D3 HV readers Gift SS :)

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Hey guys aap sab kelie ye gift from me hope u ll enjoy it...



kr : Mom plz let me go.

Smriti : Kriya I already told u I m not allowing u and I don't want any arguments regarding this.

Sw : Aunty plz allow her and u know na my bro won't let anything happen to her.

Smriti : I know, that shirtless wonder won't let anything happen to her but still all of u are going without parents if anything happens to u all. So for this time it's a no.

*haha ya u guessed it right its rey in this kriya's mom know that rey and kriya love each other and she has no problem with it*

Door bell rings Smriti opens the door it was Rey having a wide grin on his face came in.

Smriti : Lo aa gaya Kriya ka majnu.

Rey : Aunty plz don't forget u r her mom I have never seen anyone's mom this friendly with her daughter.

Sm : That is Smriti Ghai.

Kriya went and stood beside Rey and whispered to him all the while Smriti was busy with some work in the same room ahe explained about the situation.

R : Aunty plz na she will be totally safe and I m sure u will never say no to me plz I will take her responsibility plz *with a puppy face*

Sm : Next time u r not coming here for asking anything for Kriya got it. Ok for this time she can go but be careful.

Rey gave a peck to smriti and said

R : Thnkx aunty ur the best.

Kr : Mom u always do this I asked u for more than 100 times u did not agree but if Rey asks u 1's u never say no to him I m not talking to u.

Kriya with her fake anger went and sat in her room.

R : Aunty plz excuse me.

Sm : *ahem ahem* kuch kaha tumne.

Sw : Aunty plz bus bhi karo aap uski mom hai nd Rey jaldi jaa.

Rey went to her room she was standing near the window

R : kriya I know tum actual me gussa nahi ho but phir bhi tumhe mana ne kelie mai aagaya dekha.

A cute smile crept on kriya's face as she was facing her back to him he could not see it.

R : Kriya mujhe pata hai tum hus rahi ho u know na y aunty loves me more than u.

Kriya now faced him and said

Kr : haan pata hai coz u love me more than her.

LLHH start's here without breaking the eye lock

Rey went close to her they were only a few steps apart. Kriya looked into his eyes and was lost in him he tried to cover the gap he moved even close.

Sm : yaha koi bhool gaya ki mai Kriya ki mom hu.

Rey and Kriya both came back to earth.

R : *slowly* argghh!!! humesha disturb karte rehte hai.

kriya heard it and started blushing Smriti came near them along with Swayam

Sw : Agar tum logo ka khatam ho jae to kya hum jaa sakte hai.

Kriyaansh knew where he wanted them to go but to tease him they asked : Where are we going now?

Sw : Bhool gaye ho kya? hum teen log nahi chaar log jaa rahe hai'.

Kr : haa vo pata hai but ab hume kaha jaana hai?

Swayam blushed a bit and said : Sharon ke dad ko bhi to poochna hai'

R : Oho blushing huh chal mere bhai ab teri wali bachi.

This brought a curve on his face they went to Sharon's house Sharon was already waiting for them on hearing the door bell she opened the door, seeing Swayam her smile widened she welcomed them in. Her dad was in hall sitting the news paper covering his face.

Sw : Hi uncle.

Ga : Hi beta have ur seat.

Sw : Uncle we are planning to go for a trip can Sharon join us?

Ga : Trip?

Sw : Yes uncle if u allow her we r thinking to go for a trip just for 2 days.

Ga : I know u won't be going without her so how can I stop her.

Sh : Papa thnkq so much love u *gave a tight hug to him* and in excitement hugged Swayam he too hugged her tightly.

Ga : *clearing his throat* I think u guys should start ur packing.

This was enough for swaron to break there hug.

They went to their respective houses and started packing as the boys completed their packing stuff they helped their respective loves *u knw na girls take a lot of time in that* finally they completed packing and both the brothers went back home all the four slept happily as their parents agreed for the trip Reyam had already arranged everything as they were sure that they will be allowed to go they booked a hotel room for them to stay for 2 days.

Next day morning :

Everyone woke up early and were too excited for their 1st trip without their parents the main reason was they are going to spend the time with their love. Swayam and Rey picked Sharon and Kriya and started their journey to the hotel "The Golden Lions" *(guys ye imaginary name hai I don't know whether it exists or not and I won't be describing all the journey part coz it would make it too long)* now they were about 50 km far from the destination. Swayam was driving the car he adjusted the mirror in such a way that he could see Sharon from it he was seeing her and again the road it repeated for some time when he saw the board of the hotel he again looked into the mirror and then again at the road but this time he saw something right in front of the passing car he suddenly stopped the car everyone was confused on what made him do this.

Rey was sitting beside him so he was the 1st one to speak

R : Sw kya hua?

Sw : kuch nahi vo aise laga tha ki gaadi ke neeche kuch gaya tha.

Kr : Sw tu agar seedha dekh ke chalaega to sirf road dikhega mujhe pata hai tera concentration kaha par hai.

She gets up and moves the mirror a bit such that he can't see Sharon through it.

Kr : Ab chala koi problem nahi hai.

Sharon just blushes all the while Sw thinks to start the car but this time he hears someone crying (guys yah ape imagine a road jaha pe koi nahi hai pura khali hai and sides pe trees and all hai)

Sw : guys tumhe kuch sunayi de raha hai?

all : Sw kuch nahi hai just start the car.

