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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello Everyone!

I know I had went into hibernation for awhile now - due to family and educational reasons. But I had some free time in the past few days and so I did some editing on something I had worked on last December. Since my earlier topic got closed, I am opening a new one now.

Here's the link to the old one:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1625955

Please do read it if you haven't already. Because this is kind of a continuation from the confession in that story.

Please do comment.

Thank you! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Memories

Memory # 1 : A Beautiful Journey - Page 1
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A Beautiful Journey


It was a winter evening and a chilly breeze hit Mayank Sharma as he stepped out of his office building. Usually he would've stopped and closed his jacket properly before stepping further but today, he just hugged it in place and ran to his car, as he was in a hurry. And he had every reason to be in a hurry because he was after all, on his way to his hometown for his wedding with the love of his life, Nupur. Nupur had been his best friend since the age of 5 and during college, the friendship blossomed into love. He had confessed his love to her on a magical winter evening such as this, only to learn that she was deeply in love with him as well. Finally after three beautiful years since they first confessed their love, they would be getting married in a week. He had taken 3 weeks off from his work and was heading back to make her his, officially. But before that he needed to pick up his blushing bride from her hostel, as they would be going back home together.


When Mayank arrived at her hostel, Nupur was waiting for him in the front lobby with her best friend, Dia. Nupur quickly bid Dia goodbye while Mayank loaded the suitcases into the car and soon they were both on their way to his apartment, so he can freshen up.

***************


An hour later...


"Mayank, come out already!"


"2 more minutes Nupur," Mayank yelled back from the washroom.


"That's what you said 20 minutes ago Mayank!!!" she yelled in irritation. "Mayank!! If you don't come out in 2 minutes, I swear I will call Dad right now and tell him to cancel this wedding!! I can't get married to someone who is obsessed with his hair" Mayank was standing in front the mirror in his washroom, fixing his hair when he heard Nupur yelling from the outside. He knew he was ticking her off by taking so long in the washroom but hey, a man has to take care of his hair, right? and plus, he loved seeing her all worked up. She looks so cute, when she is irritated and cursing him under her breath.


When he finally stepped out of the washroom, he saw that the bedroom was empty. So he moved out of the room in search of his sweetheart. When he reached the living room, he saw her in the kitchen making coffee for them while cursing him for being concerned about his hair. He leaned on the doorway and admired the sight. The thought that next time she is in this kitchen, they would be husband and wife brought about this unknown happiness in him. He slowly walked to her without making any noise and hugged her from behind.


"Mayank!" She turned around in his hold and continued, "Finally, you came out!"


"Nupur, ca..." He was cut short by her, like always. "Seriously, I don't understand why you take so long in the washroom. Even girls don't spend so much time in there! We are getting late. God -" He suddenly captured her lips in a kiss, preventing her from saying anything more. He couldn't help it, her rambling lips was always tempting and plus this was the only way he could make her quiet. His hands started moving on her back, while she ran her fingers through his hair. They were both lost in the beautiful moment.


It was only when they heard Mayank's cell ring, that they realized they were out of breath and pulled back from the kiss. Mayank moved back a little to get his cell phone from the counter top and Nupur used this opportunity to get out of his hold.


"Hi Mom!"

...

"Yes I've picked up Nupur"

...

"Ya, we are just about to leave from here"

...

"Ok sure, see u soon"


It was his mother calling to check whether they had left already or not. Putting his phone back into his pocket, he looked at her and saw that she was holding the coffee mug in her hands, still blushing.


"Oye-hoye! How cute - My fiancee is blushing" He kissed on her forehead. She placed her index finger on his chest and pushed him back saying, "I'm not blushing and here, drink this - We have to leave."


She walked back to the living room, while he stood there with a grin on his face.


"Now stop grinning like a fool and quickly drink the coffee Mayank. We have to go," she said in her normal voice again. He went up to her and hugged her tightly once saying, "I would love to make u more red but unfortunately, we do have to get going now. Anyways just one more week and then..."


"Mayank..." she hit his arms lightly.


***************


Finally an hour later and after Nupur's numerous scoldings, the two were finally on their way. The joy in their hearts knew no bounds. After all, the day they had been looking forward to, since the day they realized their love, was finally just a week away. They will finally belong to each other, officially.


The car ride was as perfect as it could get. Outside, snow was falling and the temperature was just right - not freezing but cold enough. Inside the car, melodious hindi song was playing but as usual, Nupur was talking over it while Mayank quietly listened to her, voicing his opinion or comment when needed. Ever since they had met, this has always been the case - she talks and he listens. Although he made fun of her for non-stop talking, he loved listening to her and also he had the perfect way to shut her up if needed.


