ArHi SS: Free *Complete* - Page 5

Wow! I had tears in my eyes! can't believe it's your first OS!

Originally posted by: barunslakku

well written

Thanks!😊

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

Heart wrenching ... Not being trusted by the loved one can be really shattering

It really is! Thanks for the comment 😊

Originally posted by: tina_1234

amazin os

Thank you!😊

Originally posted by: naveena_arhi

it was sad but good can you make a other part about what it is like with her gone oh and pm me plz

Thanks for the comment! I wrote the next part, will update soon! 😊

Originally posted by: 1DAlice

Very well written!!

Lovely OS!!!😊

Thanks!😊

Originally posted by: Aveiro

Wow that was great as well as being really sad

Hope you wrote more soon

Thank you! I wrote a second part, will post soon 😊

Originally posted by: mirnalini

Very well written!

Totally loved it!👏...The manner in which you depicted her pain was beautiful!

And if this indeed was your first time, then you're a natural. You should take it forward if you wish to.😃

This is my first time writing something like this. I usually write science-y stuff, lol. Thanks!😊

Originally posted by: nihita

Thankyou for your pm...thought tbh doesn't feel like your first attempt...splendid!!!!I dont usually like dark ff's but your writing style hooked me...xxx

Thanks for reading it even though it's not your cup of tea. 😊

Originally posted by: Mahi1219

Sad but was wonderful!

Thanks!😊

Originally posted by: farfar319

Sad, but very well -written.

Thank you!😊

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

hauntingly beautiful

Thanks!😊

Originally posted by: desigirl_18

Wow very well written hun!! Such intense emotions!! Great work!!

Thank you!😊 You guys all write so well, so it means a lot when you say that

Originally posted by: rising_angel

OMG I cried it was so heartbreaking..

Plz write next part to let us know what Arnav feels.

Didn't mean to make you cry! I'll update the next part soon

Originally posted by: mali

very emotional and well written.

Thanks!😊

Originally posted by: .Enchanted_Soul

Fabulous job! I loved it <3

Thank you!😊

Originally posted by: sidra786

that was amazing. made me cry 😭 beautifully written.

Sorry for making you cry! And thanks 😊

Originally posted by: -bansi-

Beautifully written...

"He had saved her, but in the next moment he had killed her too. He had killed her soul."

Loved this line...very true...!!

Thanks😊

Originally posted by: goguma

U write so well.

No reason to live when the ppl that really
matters are no longer with her.

She is alr dead the moment he accused her...
Sad...

Thanks 😊. Yeah, Khushi is in a very sad situation

Originally posted by: Nmyra

sad but poignant!

Thanks!😊

Originally posted by: mrszaiba

very well riting.w u continu it.👏👏

Thanks. I will 😊

Originally posted by: sneha0504

awesome !!!!!!!!!

Thanks😊

Originally posted by: nazibah

That was seriously AMAZING!!!!!! You should really write more!!!!!

Thank you!😊

Originally posted by: angellovergirl

very well written!

you are a natural at this - please do write more and share with us :)

Thank you! 😊

Originally posted by: kookie2020

It was beautiful.. Have no words...i am sorry i guess i needed a good cry.. If u plan to continue it then, though u dont need to but please update and pm me .. i am adding u as a buddy.

Thank you!😊 I accepted the buddy request. Will pm you once I update😊

Originally posted by: Analeez11

You touched my heart

Aw..Thanks!😊

Originally posted by: Sjm15

Wow! I had tears in my eyes! can't believe it's your first OS!

Brilliantly written.

Thank you!😊

Originally posted by: crazyidiot

Very Beautiful and touching

Thank you!😊

Originally posted by: --devil-mind--

nice😊

Thanks!😊

DAMN!

Give her a miracle, please?!

I wouldn't have asked you had you not used the Devi Maiyya memory...that just moved me. I have a lump in my throat.,.

No words. That was amazing. Wonderful job!

its too late arnav...too late..
the damage has been done and he is going to bear the consequences all his life!
live life full of regrets until the day he can meet kushi again...


since there will be no more sufferings for kushi, its best to let her go..

aahh...this is sad indeed.. 😭