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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Friends! Here I am with another poem on the current situation. My heart goes out of Mohan as well as for Megha. Those who can understand Hindi - urdu can enjoy and relish this one too. Actually this one is inspired by 'Mohan - sun - na" who is really upset that Mohan's peaceful life is all stirred up.
@ Sen Madhuban -- I hope U would oblige me by translating this one too.
Enjoy!

Mohan:

Bahut mushkil se tham rakha hai muhabbat ka sailaab
Yeh toota toh tum bhi beh jaaogi mere saath
Na rok sakogi khud ko bhi doob jaane se
Kiyon bewajah bandhon ko kholne ki koshish karti ho?

Dard itna bhi na de ki dil ki aah zubaan tak aa jaaye
Maine kuch bola toh teri aankhaiyn bhi nam ho jayengi
Kahi anjaane may dil tera bhi na chot kha jaaye
Kiyon bewajah zakhmon ko chedne ki koshih karti ho?

Tum kehti ho kisi ke liye meri aakhoyn se pyaar jhalakta hai
Tum ne mehsoos kiya hai ki ikraar mehekta hai
Khud ko mere khayalon may dekh nahi paati ho tum
Kiyon bewajah phir dil ka haal parhne ki koshih karti ho?

Dil pe naksh chehre ko dekhne ki zid na karo
Yahaan har taraf tumhari hi parchaye basi hai
Kahin meri panahoon may hone ke ehsaas se dar na jao
Kiyon bewajah dil ke aaine may jhaakne ki koshih karti ho?

Bahut chaha ki chupa loon, na batau, kahin daba loon
Par pyaar ka paimana tha, tune cheda toh chalakna hi tha
Meri haar se tera damand bhi bheega hai zaroor
Kiyon bewajah jeet jane ki koshish karti ho tum?


Megha:

Na chah tumhe harane ki thi, na khawab tha jeet jaane ka
tere hoothon pe hasi aa jaaye fakat itna sabab tha phasaane ka
Ab aur himmat nahin dil ki duniya aabaad karne ki
Kiyon lute huye pe lootne ka ilzaam dene ki koshih karte ho?

Adhure raaston ko manzil nahin milti
jin rahoon se tum laut na paao
Aur jin pe na main safar kar paaou
Kiyon jindagi ko un raahoon pe mod dene ki koshih karte ho?

Bahaaron ko mausam kab ka guzar chuka
Na ab aur nayee bahar ki khawaish rahi
Log jis taraf dekhte bhi nahin
Kiyon us sehra ko gulistaan banane ki koshish karte ho?

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing Amazing 👏 yaar you are poem writer? superb .

just love this lines😍

Bahut chaha ki chupa loon, na batau, kahin daba loon
Par pyaar ka paimana tha, tune cheda toh chalakna hi tha
Meri haar se tera damand bhi bheega hai zaroor
Kiyon bewajah jeet jane ki koshish karti ho tum?


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Posted: 13 years ago
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⭐️beautiful... megha ke lines are hus👍🏼... great dono ke emotion seedhe humare dil ko ahuche ... nd for u👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: krazzybeam

⭐️beautiful... megha ke lines are jus👍🏼... great dono ke emotion seedhe humare dil ko ahuche ... nd for u👍🏼

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amisha.Laher

Amazing Amazing 👏 yaar you are poem writer? superb .

just love this lines😍

Bahut chaha ki chupa loon, na batau, kahin daba loon
Par pyaar ka paimana tha, tune cheda toh chalakna hi tha
Meri haar se tera damand bhi bheega hai zaroor
Kiyon bewajah jeet jane ki koshish karti ho tum?


Thanks Amisha...I am not a regular poem writer. But whenever I come across a powerful emotion, words just come out. Mohan and Megha are such powerful characters that seldom come through TV shows. I wrote for Maan and Geet and now Mohan and Megha. Brilliant portray which compels me to feel and write for them.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: krazzybeam

⭐️beautiful... megha ke lines are hus👍🏼... great dono ke emotion seedhe humare dil ko ahuche ... nd for u👍🏼


Thanks dear. Mohan and Megha cannot hide their feeling. Their face is a mirror to their soul. They let feel they are real people not reel people.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: whitepearl


Thanks Amisha...I am not a regular poem writer. But whenever I come across a powerful emotion, words just come out. Mohan and Megha are such powerful characters that seldom come through TV shows. I wrote for Maan and Geet and now Mohan and Megha. Brilliant portray which compels me to feel and write for them.


i can say this is you have best talent 👏 such a wonderful poem you wrote👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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whitepearl thank for sharing. Ur a beautiful writer, superb poem...
Wow megha ke & mohan ke lines
just loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: suprabhatha

whitepearl thank for sharing. Ur a beautiful writer, superb poem...
Wow megha ke & mohan ke lines
just loved it.


Thanks suprabhatha and mamta

I value a lot , all your comments and compliments.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I actually have no words to describe ur poem and ur talent..wish i could borrow some from u!!!! 👏

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