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@Death_Memories

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#791

awesome par cliffhanger kyu
loved it
pls pm me whn u update
pls update soon me dying to read

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#792

Thanks a lot people for liking and commenting but i m expecting better response... and shaanu aisa lagta tu hi interested hai... love you thnks for the spamming... i know late ho gayi but kaan pakad ke sorry coz today i was just making siggies.. but so without wasting time... here you go with the update...

PART19

sh: what the hell are you doing here... tumne jaan buch ke... chahte kya ho tum.. she was holding on to the handle of the door...

sw: Sharon..!! *in disbelief* tum aise soch bhi kaise sakti ho... ki me tumhare...

sh: bilkul vaise jaise tumne socha tha...

suddenly she hears some scary noise*actually made by rey* she just let go the door handle and just hugged swayam... *n because sharon left the handle the lock got jammed now even KR could not open the door bahar se*

sw: *making patterns on her back* ssshhh its ok its ok it was just some voice...

sh: but she was scared she dint even dare to open her eyes neither did she leave him...

sw: sharon.. please ek baar meri baat sunlo... please i know i was wro...

sharon left him with a jerk...

sh: just cause me darr gayi and i hugged you does not mean maine tumhe maaf kia or i am interested in talking with you...

sw: lekin...

just then sharon felt something on her feet.. she just screamed and ran into swayam's arms... she stood on his feet...

sw: sharon isnt this enough proof for you... you knew i wouldnt let anything happen to you... thats why you came running into my arms... coz u feel safe... sharon please just...

sharon came few steps behind...

sh: ooohhh toh yeh sab tumhari chal hai... you are trying to win me so that you have no competition left for footloose and you can win easily... oohh how can i forget you always tried to use me aaj ye mauka kaise chod deta...

swayam could not talk it anymore... she was accusing for something he could never even dream of doing...

swayam just took out his phone and called up someone...

sw: hello rey i m stuck here in the store please bahar se kholde... n kept the phone...

there was complete silence in the room... sharon did not even dare to look into his eyes...

after a few minutes his phone rang...

re: arre swayam door toh andarse lock ho gaya hai...

sw: what... shit...

sw: the door is jammed.. shayad hume yaha kuch ghante wait karna pade sharon quitely just went to one corner n sat down without arguing...

after about three hours...

they heard someone open the door... they both get up... n go near the door... the door opened and swayam and sharon both look at each other...

sw: tum yaha kya kar rahe ho raj...??

sh: jo bhi karre ho thanks for opening the door...*and she leaves*

ra: tumhe kya laga uss din ke baad me tum dono ko akela chod dunga... sharon is only mine...

swayam punches him...

sw: sharon se toh tum dur hi rehna... varna * and he also leaves*

next day in the rehearsal hall:

sh: 5..6.. 5 6 7 go... 1 & 2 & 3 &4...
simmi what the hell are you doing you have to do a pump... n nil u have lock.. vicky will do the popping... n rinni why the hell are are you doing an open second tumhe baby freeze karna hai... n rey tum attitude turn kyu kar rahe ho... tumhe head spin karna hai..

si: sharon voo..

vi: vo tum...

sh: wat... * Screams*

ri: sharon we are doing a comtemporary+ ballet routine not a hip hop one...

sh: i m so... i m sooo sorry guys n leaves...

So this is it... i hope its long enough... please hit the hit like button and do comment... feel free for any suggestions... next update page 130

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Edited by manasie - 13 years ago

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#793

res*edited*

Thanks for updating for me...love you...

phew tunhe zagde ke bich swaron toh diya...

zagda khatam kar jaldi manu...bore hoying zagde se...

aaj kal toh show mein bhi full on chichayi ho rahi hai, aur tu zagda karwa rahi hai...

loved the swaron u gave with their zagda...update jaldi please...

Edited by shaani2209 - 13 years ago

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#794

ye kya fight abhi tak resolve nahi hui ? Aur here i was thinking closed room mein romantic moments honge ! anyway awesome update.

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718075

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#795

res

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Mannu Di yeh kya ho raha hai...why can;t they just end the fight...ohh my god...

Mannu di...jaldi dono ko saath kardo...the way ran into his arms was so cute...loved it...

Update soon...

P.S. shayad thode updates main comment na mile as i will not come online but do keeo sending me the PM's..I love your FF and will read it once i return.

Love you Di

Edited by swaron95 - 13 years ago

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#796

Nice part,par ab to inka jhagda khatam karva do.i loved it when sharon hug swayam n swayam said that she feel safe in his arms,that was soo cuet.UPDATE IT SOON...

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ash

@CrazyGirl.21

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#797

tu last lyn green color se likhna chahti thi ye pta chl gya :P:P:P:P

nyc update...i just lovveeedd it fubbles !!! u ryt osmmm...n baaki FFs me log likhte hain ki sharon felt safe in swayam's armz pr tu diffrent he...uska live demo dikha dia :P

ok d update was fab...pls update asap :P :) ;)

P.S. rosh u r an osmm spammer :P