ..."privacy " ... k by enjoy here :P
kriya : shut up guys !!! vo kaam karo jiske liye tum apna moony ke beech onlyn ho ... vese alag alag id se ... ???? means ..koi ek aa jata ... hehe ladai hui kya ..:P

rey : yup kriya me b yahi soch rha tha ...!!

notification ~ kriya likes your status ...:P

rey : kriya sandwiches were awsam *blush*

kriya : thanks rey tumne poora khaya nah ??

swayum : ooo sandwhiches ?? kriya parcel them to me also...

kriya : @ swayum : lol ...

rey :@ swyum huh ! kriya dun give him anything ...:x

swayum: @ rey !! kyu bhabi h meri ... isme kya galat h

kriya : * blush*

Rey : *winks *

Neha : tumne bulaya aur hum chale aaye ...

Vicky : jaanejaaa dhundtaaa fir rhaaa hu tuze raat din me yahan se wahan ...

Sharon : ohho kya entry h :p

Neha : babuuu <3

vicky : kaguuu <3

Kriya : hey kagu babu ...

Rey : guys ab chalo lets disscuss the main thing ...

swayum : @ rey : kya ...*winks evil smyl *

Rey : ohho tu chup reh ...evil smyls ma b de skata hu ...;p

Swayum : *mouth shut *

Kriya : ????????

Sharon : seriously wats happening ????????

Nilesh : gimme d beat guys ...

Vicky : aye tu fir se beat mang rha h ruk ab to me tuze zoor waali " beat "dunga...;p

Simmi : hey guys me hv to leave ... n nil too so lets discuss the matter first ...

rey : where's vishakha bharat , n rimar ???

Kriya : told ya rey ...they are out off town will b back tommorow...

Rey : okay so lets start ...

Swayum : @ rey *winks * start what ????

Rey : @ swayum to too make dangerous point ...;p lol

Swayum : i got it ... so guys as we know we are late ... have'nt prepared anything ... so we have to buck up ...

kriya : c who's speeking ... the sandwich eater :p lol

sharong @kriya :p lol ya true ...@ swayum ;p

rey : be serious guys !!! so as " black illusion " is starting ...so i hv got an registration mail from them ...hv filled all bio-data of team ...if i will get any response then i willl mail you all ...

kriya : yup rey ..

rey : @ kriya <3

sharon : guys m feeling too sleepy ...*yawn*

swayum : me too :( :D ;D

rey : ohh so both feeling sleepy ... together .. at your moony ...;p

kriya : @ rey agreed :p sath sath ...

rey : @ kriya <3

kriya : @ rey *blush* *blush *

sharon ; shut up guys ... m going offline ...






And she just closed her laptop n swayum's too ...



"Sharon bye to bolne deti " he yelled out ...

sharon comforting herself in his lap(means she was their whole time ;p) ...


"NAHI muje neend aa rai h " se said ..


"Sach me ????? " swayum said getting close to her ...

"haan !!!!!!! " she pushed him n got under the blanket ...

Swayum reached forward pulled the blanket a bit ... n he found his princess sleeping ...

*** tring tring ***

"hie " she said ...in a low soft tone ...

"so missing me ?" rey spoke ...

"NO !! m feeling sleepy ... bye ...!! " she said in a sleepy tone ...n was about to cut ..

" arre ruko nah !!! bas ek min. " he said .

"Kya jaldi bolo !!!! rey !! " kriya said alarmingly ...

"Achcha ek baar " i love you bolo nah " he said teasingly ...

"rey !! badmaash !! muje sone do !! " she said angrily ...

"Achcha matlab ab me badmaash b hu ...suabh tak to shaitan tha...?? " he said

" haan ho tum ...ek no. ke badmaash !! " she spoke out in fake anger .


"achcha toh me badmaash hu .theek h then gud night " he said .. just cutting the call but he heard sumthing ...something he has been waiting for ...


" i love you ...!! " she she hissed between clenched teeth. in her lovingly tone ... n disconnected the call ...

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so guys .. thanks a lot for the support ...
do temme how was dis part ...

pmz to be sent out tomorrow ...


~~~ teaser ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
A mail ...??
What's in that box ...which rey had got from london ... n that too from bakery ..??
A surprize ...!! for you all ... for sure ...!


" kriya ! we have to leave ... tomorrow ... ... call all the gang at my home right now ...!!as soon as possible ..." rey ordered her...

Kriya called all the other members ...

All arrived at rey's house ...

A long discussion ...


And an "Invitation " ...for " Black illusion "...

What is " black illusion" ...????

Its something related to ...???
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I know its a questioning teaser ...🤣 So excited for update ...
will be updating asap ...!!!!
thanks for your great support ...!! please keep supporting like dis only ...
<3
upi ~
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Edited by upasna_mishti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
pehle to me commenting first... YIPPEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

now so lovely i mean kitne pyaar se woh log ghar aaye ...

fir how rey didn't want her to go... so sweet...

rey is bada wala shaitaan totally...

matlab jaldi se shaadi karvado bechaara kitna patana padta hai...

then she cooked the breakfast and left and she enuired it on FB chat too.. aww the care and concern was too adorable... ussi se yaad aaya FB chat such a cool idea... dekho gang is modernized...😆 loved them teasing each other

fir how she came chupke-2 to surprise rey and how rey wanted to go in for that moment and obviously he had to take the first step.. kriya toh lene se rhi...

and then going to bed wala bechaari kria... and woh leaf wala part was good to imagine...

raat ko how he called her... for 3 words and finally got it...

accha one thing... kriyansh i thot lived in one house😕

and itne saare questions??????????? tu teaser de rhi thi ya tease kar rhi thi...😛

bakery se kya aaya and he was a regular customer?????

kitne sawaal and jawab sirf tere paas...

Toh fir
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UPDATE ASAP...
Edited by kriyansh24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

*Res*

**Unres**

Amazing updt...


Loved d bike ride...


N then d total house scenes..


FB chat was amazing..


Updt was fabulous..


Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum update
luvd da convo between da group
ty fr da pm 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update upi!!!
loved it tonss...
loved the way rey shaitaani karne ki koshish kar raha tha
their facebook chat was just amazing
but wat is black illusion???
the teaser was very confusing
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
Thankx 4 d pm...
Update nxt part soon...

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