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Posted: 13 years ago
Me here too!!!😉

Aww Maan is so sweet….😳

He actually did the packing…😳

Hmm but his shaitanis are increasing by leaps and bounds….😆

Naughty Sara… Poor Geet must have become totally sharam se pani pani types…😳

Grr this Brij…😡

He will never learn…😡

Stupid fellow…😡

Feeling bad for Anjali…😭

Am sure he must be harassing her…😡

Hmmm so now Geet will set him right…😡

Me feeling there is more to the story of Brij not having kids till now…. Right Mel???😉

Precap- Why is Maan dad crying???😭

Loving the FF… So happy you didn't stop it…😳

Love you...😳
Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice work mel
good and awesome one
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchs

Me here too!!!😉 yeah

Aww Maan is so sweet'.😳 well he is your dad

He actually did the packing'😳

Hmm but his shaitanis are increasing by leaps and bounds'.😆

Naughty Sara' Poor Geet must have become totally sharam se pani pani types'😳

Grr this Brij'😡 what did briuj do

He will never learn'😡 me confused

Stupid fellow'😡

Feeling bad for Anjali'😭

Am sure he must be harassing her'😡 how do you now😆

Hmmm so now Geet will set him right'😡

Me feeling there is more to the story of Brij not having kids till now'. Right Mel???😉 I don't now

Precap- Why is Maan dad crying???😭 did I say he is crying mel confused

Loving the FF' So happy you didn't stop it'😳 aww thank you

Love you...😳 love you to sweets

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Posted: 13 years ago
phele is kamini ne mujhe "devil" banaya aur ab "kabab me haddi"
and than she expect that me will kiss her hand😡😡
tu us sab ke hi layak hai😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

phele is kamini ne mujhe "devil" banaya aur ab "kabab me haddi"
and than she expect that me will kiss her hand😡😡
tu us sab ke hi layak hai😆😆😆


I don't want you to kiss my hand it will get all sticky and yucky 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mel420


I don't want you to kiss my hand it will get all sticky and yucky 🤣


who said me will kiss your hand😲
me will kick your ass😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi


who said me will kiss your hand😲
me will kick your ass😆


you are such a kamini😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 25
Maan and geet entered the party hall, Geet went to the girls.She was talking to Annie. When the music went on everyone was singing, dancing and having fun while geet was busy chatting with Annie. Suddenly she heard Maan's voice.

M:Ooo.. Who's the lovely lady
(Who's d lovely lady)
Walking down the street..man
She's got me crazy

Maan walked rounds around geet. Singing the song. geet glared at him. When geet glared at him Maan gave her a sweet innocent smile and sang.

M: Teri tirchi nazar ka
Teri patli kamar ka
Mein toh deewana hua

While singing he grabbed geet's hand and took her to the dance floor.

M:Oh meri meri tu Mrs Khurana
Meri meri tu Mrs Khurana
Oh meri meri tu Mrs Khuaran
Meri meri tu Mrs Khurana

Geet blushed hearing these lines.

S:Wah Nishu and Ruchi uncle itne romantic hai haina
R:Chup besharam
S:Maine kya kiya
N:Haan Ruchi, sara is right dad kitney romantic hai

They stopped talking when they heard Maan's voice again.

M:Oh baby baby you drive me crazy
Give me just one chance to make you mine
Give me give me
Give me give me

Geet smiled and jerked his hand away and ran towards Annie.Maan smiled and walked towards her singing.

M:Aaji muskuraeye, zara paas aaeye
Aagar ja rehe hai toh
Patha de ke jaaeye

Maan grabbed again geet's hand. She shook his hand away and sang.

G:Haan mere dil ki rahoon pe
Chalne jo aayega
Yeh toh sach mano na mano
Chal nahin payega

Having sang that she walked away. maan gwalked behind her holding his ears and singing.

M: Aaji rootoh na dekho rootoh na
Haan aise rootoh na
Meri meri tu Mrs Khurana
Meri meri tu Mrs Khurana

Maan kept walking net to geet. While geet just smiled and walked towards Anjali and brij. While Brij looked irritaited Anjali gave a weird smile.

M:Come talk to me, come walk with me
Everytime i see you my heart goes boom boom
Dance with me romance with me
Listen to my heart beat..

Maan grabbed geet by her hand and jerked her towards him so that she colappsed on his chest. It was like he wanted to make her hear his heartbeat. Geet pushed him away and sang.

G:Itne pakao ho tum
Baada shor karthe ho
Chupne ki aadat hai
Baada bore karthe ho

Maan went on his knees grabbed her hand hold it by his heart and sang.

M:
Jooth nahi bola hai, jab se tu aayi hai

Ye ji mere baaton mein keval sachayi hai

Meri meri tu Mrs Khurana
Meri meri tu Mrs Khurana

Geet smiled and made Maan raise she hug him tight. She didn't care if everyone was looking. Maan hugged her back and whispered in her are sorry geet.

G:I love you Maan

Maan got a sweet shock. He smiled

M:jaan we are in a party

Geet blushed and let go. She saw a clearly disturbed Anjali leaving the place. Brij was smiling a bit. Woh she had seen Brij smile after a while. Her brother was cool but weird. Geet forgot her shyness and thought to follow Anjali. She wanted to go and follow Anjali when Brij called her.

B:Geet

Geet walked to brij

G:Jij veerij
B:Come sit by you brother

Geet sat down

B:Geet since your back you din't talk to me probably. Acteally since got married.
G:Veerij you never called me either
B:Hmm everytime a called you sounded so aloof,
G:woh
B:And geet when I decided to talk to you, you left us for always.
G;veerij when you found me after 16 years you didn't sounded really happy
B:Hmmm it's not dad choti you now your veerij was happy to see you
G:But you didn't acted like that
B:Sorry if I hurted your feelings. But I was going through a lot of confused feelings when I saw you. It was a hard time for me but forget that choti. You tell me are you happy
G:Do i look happy veerij

Geet said with a huge smile. Her whole face was glowing

B:Yes you do
G: You now veerij you started sounding so weird when I got married. You now liike that

Brij gave her a angry glare

G:Sorry veerij but remember the time a called you three months after marriage and I told you what happened to my friend you said it was sad but tradition is tradition.
B:Yeah I remember I was just stating the facts
G:No veerij you said if I would do it you would take ma and meri
B:Geet that day I was really disturbed so I said whatever came into my mind. It was a dark year but we didn't gtell you anything
G:matlab
B:We will talk another time about it party pe nahi

Maan walked towards them

M:Hey guys kya baathe karehe how
B:Nothing excuse me

Brij stood up and walked away. The same direction Anjali went.When Brij left Geet smiled at Maan.

M:Jaan everything okay
G;Just talked to veerij after such a long time fellt that met my old veerij it felt great talking to him but I got the feeling he is hiding something and Anjali. maan something is wrong
M:Sshhh don't think to much main hoon na
G:Hmm
M:Come let's enjoy

Annie walked towards them.

A:There you are come with me Geet and bhai can't stay away from bhabi just for couple of minutes
M:No

Geet blushed

A:Your such a besharm bhai

Having said that Annie grabbed geet hand walked away from there giggleling. maan just looked at them and smiled.

Precap: What happened the day geet called why was brij so disturbed.

part 26
Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oooh awsm update.👏😃 Maan singing nd dancing wid his mishti.😳 And the song was jst WOW😃.Lovd it totally di. Woh song aapne banaya😉😉??????? And this brij anjali duo is too confusing yaar😕. Hope to get some hint in nxt update. Lov ya MEL di😃... Thnx for pm.
-LUV Anyaa😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update mel 👏 👏

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