When they were about 2 hours away from their house, Mayank noticed that Nupur was talking less and less, Within few minutes, she had fallen asleep in the car. He couldn't help but admire the sight she made when she was sleeping. There was always a smile on her face - an innocent smile which would make you smile along with her. He caressed her forehead with his free hand and put the small pillow under her head so that she was comfortable. Leaning over, he placed a kiss on her face before stepping on the accelerator.

***************


Finally, the car came to a halt in front of Nupur's house. Mayank turned around to see her still asleep, hugging her jacket close in the passenger seat. He felt bad for having to disturb her sleep but it was late and he knew her dad would be worried about how his little princess hasn't arrived home yet. So he turned on the light in the car and she immediately scrunched up her face, in irritation - just like she did during their first sleepover when he had tried to wake her up using a flashlight. He slowly moved towards her face and caressed her forehead lightly, before placing a kiss on her cheek.


"Nupur..."


"Hmm...Mayu, don't move...let me sleep," she said pulling him closer in her sleep. Mayank smiled at her antics, before placing another kiss on her cheek.


"Sweetheart, I would love to stay like this, but we are in front of your house and your dad might come out any minute now," he said calmly. As her brain decoded the meaning of his words, she immediately opened her eyes and pushed him back. He chuckled and pulled her close again, before saying "Slow down Madam, Uncle doesn't know we are here yet."


"Mayank, chodo mujhe," she said as she attempted to get out of his hold.


"Achha? Just a minute ago, madam willingly pulled me close and held me tight. Now you are telling me to let go. This is not fair"


"Well, Mr.Sharma, ever heard of the saying 'everything is fair in love and war'? Now let me go, I want to go in and see everyone"


"No way, first give me my daily quota of 'mithai'", he said pointing to his lips "and I will let you go."


"Mayank, please. Abhi nahi...Dad or Mom might come out, please."


"No," he shook his head. "These excuses won't work. Your living room lights are off, which means Aunty and Uncle are not downstairs." he said, in a matter-of-fact tone.


"Mayank, I already gave you your sweets" she said with a blush "and now I want to go home and see everyone. Please na."


"But we are not going to be able to see each other for the next 7 days, I want compensation for it in advance," he said while his eyes were fixed on her. His hands were busy caressing the corner of her lips.


"Mayank...please na..." she managed to say out.


"Ok, fine go," he said as he moved back to open his door. Stepping out, he went to the back of the car to unload her bags. She followed him and stood beside him as he took out her bags from the trunk. Just as he was about to close the trunk, Nupur stopped him by holding his hand. He looked at her questioningly. She just smiled and tightened her hold on his hand before placing her lips on his. After an initial shock, Mayank pulled her closer deepening the kiss. Her hands found their way to his collar and she pulled him closer. His hands tightened around her waist, while her hands reached his hair. They parted a little only after the need for oxygen became a necessity but even then his arms were around her, holding her close. His index finger softly lifted her face so that their eyes met. She saw unbound love for her in his eyes - something she had never failed to see. She stood on her tiptoes and gave a butterfly kiss on his lips before saying, "I Love You Mayank".


He kissed her back and looking into her eyes, he replied "Love u too Princess!". She hugged him tight as snowflakes danced around them making the moment more magical.


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Thank u for reading! About the title: I really had no clue what to name it, so I named it this. I hope to come back soon with another os or part of Memories in the Making.


IshitaS

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Posted: 13 years ago
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woah!!! look who's here??😲
Welcome back sweetheart!!!🤗

It was a beautiful journey indeed😍.. I so missed your writing

❤️❤️
~jiya~
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Posted: 13 years ago
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welcome back Ishi.🤗
loved the OS.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That ws so amazing dear...
Loved every bit of it, the irritation, the naughtiness, blushes, romance all wr so dreamy...
Truly magical...
Cont with a part of memories in the making dear..I so miss that FF...i really do..
Plz try to update that...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome OS dear...
loved it to d coreee...
it was actually filled wid Love n Adorable moments...
loved it to BITS...
Beautifully written...
Good to see u back here...
plzzz do continue wid der Weeding...
love ya...🤗

Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!😲 res!
*edited*
I already told u it was an awesome one yet again <3...thank god u posted it :D
it was beautifully scripted all along...their love n passion was ncely put across by u didu :) 🤗
you are my one of the fav most writers n its sooo gud to have u back...hope to see more of u n freq...!! :)
love u diii...🤗 keep writing on this LOVELY couple...❤️ 🤗
Edited by --.munchkin.-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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felt really nice seeing ur pm
missed ur writings
it was indeed a beautiful journey
hope to see u write more on mn soon
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww its so beautiful os.Simply mindblowing.I think i knw who were in mayur place:D

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