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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
amazing i loved it and update sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sahi tha yaar...lgta hai u luv horror movies... 😛
Bt chalega...hamare kriyansh n swaron...kisi bhi typ ki story me...beautifully romance kr skte hai... 😳
Continue sooonnn...pls...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
wow it was superb plz make it an SS plz plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

at first i m srry 4 being late... 😭

now abt this FF OMG! it's awsm. u shud nt wr8 FF u shud write script f horror movies..👏

updt sun.. waiting..


n congrats..🥳party time..mai invited hun na?

Edited by mimi_friends - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
oyeee tu to sach me BHOOTNI nikli..
tu thek to h na???
let me check!!!
well tujhe khus ko doc ko check karwana chahiye...
well this was AWESOMEEE
i loved it
and see tere 35 like ho gaye..
now i want a update
jaldi kar shavs :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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poppy muahh 4 the update
it ws awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aweosme concept...
pls pm me wen ull updte the 1st prt...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Poppyyy!!!!!!! CONGRATLUTIONSss!!!! :D
this OS was incomplete plz isse SS Baka nd update soon aur u dare forget to pm me! I'll kill you! :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: mimi_friends

at first i m srry 4 being late... 😭

now abt this FF OMG! it's awsm. u shud nt wr8 FF u shud write script f horror movies..👏

updt sun.. waiting..


n congrats..🥳party time..mai invited hun na?


Its ok no problem n thnkq so much u r always invited

Originally posted by: Dazzling_Smile

oyeee tu to sach me BHOOTNI nikli..

tu thek to h na???
let me check!!!
well tujhe khus ko doc ko check karwana chahiye...
well this was AWESOMEEE
i loved it
and see tere 35 like ho gaye..
now i want a update
jaldi kar shavs :)



Mai teek hu nimi nd aaj update de rahi hu

Originally posted by: tinatartari

poppy muahh 4 the update

it ws awesome


thnkx shonu

Originally posted by: eshachawla26

aweosme concept...

pls pm me wen ull updte the 1st prt...



Thnkq nd Pms r for sure

Originally posted by: SugarCubes

Poppyyy!!!!!!! CONGRATLUTIONSss!!!! :D
this OS was incomplete plz isse SS Baka nd update soon aur u dare forget to pm me! I'll kill you! :P


Thnkx ishu nd how can i forget to PM u 😛

Originally posted by: frankyfio

amazing i loved it and update sooon


Thnkq

Originally posted by: mishtika_diva

Sahi tha yaar...lgta hai u luv horror movies... 😛
Bt chalega...hamare kriyansh n swaron...kisi bhi typ ki story me...beautifully romance kr skte hai... 😳
Continue sooonnn...pls...



ya i love horro movies n thnkq

Originally posted by: ...Pwinch3ss...

wow it was superb plz make it an SS plz plz


Thnkq nd ya its an SS now

Originally posted by: star_2012

amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

loved it very much


Thnkq so much


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Posted: 13 years ago
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I know mai bohot late hogayi iss baar sorry but guys u all are fabulous maine 35 likes managi thi aap logo ne to 64 dedi wowww aap sab ka jawaab nahi 👏 thnkq thnkq so much love u all nd ye lo update start reading now aha before reading ye mai ye bata du total romantic part ka credit meow ko jaata hai so aap be fikar padh sakte ho love u meow



He got no response he knew kriya was still in that scary mood he lifted her took near that tree all the while she was closing her eyes and wrapped herself as a kid in his arms.

They reached near the tree he placed her down on the blanket kneeling Kriya dug her face in his chest holding his collar tightly both Swayam and Sharon stood there.

R : kriya look at me kuch nahi hua tumhe

kriya slowly loosened her grip on his collar and looked at him she had tears and was really scared this was the 1st time ever in Rey's life he saw her like that he could not take it his eyes started getting moist seeing her like this but swayam soon came near him he too knelt and comforted both of them Rey finally controlled himself.

R : Kriya kya hua tha?

kriya narrated the whole incident they now went near the pond and examined it very well they did not find anything finally they thought to leave it and move as they took their step away from pond they heard someone crying it was the same voice which Swayam heard this time it was audible for everyone now it was like a child crying the voice had some pain in it the voice was attracting them they tried to find out from which direction it was coming it was coming from the other side of the pond. They could not stop more took their respective loves in their arms so that what happened to Kriya does not repeat again they went through the water when they came out they made their respective girls to stand and followed the voice they felt that they were going near and near their breath rate too increased as they were going near to it suddenly the voice stopped at a place (ruko na place ko describe karti hu... charo aur bushes trees sab kuch jungli imagine karo neeche pura mitti bus isse zyada aur kuch nahi hai) they looked around to find out why the voice stopped and who was it crying they walked a bit front scanning the entire place Sharon felt someone pepping through a bush around there on seeing it she clutched swayam's shoulder he looked at her who was constantly staring with wide eyes. They started going close to it Swayam was in front he was clearing the way for all to go near it all their hearts started jumping as if it would come out any moment. They felt something coming out of the bush so they stopped there. It was clearing the bush with its hands to come out of it they could see its hands Krisha closed their eyes hiding themselves behind their love. The first one to talk among them was

Swayam : Aww... kitni cute hai.

