Where should I start from?
I use my cell to visit IF. I just read it all in one go. No doubt there are flaws but whose perfect?
You just sailed it over-boared. Amazing intensity.
I had goose-bumps all along I read it. Grt to know u're a12thie and managing fireworks still!
Its vivacious, vivid and imagery.
I could picture it all happening in my head and not to lie, I couldn't help fancying my-self at her place.
It takes lot and loads for me to go this deep into something.
Thanks for a wonderful FF.
Keep posted.
xoxo
Radhika
[P.S- I'd prefer Cherry, though :P]