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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mohan-sun-na



Oh my God, Dear whitepearl, awesome penning!! You are too good,šŸ¤—but seriously, you should write a book of all these peoms,😳lets others know your talent.šŸ‘

And, BTW, thanks, I am overwhelmed, and surprised that I inspired you to write this poem. Really I am touched.šŸ¤—Hope to see more poem from your side.

I think, you should post this and the previous one in Kunal's FB or twitter account.


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Thanks dear. I m so happy that u like this one too. Actually I thought of this because of U. I never knew myself if anything could be written on Mohan's quiet suffering that he does not want even Megha to know. U inspired me to see that aspect of his love. Thanks that's what make this forum a wonderful platform to be creative. Keep inspiring me...šŸ¤—

About the twitter and FB. I m not so sure I do not have an FB account in whitepearl's name. But my poems r for U all, my IF friends.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sen_madhuban

hi dear...

you r an AMAAZING poet...i felt as if d characters of mohan & megha had come out 2 pen down dere emotions...ur sensitivity 2 potrayed emotions on screen is splendid...

& i will apologize in advance...bcoz i dont thnk my translations can barely scratch d surface of d depth of emotions u have delved in2 in dis writing of urs...

but i am soo honoured dat u gave me dis opportunity...hope i live it up 2 it...

Mohan:

With great difficulty have I been holding up d flood of love
If it breaks it will flow you away along with me
You won't even be able to stop yourself from drowning
Why then do you try to release it?

Don't pain me so much that my heart's wails reach my lips
If I say something then even your eyes will moisten
Even your heart might be unknowingly hurt
Why then do you try to tamper my wounds?

You say that my eyes speak of love for someone
You have felt the fragrance of acceptance
Why then can't you see yourself in my thoughts?
Why then do you try to read my heart's condition?

Don't be obstinate about seeing the face engraved on my heart
Here everywhere your shadows are living
The feeling of being in my shade may scare you
Why then do you try to look into my heart's mirror?

I wanted so much to hide it,not say it,bury it somewhere
But it was the vessel of love you tampered with and it had to spill
My loosing has wet your eyes too
Why then do you try to win?

Megha:

Neither did i want to defeat you, nor did i dream of winning
May smile spread on your lips was the only aim of this story
No longer do i have the courage to live in d world of hearts
Why then you try to loose everything to the one who has already lost?

Incomplete roads reach no destination
These are roads from where you can't come back
And on which I can't walk
Why then you try to turn life onto those roads?

The season of spring has long gone
No longer do i wish for any more springs
Where people do not even look
Why do you try to make that desert a paradise?


OMG you did it again! Such wonderfully written. Thanks you so much. I know how difficult it is to translate somebody's poem but you r a gifted person. Every verse expresses what I wanted to express. Here is one for you my dear..

Main Agar Awaaz hoon uske ehsaason ki toh tum bhasha ho meri baato ki.

If I can give voice to his feeling,
You are the language of my voice.

.U know It feels like a complete circle...We all saw Mohan's plight...Mohan-sun-na inspired me..I tried to pen down their emotion and U translated it to reach out to all our friends. What a team! Thanks once again dear...just a small improvement...

instead of --
Why then you try to loose everything to the one who has already lost?

read

Why then you try to put blame of robbing on the one who is already robbed
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: whitepearl


Thanks dear. I m so happy that u like this one too. Actually I thought of this because of U. I never knew myself if anything could be written on Mohan's quiet suffering that he does not want even Megha to know. U inspired me to see that aspect of his love. Thanks that's what make this forum a wonderful platform to be creative. Keep inspiring me...šŸ¤—

About the twitter and FB. I m not so sure I do not have an FB account in whitepearl's name. But my poems r for U all, my IF friends.



Thanks whitepearl, I don't know how far can I inspire you,šŸ¤” but I write what I feel, and Mohan has inspired me to take out my emotions.šŸ˜ and at present, I feel so sorry for Mohan. šŸ˜”




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