Rey : Haa yaar bohot cute hai.

Krisha did not expect this reaction from them so they opened their eyes and came front. They saw a small girl 5 year old with her cute and innocent face was staring at them in fear they could not control themselves Krisha went and lifted her she was scared of them but no more the girl understood that they won't harm her she too hugged them and started crying. Krisha were now worried about her they made her stand and knelt so that they too come till her height.

Kriya : Kya hua aap ro kyu rahe ho *whipping her tears*

Girl : *with so much difficulty while crying* Mai kho gayi.

Sh : aww...koi baat nahi ro mat accha pehle tumhara naam kya hai?

Girl : mera naam Shikha hai.

Kr : kitna pyaara naam hai.

Swayam kneels beside Sharon and asks

Sw : Shikha aap yaha kaise aa gaye?

Shi : Hum sab yaha ghoomne aye the aur... aur mai kho gayi. *again cry*

Rey : Shikha aap kitni pyaari bacchii ho idhar aao *opening his arms for her*

All were looking him with an expression like she won't come vo dari hui hai but to their surprise Shikha runs and goes into his arms he lifts her and twirls.

Rey : Shikha tum sab yaha kyu aae the?

Shi : Hum *pointing towards it* vo hotel gaye the yaha ghoomne aye *making sad face*mumma papa hotel chale gaye mujhe chodke.

Sw : Shikha aap ko yaha aake kitne din hue?

Shi : chaar din ho gaye.

Shikha circled her hands around Rey's neck rested her head on his shoulder and said

Shi : Mujhe bohot bhook lag rahi hai chaar din se kuch nahi khaya.

All had a feeling like someone pinched them very hard Rey hugged her even more tight everyone walked back to the car took some eatable and fed her they made her sit in the car and all the four came out and were discussing.

Rey : Guys hum bhi wahi hotel jaa rahe hai i think hume Shikha ko waha leka jaan hoga.

Kr : Rey iss me poochne wali baat kya hai sure pakka leke jaenge.

Sw : Haa mujhe lagta hai uske parents vahi pe honge.

Sh : Nd vo bacchii kitni cute hai.

Rey 2 Kriya and Swayam 2 Sharon : Tum bhi to kitni cute ho.

Krisha : *blushing* i think abhi hume nikalna chahie.

Reyam at front and Krisha at back with Shikha during the journey Krisha told Shikha everyone's names and enjoyed their talks with Shikha who was talking so cutely in incomplete words Shikha was soon asleep. They travelled for a while and reached the hotel. Krisha did not want to disturb Shikha's sleep so they waited till the boys open the door and take her. Swayam opened the door and was about to take her when she moved in sleep so he left her seeing this Rey came front and took her in his arms she circled her hands around his neck and legs around his waist and again went back to sleep.

Sw : Rey tu shikha ko pehle se hi jaanta hai kya?

Rey smiled and said : nahi but pata nahi isko dekhne se I mean she is too cute and adorable.

Kr : Ya vo bohot cute hai ab chalo andar chalet hai.

They go in and find everyone staring them as if what are they upto they ignore everyone's looks Swayam goes to the reception counter takes the keys and they head to their respective rooms Krisha in a room nd Reyam in a room opposite to each other. Shikha was holding Rey so he took her to Krisha's room and made her lie on the bed.

Rey : mai neeche jaake enquire karta hu ki kisne complaint kia about missing their child.

Sw : Nahi Rey mai jaata hu Shikha feels comfortable with u so mai aur Sharon jaake dekh ke aathe hai.

Sharon : Ya gud idea give me 5 mins.

They go to their respective rooms while Sharon was leaving Shikha gets up.

Shi : Aap bahar jaa rahe ho.

Sh : Haa hum thodi der mai aate hai Kriya didi aapke saath rahegi.

Shi : Nahi mujhe bhi bahar jaana hai.

Till then Swayam comes to take Sharon and hears this convo. nd agrees to take Shikha with them.

Sw : To Shikha ko chocolates pasand hai?

Shi : *excited* haa bohot.

Swaron leave out informing Kriyaansh dat they wud return back soon. Rey goes to Krisha's room, he knocks d door twice or thrice but there was no prior reply, he slowly opens d door,peeps n steps in ecstasy. He looks around trying to trace out Kriya. He finally finds her still sleeping in d bed, hiding her face into d bed. She was looking cute, he cud see her slightly. He sat beside her on d bed. He was feeling d essence of his first love. He wanted to feel her soft skin which he wud just stare until dese days. He was trying hard to keep his hands in control but convinces himself for just a mere touch. He slowly moved his hand to her cheek n placed his fingers on it. He glided for a second, her skin was as smooth as a young generated flower. His fingers urged for d touch. He dont know how she felt but it was really a heavenly feeling for him to feel her. His palm gently touched her cheeks, she leapt into his lap for a comfortable sleep. He leaned towards her n gave a peck on her cheeks which automatically curved a smile on her lips.