Again he hears the same sound but he ignores this time the car door at rey's side get automatically opened Swayam see it and asks him.

Sw : Rey ab tujhe kya hua?

R : Sw maine kuch nahi kia ye khud se hogaya.

Sh : guys plz stop it kabhi Sw kabhi Rey kya kar rahe ho?

As the car mirrors were open wind blows through Sharon's side making some sound she gasped and caught Kriya's hand (only sharons side)

Kr : Sharon plz ab tum bhi shuru mat hojana mujhe pata chal gaya hai ki tum log mujhe darane ki koshish kar rahe ho now for god sake plz stop it.

Sh : kriya actually it was nothing chalo guys lets go.

Sw : Actually hum ek kaam karte hai I think all of us would be tired now and its even lunch time so let's wait here and have our lunch what say?(guys un logo ne sab kuch pehle hi pack kar chukka hai)

R : haa gud idea chalo.

They take the luggage and then in one bag they brought the blanket and all the eatables they looked around to find a place where all of them can sit finally they spotted a place they were moving that side but the blanket which was in Kriya's hand flew in the other direction she went to catch it all the others followed her the blanket stopped at a place and decided to sit there itself.

Guys I will describe it waha a tree they got for shade left side a messy area nd to right a bush nd at a distance there is a pond taking the blanket spreading it down near to the tree they started eating they noticed the pond Kriya completed her lunch before everyone she went near the pond went into it (guys pond me zyada water nahi tha it was only a knee length one) kriya played with her legs kicking the water she then stood still and was looking back to see Swaron and Rey but as she looked back she felt someone pulling her legs in the water she tried to take her legs back but something was pulling with even more force she could not succeed she fell down, it tried to drag her through the water but kriya was smart enough to catch the root of some tree. She tried herself pulling up but could not so, she shouted Rey's name, on hearing kriya scream his name all of them ran to her she was still trying hard to come out Rey caught her arms pulled her with all his might he brought her out. Kriya was breathing hard she hugged him with all her strength rey was caressing her hair and rubbed her back and was repeating the same thing

R : Kriya kuch nahi hua everything is fine kuch nahi hua'..

He got no response he knew kriya was still in that scary mood he lifted her took near that tree all the while she was closing her eyes and wrapped herself a kid in his arms.

guys kya socha tum logo ne romantic wala hoga aha u guessed it wrong ab yaha pe stop ye aap sab kelie gift tha now its ur turn aap ki marzi aapko agar ye accha laga to I ll make is SS or it will be OS and if u want this to be OS last part will be posted after may 12th if u want this as SS next part will be posted after more than 35 likes guys mujhe bhi time chahie na u knw I m a bit lazy so'. now start commenting aur kya padh rahe ho?




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Edited by ShravniC - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome 👏⭐️...yipiee iam the first one to comment...i loved the concept very much and plz plz turn it into ss...
Edited by rIDhid3rox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res unresed... ... Oye bhootni... Tu to bhooto ki maa baap dono he sacchi... It was amazing n dare u dnt cont n il kill u make it a watevr u wan bt jaldi update de de tadpa mat plz... N kriya's mom agreeing vo part awesum tha... Loved each n evry word of it... Thnkz fr d pm.. Cont soon... Keep daraving us haha... Love u n ha kya chalu he tera aur meow ka truth dare ha... Tu likhati he worst couple vo likhati he taarey best couple vha vha... Vl kill u both if u do dis nxt tym.. Vaise mujhe bhi khelna he baba.. Hahaha...
Edited by namratajadhav - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res
unres

Amazing suprise poppy.
it was lovely one.
Do make it an SS .
Thanks for pm.

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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kya baat kya baat kya baat
of course ss ... please
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U took me by surprise.

First I really thought that they r set for a romantic trip n all. But when u wrote that Swayam saw something passing in front of the car and rey door opening by itself then I understood that u were out to freak us once again.

N why r u asking us? Just turn it into an SS dear. Yeh koyi puchne ki baat hain. Hahahaha


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing outstanding please make it as ss. I loved it and update asap.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Shravni ...
U rock dear...
Dis ws simply superb...
U r so unpredictable...
I never thought that dis would turn out 2 b a horror 1...
When I read in d begging I thought hw did u thnk of riting a romantic 1...
It ws amazing..
Plzz mak it into an ss...
Plzz updt soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Poppy that was a cool surprise gift - luvd it make it an SS but that wuld mean Madam lazy nahin reh saktii okay - hum tumhare updates ka intzaarr karenge - 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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*Res*

**Unres**

Loved d Kriya,smriti n Swayam convo..

It was really gud..

Rey's entry was bindaas..

Rey-Smriti bonding was d way too gud.

Smriti is so loving in dis SS.

N she agreed to send Kriya after rey asked her.

Kriya shud b angry.I wil support her but mostly all mom's does d same.

Then d whole gang left for Swayam's house n made sharon to come wid dem.

Swaron hug infront of her dad was d way too awesome.

Reyam r brothers.I love to see dem lyk dat.

Again d entry of horror queen Avatar..poppy!!!

Fantabulous update

Umah..

Hugs n Kisses..

N I want it to be an SS...

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Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago

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