MaHeen ranveer sad os Takdeer ka jaise koi ishaara

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Posted: 13 years ago
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*I know this is a sad os … I went the agent vinod way .please don't throw tomatoes and eggs at me lol… but I figured it would plz MaHeen … Ranveer fans do comment

Takdeer ka jaise koi ishaara mila

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"Mehreen my love finally we are in paris the city of Love like I promised ….

A much needed vacation" … says mp

"Mp the other day I just I saw paris on tv and casually metioned I wanted to go to see paris and today we are here …I didn't expect it" says mehreen

"Jaan your wish is my command …I love you so much" says mp

She smiles at him(every time he said that to her… she felt a pinch in her heart)

"Mp im very tired from the flight ill just go and rest a bit" says mehreen

She goes in the room

Closing her eyes and relaxing

She remembers how the past 2months were

"According to the mission she had now become Mrs. Mahendra Partap Sighn…. She knew why she was doing this …she was trained and ready … yet suddenly the past few months she had seen a different side of mp …. She knew he was not to be trusted then why … did her heart tell her to trust him … to care for him… worry for him his well being why ….what was happening to her" ?

"For the 1st time in the entire mission she didn't inform ranveer or malika where she was … even though she did get a few chances to …..no I cant do this I have to think about the mission she msged malika about where they were" …

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The next evening

They toured pairs mp was doing everying according to my needs and likes ... after dinner in front of the lit Eiffel Tower … and dancing we headed back to the hotel….

Suddenly out of no where there was a knock on the hotel room door

Pat came running in "mp I don't know how but raveer chuhan is her with pairs police …. They found out about the drugs"

"Kya … says mp he grabs is gun … "mehreen come we have to run"…

a shoot out began in the hotel …

mp made sure that no bullet would come near me … not even the slightest scratch…

he could see the fear in my eyes

while shooting and dodging bullets … he took me in a corner and held me close whipped my tears … "mehreen..

I promise vaada hai tm kuch nahi hoga … nothing will happen to you … if anything has to happen it will happen to me" says mp

"Yahaan (points to his chest) hoga … ill take the shot right here but Will not allow any harm near you" …say mp

"You're my life with out you … ill be a broken soul" says mp

That was it she couldn't take it any more …

she saw ranveer about to shoot mp

"Ranveer nooo" yells mehreen

she comes in front and takes the bullet .. she falls in mps arms..

"mp muhje maaf kar do its is all because of me …

ranveer sent me to you … to get to you.. but allah ki kasam I love you more then my jaan I couldn't let anything happen to you sach…please forgive me "

" mehreen …kuch nahi hoga tumne koi baat nai …shhh I love you

maaf kar diya… sirf muhje chor ki maat jao … mehreen" ..

says mp he bends his head she kisses him …

"pat get help fast have to get her to the hospital" says mp

ranveer runs to aaliya

"aaliya … tum yeh kya kare aaliya" … he goes to touch her hand

"don't dare you come near my mehreen this all your fault mr. ranveer chuhan …you played a horrible game … ill kill you" says mp..

mehreen gasps .".mppp… .. promise me you will change .. youll become a better man .. youll stop all this.. promise me …ranveer plz be easy on mp … gasps* mppp I loveee yo"….

"Mehreen nahin… nooo nooo I promise " says mp

He goes to shoot ranveer but instead hands him self over…

The end*

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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is fantasric fiza 👏

here mp is not completely betrayed instead aaliya loves him & dies saving him , wow ...what else we maheen fans want ⭐️
an intense love story of maheen ❤️
its better to quit this show & just follow ur fictions 👍🏼



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Posted: 13 years ago
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my MP cried and so did i . not fair babes you broke my heart . no way, i wont accept, agar mehreen dies then i will get plastic surgery done and become MP ki dulhan and wont change anything about him because koi pyar kare toh tumse kare, tum jaise bhi ho waise kare, agar koi badal ke pyar kare toh sauda kare aur darling pyar mein sauda nahi.well done, loved the new installment. wait till my exams finish have a few ideas for the os and then for our collaborations.@jas - baby dont worry everything will work out. MP koi bachcha nahi hai, he will not get caught or hurt because usse logon ka mood badalna aata hai , toh woh aaliya ko bhi mehreen may badal dega. keep the faith babes.
Edited by mythical - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fiza thats awsme writingbut plz do wrte about ranya also
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is sooo Good Fiza.. I really felt for Mehreen.. Aww Mp ❤️❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: --jas--

this is fantasric fiza 👏

here mp is not completely betrayed instead aaliya loves him & dies saving him , wow ...what else we maheen fans want ⭐️
an intense love story of maheen ❤️
its better to quit this show & just follow ur fictions 👍🏼




Jas your kind words mean a lot to me ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mythical

my MP cried and so did i . not fair babes you broke my heart . no way, i wont accept, agar mehreen dies then i will get plastic surgery done and become MP ki dulhan and wont change anything about him because koi pyar kare toh tumse kare, tum jaise bhi ho waise kare, agar koi badal ke pyar kare toh sauda kare aur darling pyar mein sauda nahi.well done, loved the new installment. wait till my exams finish have a few ideas for the os and then for our collaborations.@jas - baby dont worry everything will work out. MP koi bachcha nahi hai, he will not get caught or hurt because usse logon ka mood badalna aata hai , toh woh aaliya ko bhi mehreen may badal dega. keep the faith babes.

Ria
u do plastic sugery an become mehreen ... hahah poor mp will go crazy
they say 7 ppl in the world have same face ... if a look like of julia keeps coming all the 7 he would meet heheh
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Simmy_

This is sooo Good Fiza.. I really felt for Mehreen.. Aww Mp ❤️❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi fiza, really good yaar, my poor Mehreen and Mp😭 they made me 😭 nicely written
Edited by roshani45 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww just loved it...😳😳

its awesomeee😍😍
but sad ending💔😭

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