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Posted: 13 years ago
wow upi kya update likha h 😃

dat means sharon n kria are sisters n dat to real one...bt unki mom dad ki death hw come...ek dam se...n dat uncle...sooo much confusion

bt love da way u describe da place
its hell scary...bt rey n kria are together...love it

n spirits hmmm intersenting

ek bat smjh ni ayi sbko bhoot chad gye h kya 🤣 jise dekho spirit or supernatural thngs par likh ra h...bt i m loving it 😆

awsome update upiii!!!!!!!!!!
loved it alot
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg awesum updates upi loved it
why is kria more in danger dan sharon? L:O
all is so confusing but i love dat u r writing nd handling dis so well awesum upi

jaldi update karo :D:D

thanks for d pm
update soon <333
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update upi👏

each and every part was amazing😊

beautifully written👍🏼

waiting for d next part😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...loved it
and it was damm scary
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing to know that krisha r sister

and more amazing

that they stay together


loved it


awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
is the he the dad or rey and amazing update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Beautiful story but scary & dangerous as well. 😕

Try to sort out our confusions soon.

I think that is d spirit of Kria's dad.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Redeeming Love


Sharon Was tensed ..too much For kriya ...As the whole story which kriya knew bout their existence was acutally just a yarn of cotton ..The truth was far away from her sight...
The whole Drama starts from here ..
Their father and mother were actually savior's of Love stone .
The Small broken pendent which thier dad gave them @ last ..were actually ..The broken pieces of "Love stone .."

Now why it broke down ..??
The answer to this is ..That .."Love stone " is guarded by 5 people or rather i should say "5 master's "..Two of them were Kriys and sharon's parents ..And other three were evil master's who run's Black illusion.. And the head ..of them ..is Rey's dad ...
Yes .Rey belongs to them ..But his father's intentions are unknown to him ..
Year's ago when ..the 5 savior's got to know about the immense power's restored in love stone .They started nurturing those evil wishes among them ...But When Sharon and kriya's parents protested ..They killed them ..But all the evil tries were fatal .
Ultimately Love stone was dissapeared ..Only one piece was left with the evil master's ..And other two pieces were With Kriya and sharon Deep inside them ...
But only sharon knew anout this truth not kriya..
Why only sharon knew about this truth ..Why not kriyaa ..??
The simple explanation to this is .."The way *Love stone * works ..."
Yes ..Only complete soul's can use or find the immense power that love stone behold's...
When sharon's uncle ..Told her about the possible coming fear's to them ..She got married to swayum to complete her soul ..To complete herself ..

But what about kriya ..??

Sharon always insisted kriya to get married ..but kriya alway's denied of getting married so soon...But as its said ..Strange are the way's of destiny ..At the same time.. when sharon got married ..The evil master's called them to take part in black illusion In fear of loosing kriya's chance also ..
Mean's They were now not able to hurt sharon anymore as she had got her stone power's alive ..by completeing herself ..The the one who completed her was "swayum ".And Swayum also had some effect of stone protective part's ..As after that night between them They owned each other ..And so their power's ..Power's to defeat the evil's around them ..

Now What's the case with kriya and rey ???

Rey and kriya were engaged in hustle bustle ..And all this was due to Sharon's insecurities , and she was true they should get ..
But when She told her uncle bout thier departutre to "illusion island " Uncle insisted her to take whole group their ..Why ? so ? It was because ..the evil master's got to know everything bout Ghai sister's ..Their present their past ..And their future ..it was in danger ..And in this critical situation Going to the death evil place was like stepping voluntarily into lion's den ...But she did so ..Because Rey supported her ..
Yes ! Rey was with her ..Understanding her insecurities for kriya ..Understanding the time's demand ..

It was now evil vibe's on peak around them ..They got those threating Negetive sign's ..Like those evil dream's which kriya saw in her night's ...Those evil tricks of the master's to get Rey own the power's of stone which kriya had ..

Does it mean Rey literally belonged to them ..Was he evil ..?

