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Posted: 13 years ago
It was awesome update
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awww the lullaby was so cute
loved it
feel so bad for the two
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HIII
It was really niceee! i love how arnav is talking to her on a daily basis and trying his level best to wake her up
loved the incorporation of the flashbacks

thanks for the PM pleaseee update soon <3
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That such a heart wrenching story... Beautifully written!!
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Originally posted by: Joicej

I loved it!

The song was just perfect. Took me back to my childhood.
I love the little fight between bro and sis.
Looking forward to the next update!!😊😊😊



Somewhere i wanted thar. Thanks!
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Originally posted by: DM1810

aa chal ke tujeh mein leke chaluun
ik aise gagan ke tale
jahan gam bhi na ho aansoo bhi na ho
bas pyaar hi pyaar pale


I love this song!!!
And the flashbacks were ultra cute!!!!especially the one where they are fighting to sleep besides their mother!!
And a whistling arnav made me go awww and 😍 At the same time!!!
This is definitely my fav. Update!!!(i guess)!!!

Yeah yeah...i am a mush lover...go sue me...wait...you cant!!!!mwahahahahaha!!




Thanks!!!! I will wait to collect enough evidence to sue you.
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Originally posted by: Amanram

Nice! sweet! lovely! wonder why Arnav whislting -is there some improvment with Khushi - hope so!!

Must a relief to have submitted your thesis - hope all went according to plan



Trust me... Relief is not even a word for it. Though still left with vivas. Next update after that. No, there is no improvement in Khushi. So other guesses to why he is whistling?😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
just read all 7 chapters

awesome, made me cry

please PM me with updates
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CHAPTER EIGHT

In unknown waters




It had been 36 days since he had last heard her voice, seen her hazel eyes twinkle or her payals tinkle and 31 days since the day she had decided to leave him.

Still he fought.

His love lit the tiny beacon of hope for the rest of the family - his and hers. She would come back to him, she had to. After all, love knew no bounds.

His love exuded a power so warm, every person in the house was drawn to his room. A room that they feared entering once.

The once furnished room decorated in a single hue was alight with a riot of them. From The curtains in a beautiful emerald green, her favorite color, radium stars in different colors illuminating the ceiling, red bed spreads to even a small swing at the poolside.

Everything bespoke his love.


Love had created wonders like no others, be it the ever inspiring stories of Romeo - Juliet or Heer- Ranja, to memoirs that lovers made promises upon like the Taj Mahal. The love that made A woman give up her life, to man willing to sacrifice his most cherished possession and theirs was another such love.

No love was ever alike, even though it had been branded by a single word.
Besides what was there in a name when love defined one's soul.
Theirs was so entwined that none could live or leave without the other. Maybe they had been a reincarnation of one of the souls who had vowed to live together forever.
Maybe, their love would be another tale a kid would learn from his mother at bedtime.


His love broke through the hurdles not only set by nature and the people but also the one set by his beloved encased in a tower created by her own mind.


Khushi now lay awake, awake if it may be said but nothing was around her. Just calm, not serene but still. She did not know what color was the realm that surrounded her, it had no defined shape.

Her slumber she had been granted had been disturbed by pain. A pain that had radiated from her every pore. She recollected nothing, her name or her life.

It did not matter.

The pain subsided she did not know how or when, but it did and she gradually moved around each step at a time. No time to govern her here.

A sudden flash of light illuminated her world and the empty walls around her were thrown into a rainbow of colors she came to associate to. A shadow cast ahead of her, an object she became familiarized with. A companion on an empty road.

With the colors, the shadow and the little warmth the light had brought she decided to explore her surroundings. An open country lay in front of her, no other inhabitant or creature, no walls, no doors, no beginning and no end. Safe in the unfamiliar but warm surroundings her lips curved upwards in a smile.


As sudden as the light had come, darkness enveloped her. The colors and the shadow disappeared like her surroundings and she was enveloped in black.

As far as you may run, everything may go away but maybe fear was such an inherent part of ones self, like their ability to think that you could never escape it.

Khushi experienced something similar. Though, she would never voice the fear that enveloped her that instance, lest it may return, it was nothing she had ever experienced before.

She shivered, rooted to the spot as fear wracked her body. She lost her way, though she was intended to be on none. She fell to the ground, lost in the darkness. Merged it with the black, enveloped in a shroud, trying to make her a part of it.

She crawled on the ground, no energy to stand and face what awaited her. The floor was smooth and cold, she had never noticed, one inch at a time she moved. Afraid of things unfamiliar, the pain returned, it equal intensity if not the same and a shudder ran through her.

Pain, fear, cold, dark each and together made her beg, beg to return to the slumber she had been in so far, to numb, to infinite and colorless, to the world she had been living in before the bright light had changed her life.

She lay there shivering, fighting to reach to an equilibrium for an infinite period.


Precap: The silence before the storm


Hello ppl, the eight chapter. hope you like it. i know its short. sorry for that.

Note: over the time I have noted a decrease in your response either ppl have quit reading it, dont like it or have become silent. i really work hard to get updates, writing in trains and late at night. so if ur reading it plz do like/comment. i have written the next 2 chps to the story and i guess will stop at it. its up to you to decide if you want to read any further.
to all the those ppl who have stuck with this one so far thanks a ton, you mean a lot to me. this is essentially something i like more than the other 2 stories i have written.
thanks for being there.



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Edited by Devilways - 13 years ago

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