Burning in your Love (Parts 14 to 19)

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Chhaya

@arhi-fan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#991

Hey smita!
Just read all the parts together frm where i had left. Couldnt cmment regularly as was out of town n busy.

The whole ceremony of marriage n all the rasams were all so awesome. U described all the vows so nicely. It was the best wedding v could imagine for them. Just the best.

Cming to the suhaag raat it was just awesome. U wrote everything very beautifully. But why did u end it here ek epilogue to banta h. Pls. Pls.

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love_arshi

@love_arshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#992

Hey Smita! It is just lovely...

Your update is simply awesome.

Thanks for the PM.

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667300

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Posted: 13 years ago

#993

Just finished reading this SS. It was wonderfully written! All the amazing details and the callbacks to the past and Arnav regretting little moments and making up to Khushi were amazing. Loved it all :D

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xxSassyxx

@xxSassyxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#994

Part 18 Section 2

Loved the description of all the wedding rituals and the meaning it had for the two of them - their silent communication and smiles to each other created such a nice sense of happiness. The pictures accompanying the story were lovely. 😃

Enjoying this story so much.

Thanks for the pm.