No he wasn't ! Rey alway's managed to balance his lie's which he told to his Dad , The head of saviour's or rather i should say Demon ..
And Sharon was also unaware about Rey's reality ..That he belonged to those Creaky devils..
No ! Rey always's hated his Dad ..and He was very well aware of his Dad's intensions but Rey's Dad was unaware of Rey's ..
Rey hated his Dad as he was among those Alive Monster's who was hungry for ruling this whole Spiritual dimension by destroying the The left Love stone pieces which was ensuring the left peace there ...

What was Dad's intension's ???..All He wanted was to Destroy The Left pieces of Love stone ..I.e The piece in Kriya's soul ..sharon's stone as said was already alive but kriya's stone power's were dormant due to her incomplete soul ...

But Rey he knew His dad's intension's very well ..His dad ordered Rey to make kriya fall for him And rey did same ..But he truely loved her ..And misleading her was against his thoughts ..From the start he loved him ..And his hatered for his Dad added fuel in his feelings He loved her and he willl Save her anyway ..

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The next morning It was their Second day in Illusion island ..
Kriya woke up from her dreamy sleep ..She was so pleased to feel the cool breeze which embraced her ...
She opened the window.. to let more air fill her room ..And she saw Rey working out in garden ..
He was Casualy doing his push ups ..She rushed down to see him .
One .. Two..Three..
" Rey ! good morning.." She said with a wide smile .
But rey was not responding as he was having ear plugs on , listing the music. She extended her arm to pull them out . But before she could pull them A girl came and pulled them out ..
Rey was left shocked ..To find who was her he stood up . On one side he saw kriya , who was completely confused , And on the other side was "Resha " His childhood friend ..
Resha glared kriya form the corner of her eye's ..Kriya felt bit uneasy ..
She questioned rey through her actions "Who was she ..?? "
"kriya ..she is resha .. my childhood friend ..rehsa she is kriyaa.." rey said ..
"Oh ! so she is kriya , she is beautiful ..haan .." resha said to rey.
"umm ya resha .." rey said .. with a bit possessive look on his face .."Kriya ..sharon is calling you hurry " rey added .
Why he lied ..Resha eye'd him ..Kriya left the place with numerous questiones in her mind ..
"What's going on dude.. haven't you used her yet ??" resha asked.
"Resha m trying .. You know Sharon is alwyas with her ..she don't leave her for a moment .." rey lied."Oh!! is that so ?? then Rey your dad is angry he might take another step to overcome this aim ..If you aren't someone else will do it ? And also ..how will we get married haan ?? " resha said resting her hand on his shoulder..
He shuddered "Resha .. i will do it .. now i have to leave .."
"How can you leave ..like this rey ..You have changed a lot in these 5 year's ..atleast give a goodbye kiss .." she said coming close to him

"Resha please .." rey said ..maintaining the distance ..

"Fain !! Rey ! Ravish .. is back .." resha said ..and left the place..

"Ravish is back ..?? He is back .. " rey smirked ..He immidiately left for sharon's room ..


*@Sharon's room *

"Sharon !! Resha came today .. and she told that ravish is back ..!!" rey said ...
"What!! W*F .. ravish .. is back .." sharon said horrified..



*CONTINUED*(PART B)


Facing your Darkest adversities ..that was all left for the two sister's '


Ravish . Rey's elder brother ..He loved Rey more than his own life but as said ..The taste of evil bites lasts for long ,Ravish always's walked on his father's steps . He was a real cannabalist . For him existance of the weak persons was a curse for the power holder's . A person's life didn't cost him ,All he knew was who so ever comes in his way Just kill Him and move ahead . He was the future Crown holder of this evil empire . Death , There was no such word in his dictionary 'All for him the meaning of his name is "Fear" '


"Sharon calm down ..Ravish will not do anything to us untill I'm here 'trust me '..He can't .." rey comforted her , patting her back ..


"How can he ..Rey '. He is the evilest of the lot ..and you say he can't ..How ' What will you do and what can we do .." sharon said ..Her eye's were Red , itiching due to this frightest sight of reality ..He was back '..


