ArYa... Humara Vivah - Part 1(a)/Pg 1 - May 12-12

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Hi My Name Is Misti.

Guys I am sorry if my fiction is unattractive (at the moment) cause I wrote it in pain of quieting my job today. And thought of best way in writing to feel better.




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Clears Points...

Yash's family is same expect for Dadi. I am adding our beloved Dadi from Geet.

Aarti is very mysterious person who doesn't open up with anyone other than her inner self. You will get to know more about her throughout the journey.

Characters

Savarti Sindhiya: Grandmother of Pankaj, Yash and Pratiek, but emotionally attach to her grandson Yash and his daughters.

Suraj Pratap Sindhiya: Son of Savarti and father of three kids. Mostly worried about his second son Yash after his wife's death. Otherwise support his wife in everything she decide, but he makes the finally call.

Gayatri Suraj Sindhiya: Mother of three kids (Pankaj, Pratiek and Yash), but worried about Yash and his daughters. Always trying to convince her son into getting married again for his daughters. Hardly share a good relation with her mother-in-law, but always wanting to be in control of her family members with her husband's support.

Pankaj Sindhiya: Eldest son of Suraj and Gayatri. Share awesome relation with his siblings and with his wife. Always trying to spend time with his wife, but she is drift into taking care of their and his family.

Vidhi Pankaj Sindhiya: Wife of Pankaj and mother of two kids. Always trying to keep her family bond together without realizing the distance she created between her and her husband.

Yash Sindhiya: Second child of Suraj and Gayatri. Emotionally attach with few people (his siblings, his Dadi and his wife Arpita) who met the world to him. Her death shattered him deeply. Always trying to be the best father for his girls and never give up in his life.

Arpita Yash Sindhiya: Yash's wife and mother of Palak and Payal. Her death left her family shattered.. mostly her husband Yash.

Palak Sindhiya: Daughter of Yash and Arpita

Payal Sindhiya: Daughter of Yash and Arpita

Pratiek Sindhiya: Youngest member of the family. Always trying to bring laughter into his Yash Bro's life. He even swore that he'll never get married if his Yash Bhai doesn't agree to get married again. Deeply in love with Paridi.

(That's short intro of Sindhiya family and now Aarti's family)

Satyendra Dubey: Always support his wife and her decision she takes toward their daughter-in-law Aarti. They broke ties with their own blood Prashant for his betrayal toward Aarti and his son Ansh.

Shobha Dubey: Proud mother-in-law of Aarti who swore in getting her daughter married again after the betrayal her son gave Aarti. She hardly cares about her son anymore and treats her bahu as her daughter. Only wants her happiness and her grandson's happiness.

Prashant Dubey: Aarti's ex-husband who left her for some girl name Nida. Also didn't care about his unborn child too.

Aarti Dubey: She is very mysterious person who hardly share her feelings with anyone except for her inner self. She lives for son and only his happiness otherwise she is living corpse after her ex-husband's betrayal.

Ansh Dubey: Spoiled son of Aarti. Emotionally attach to his mother because he doesn't know who is his father and always desire to meet his father.. just once.

Other Characters

Paridi: Love interest of Pratiek

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Concept of Hum Tum aur Humara Vivah

Its story about Aarti (who is mysterious person who hardly open up with anyone) and Yash (who is emotionally in love with his wife Arpita and after her death. His life shattered. Only lives for his daughters). Both of them have different lifestyle and yet destine to meet in the bond of marriage.

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interesting concept... nice c/s..
congrats for starting a new ff...

don't worry... its only a job.. and u quit it for any reason naa..
hope something good will happen to you real soon..
good luck👍🏼
Edited by disha_Maan.GC - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: disha_Maan.GC

interesting concept... nice c/s..
congrats for starting a new ff...

don't worry... its only a job.. and u quit it for any reason naa..
hope something good will happen to you real soon..
good luck👍🏼



Thank you so much.. I know I had my reason to leave the job, but now looking for another is hard. If my ex-manager didn't leave us than I would have never dreamed of quieting. Anyways, what happen it happen for the best.

Love Misti

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Thank you so much. You and Disha have made my day. Thank you once again
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Part 1
(a) Intro of Aarti's Family

~ Indore ~

Indore is very small place with multiple industries city where many types of people live in. Over here people are happy with the amount of luxurious they have. Never wanted more or less. In this small place of Indore I live with my family after separation from my husband. I never dream that he'll betray me, but I wrong in trusting him. Afterwards I never heard about him or saw him. (She recalls the moment her husband left her for another women). She open her eyes and snapped at herself "Aarti, stop thinking about him. He isn't apart of your life anymore and drain those memories of him" she scolded herself.

Her eyes show than her big smile "let me tell you about my family. Let start with the smallest member of my family. Ansh. Ansh is my son. (Its bright morning at Dubey's place with laughter of a child. You see one tiny pair of feet running around the garden). He is very naughty in drinking his milk (he is shown running around with his granny behind him) without giving me my daily workout. He might be very spoiled, but apple of my eyes. His one smile means the world to me and I can do anything for him."

If my son is my world than my parents mean the biggest support of my life. Otherwise who would leave their own blood tie for a orphan. I am lucky to have them as my in-laws. They are the best and I can never compare them with anyone else in this world.

How did you like my family? It doesn't matter if you like them or not because I love them. Aarti lives for them and can die for them.

"Aarti, beta" I smiled at Panditji of lord Krishna's temple. He knows my family pretty well after we moved here.

I bend down to take his blessing "god bless you and soon your life would be filled with new colours" as always. I knew Panditji would give me same blessing over these months. I just smile at him while he told me about the good date for prayers kept at home. I told him that after consulting with her parents I come down to finalize everything.

He smiled at me and I left toward my house. By now Ansh must have tried Maa by making her run after him with glass of milk before getting ready for school.

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Shobha: Ansh, beta stop giving your Dadi much trouble in getting ready for school now.

Ansh: Nahiin! Without Mummy getting me ready with her own hands I won't get dress. Why did Mummy have to leave early in the morning without her Ansh?

"Because Mummy had to prayer for her son's well being" I answered Ansh question who had big smile after seeing me. I smiled at Maa before taking her blessing.

She smile at me "Aarti now that you are back. Get your troublemaker ready for school otherwise he'll be late" I nod my head "Dadi, I never get late with Mummy dropping me to school" I heard Ansh shout before winking at me.
Aarti: Ansh!

Ansh: Yes Mummy

Aarti: Come here Mummy's boy.

Ansh came toward Aarti who help him get ready for school "so did my sona give Dadi trouble while drinking milk today?" I asked him.

Ansh: No Mummy

Aarti: That's my good boy and what does good boy get

Ansh jump up and down "a kissy" I nod my head before kissing his cheek than left for his school on my scooter.

(Guys how was part 1 (a)? I know its boring, but once the introduction is done than the story begins. I hope you'll like it).

Edited by MistiofMistz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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start... loved the preface...

eagerly waiting for Yash n dadi's entry... yeh dil always mange more😆😆



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Thank you so much...

Love Misti

Edited by MistiofMistz - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: disha_Maan.GC

start... loved the preface...

eagerly waiting for Yash n dadi's entry... yeh dil always mange more😆😆






Disha, for moment I thought it was going be boring part, but your reply made my day. Thank you for loving it and encouraging me. It means a lot to me after terrible day I had at work before leaving it.

Love Misti

Edited by MistiofMistz - 13 years ago

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