"Baatcutter u were not sleeping"

"Sorry..mein kya karun aise accha tha isiliye neend ka natak kar raha tha"

"Ok..ab jaldi se tayyar hojao.We wil go out."

"Nahi rey mujhe aise hee pasand hain"


She cuddled more into him.He was smiling at her innoncence.She got up after sometime.

Rey:Kya hua??

Kriya:Give me 5 mins.I'll get ready..

Rey:Ok..

Kriya:Wat ok??Rey...bahar jao.

Rey:Ok..

Kriya:Iske liye bhi ok..god!!Ye ladkon ka baat karne bhi nahi aata.

She said pushing him out of d room.He was waiting outside watching d strangers passby.For his timepass, he started a chit-chat wid d roomboy too.Kriya cud hear everything, she was pissed off wenever he raised his voice.She immediately opened d door wen she got ready.

He grinnned like an idiot n was above to walk into but dis time d roomboy stopped him.

RB:Sir aap kuch keh rahe the??

Rey:Kuch bhi toh nahi..aa vo iss room aur uss room kelie dinner leke aajao.

This time he caught his hand to stop him.

Rey:KYA HAIN??

Rb:Kuch nahi sir..

Rey:Fine..then go n do what i said.

Rb:Ok sir..

Rey laughed silently n peeked into d room. Kriya was busy getting ready she wore a blue top n black jeans. She kept her fingers in d hair n shuffled it properly while he attacked her from d behind holding her waist.

K:Rey..

R:Hmm...

He rested his chin on her shoulder looking at dem in d mirror image.They had a smile plastered on their faces.He turned to his left slightly n gave a peck on her cheeks.He was happy to see her blush dat openly which got reflected very well in d mirror.She turned around placing her arms around his neck while his arms circled her n brought her more closer to him.She holded his neck with her right hand while her other hand caressed his cheek leaning forward.He closed his eyes welcoming her for more.She closed d gap, raised her head lil above n blew his hair off d forehead.He felt her cold breath on his skin, it made him shudder a bit.She played with her fingers thru his hair n gave a soft laugh saying, "I love ur hair rey".

He opened his eyes to enjoy her heartiful laughter.

R:So tumhe mera baal pasand hain..

K:Ya I love ur hair more dan u rey...

She said dat just to check out his expressions, he looked up at his hair n gave it a blow n looked at her back wid a smirk followed by a pout.

K:U r so cute rey, she said pulling his cheeks harder with another grumpy laugh.

She holded his shirt more tighter leaning her body on his.Her left cheek was in contact wid his n her lips were near to his ear.She inhaled his masculine smell for a second.

K:Rey..

R:Hmm..

K:Patha hain' mujhe abhi kya karne ka mann kar rahi he..

She moved back to face him, she clutched his collar n leaned forward for a kiss.He realised d scene very soon n kept his forefinger on her lips to stop her from proceeding further.

It was a very rude action for her, she pushed him hard to some gap n tried to walk out but he pulled her by d wrist pinning her to d wall.He kept his hands on d either side on her face, nuzzled into her n nibbled on d neck.Her hands slided from his chest to d shoulders n held for a grip.She circled her right arm around his neck allowing him more access while his left hand worked on his shirt buttons.Her hands moved on his bare chest making him crazy,his hand explored her while his hand brushed under her shirt n caressed her waist.He immediately backed off to keep his senses in control but she dint leave him, she pinned him to d wall n pressed her lips against his taking it in between hers.He kissed her passionately wid all his strength holding her by d waist.They broke off panting.

They heard Shikha's voice who was shouting and running they parted themselves to a distance n brushed their hair properly. They heard a knock Kriya sat on the bed while Rey went to open the door.

Sw : Yaar yaha ka management bhi na sab pagal hai.

Rey : Kyu kya hua?

Sh : Vo bolte hai ki yaha koi gayab nahi hua hai koi report nahi hai. Aur jab humne poocha ki iss ladki ko kahi dekha then they looked at us as if we are mad kisi ne koi answer hi nahi dia we took Shikha and went out to buy her chocolate. I tell u yaha ka management pagal hai.

Kr : Guys vo sab chodo nd Shikha kaha hai.

Shikha comes running to Kriya and shows her chocolate to her in full-on happy mood.

They smile at her innocence go to their respective rooms have their dinner and sleep.



Here ends this part agar koi typing error ho to plz neglect kardo maine wapas check nahi kia ab if u liked it thn dont forget to hit the like button and do comment and share ur views love u all 🤗 🤗

Edited by ShravniC - 13 years ago

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