Reason why sharon is terrified was obvious , as Ravish was to be the crown holder and if he come to know bout Kriya's secret i.e of stone , he may hurt her upto any extent to Kill this last hope .

"Sharon ..Let me handle this game from now ..and trust me '" Rey said holding the door and as he stepped out he saw Kriya standing there ,All she managed to study form his face was that The things were'nt normal '

"Rey is everything alright .."

"Ya baby ..it is ..i was just coming to your room '"

"No ..! rey it isn't appearing normal ..You are looking so tensed ..And sharon she haven't talked to me since morning '.I came here but she didn't replied .."

"kriya ..! All are tensed for our performance ..See we haven't practiced anything ..All are roaming here abd there ..Now you get ready and inform other's about the practice ..It's after an hour '"

"Kay ..I'm informing sharon first " Kriya caught the hold of door attempting to open it but rey blocked her path saying "Kriyaa 'I have informed her already ..you inform others ."

"Okay 'I will .." and she left with a mouth full of questions and disgust 'Why is Rey acting like that ..Who was that Bitch Resha Miss Fevicol 'She quietly passed the corridor ..She entered her room ' For a second she felt like someone was in the room in her absence , She rubbed her eye's to check it again ..But there wasn't any traces of any arrival ..All she could remember was That black streak of light when she openend the door ..Now she was hell confused ..All the things around her were giving a dull apearance ..She could hear those typical horor tunes banging in her mind ..

"Stop it ..!!! " she shouted 'closing her eye's tightly .

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So here was the left part i'have tried really hard to clear all the confusions if still some are left i'll be clearing them soon . regarding the last scene of kriya , mystery will be resolved today only , I'll be updating next part today ..Also it's the afternoon so only few of you will read this chap , just fill 5 pages for me and i'll update it ...Again sorry for the delay .. will try to finish this one asap ..

Edited by upasna_mishti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oky me not talking to u...

toh main bas update related baat karungi,...

so pehle clear the biggest confusion: rey ko papa ke evil intentions ke baare mein pata hai ya nahi????? becoz tune start mein kuch aur kaha and then end mein kuch aur...

toh love stone ke baare mein sabkuch cleared... u know reminds me of cptain planet the cartoon and dengeons and dragons and hatim...

accha one more question: y were they waiting for invitation to black illusion...

zyada asaan toh rey apne contacts use karta... u know papa's connection... matlaab jab 2 of them or ya fir 3 (swaron and rey) know the the evil fir vahan kyun going????

who is ravish??? u know accha hai ki bura???? aas rey smirked hearing his name lekin sharon told W*F...

so looks like ki kriy is the one to be wanted... hve a feeling she is VERY STRONg... u know tv pe aisa hi dikate hain...

so loved the update... fb se samajh aane laga...

me waiting for kriyansh union😉

awesome update UPI!!!!!!

but am still angry... so bye... no other talks...
Edited by kriyansh24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

oky me not talking to u...

toh main bas update related baat karungi,...

so pehle clear the biggest confusion: rey ko papa ke evil intentions ke baare mein pata hai ya nahi????? becoz tune start mein kuch aur kaha and then end mein kuch aur...

toh love stone ke baare mein sabkuch cleared... u know reminds me of cptain planet the cartoon and dengeons and dragons and hatim...

accha one more question: y were they waiting for invitation to black illusion...

zyada asaan toh rey apne contacts use karta... u know papa's connection... matlaab jab 2 of them or ya fir 3 (swaron and rey) know the the evil fir vahan kyun going????

who is ravish??? u know accha hai ki bura???? aas rey smirked hearing his name lekin sharon told W*F...

so looks like ki kriy is the one to be wanted... hve a feeling she is VERY STRONg... u know tv pe aisa hi dikate hain...

so loved the update... fb se samajh aane laga...

me waiting for kriyansh union😉

awesome update UPI!!!!!!

but am still angry... so bye... no other talks...

vaishu y not baat kring ... mujse .. y gussa .. u didn't got my testi kya ??? me was off yr .. n i have a pure reason ... abi isse poora update krna h sham tak karungi isse update poora ..

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