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Posted: 13 years ago
now wat will happen..
maan is all unaware about the ongoings..
and kiya..
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Posted: 13 years ago

MILAN- The Final Destination
PART- 55


My 5th update in last 7 days... Now I surely deserve a big round of applaud😳 Thank you thank you...😛 So here goes the update..

Wow Geet your library is huge... Shreya gaped at hunderds of books racks. I mean I also studied in one of India best college but even their library was this big.

Geet did'nt said anything just gave a small smile she had bigger issues to bother about like what Kiya said a few minutes ago. Gosh that girl was a pure pain in ass. She did'nt wanted to doubt Maan she could never but she was somehow not able to neglect what Kiya said she just did'nt wanted to take any chance.

Geet ST- Just once let me confirm that you are lying n then I will eat you alive.

She thought of asking Shreya then decided against it why to include someone else in their personal matter.

The sound of mobile ringtone broke her thoughts n she looked at Shreya who was now answering the call.

Ok got to go now.. dad is waiting. She said flipping her mobile close. Have to shop for engagement.

Shreya said n walked away thinking Maan's friends must be aware of their engagement but how would they knew when he himself was ignorant.

Like a thunderclap hit Geet so hard that she almost became numb. Shreya... She called from behind but Shreya was already gone.

OK if Shreya is getting engaged it does'nt mean she is getting engaged to Maan. Things were pretty conspicuous but she did'nt wanted to think in that direction. Believing Maan was not a choice but a need, life was on that turn where she could'nt even think of living without him. She had complete faith on him n herself n Kiya was lying for sure.

Whole day she tried to find Maan but was not able to track him she called him too but he was not picking up the phone. While going home Karan told her that principal has asked him to look after the editing work of annual college magazine so he was busy 1st wid princy then with some teachers.

Geet sighed n left for home. Something felt utterly wrong but she shrugged the feeling off. After talking to Maan everything will again fall into place. She assured herself.

At night her cell beeped n she picked it up in one ring.

Hello Maan... Mai kabse try..

He cut her in mid. Sorry jaan princy gave me this job that too before exam I am in tatal mess right now. He has given me 1 week for this whole editing shit but I wanna complete it in two days exam ka bhi prepare karna hai

Maa..

Sorry dear hell busy will call you later okay... byee

She made a baby face he did'nt even let her say anything. Idiot. But why she so much worried anyway Kiya is bitch she knew that n only because Sheraya said that she had some shopping to do for some bloody engagement it does'nt meant that her Maan was getting engaged. Yep that seemed like a perfect explaination, still there was fear lurking inside her n she was restless.
Nothing could be done right now so she decided to do something n divert her mind. Study..?? Nah. TV...?? Nope. Novel..?? No. Grrr nothing seem to work she was'nt even able to play guitar. She did'nt had her dinner either n the restlessness was killing her.

Meera... Geet to Meera's room who was engrossed in her book.

Kya hua Geet?? She asked. Geet came n settled beside her.

Meera I am not feeling good.

This happens when people don't eat their dinner.

Nai wo baat nai hai andar se I am not feeling good. Like the intutions you have when something bad going to happen. She tried to explain.

Yah... Exams are coming that bad enough for you. Meera said with a smirk n Geet made a face.

Whatever. Promise me you'll never leave me. She asked holding her hand, seeking her answer in Meera's face.

Like you will let me... Meera said not taking her seriously.

Meera... Geet whinned.

I will never leave you. Happy?

Hmm.

Same time Beeji entered the room. Geet puttar Daar ji ki tabiyat bahut kharaab. Mai kal raat ko London jaa rai hu. Wahan se mai, teri maa aur papaji Amritsar jayenge.

Par achanak Beeji.. Geet asked shocked

Bete tere papaji ko meri zaroorat hai... Amritsar se fone aaya tha aur unhone kaha k daarji k paas zayada time nai hai. Teri papaji daarji se bahut pyaar karte hai, tu samjh rai hai na.

Ji beeji aap jayiye I will take care here. Meera said keeping her hand on Geet's shoulder.

Beeji nodded n left for preperation. Geet's eyes filled up not because of Daarji, she was sad for him but not that much as see had never seen him before but she was worried for her papaji he was an emotional man n relations meant everything for him. She knew he must have broken down completely. N then this engagement thing now she was all the more scared, the time was bad n she had that voice in her head saying the coming time was even worse.

Geet... Don't cry dear everything will be fine. Meera said unaware of her inner tumoil.

You sure?

Yep.

Meera kept studying while Geet fell asleep on Meera's bed after much tossing n turning.


Next day Maan did'nt came to college. Geet so much wanted to see him, talk to him, hug him, kiss him. She wanted to get rid of this fear n restlessness. She tried calling him but he was not picking up the call.

Shit. She said frustrated after trying for the 22nd time. Thank god he picked up after two more times.

Why were you not reponding n why the hell are you not in college. She shouted angrily, nothing was going according to her n it was irritating enough to fume her.

Woah woah... Geet calm down yaar. Was up all night with the magzine work. Right now at home n all literary club members are here just final touch ups are left it will all be done today but still there's a lot work.

Maan i need to as...

Maan print outs are here. Geet heard someone calling in background.

Got to go Geet catch you later. Bye. He hung up leaving Geet more angry.

Just one question. It wont eat up all his time. Why is he doing this? Is he ignoring me purposely? Why would he? He loves me. But he never said it. Gosh! Now I have started doubting him. She scolded her inwardly but everything was confusing n she was not getting her answers either. Doubts n suspicions were knocking her door from all sides. She wanted to think good n trust him but negative thoughts were not leaving her trail. She needed to see him right now n hence decided to go to KM. She wont distrub him just one answer n she will come back.


Till evening Maan's work was almost done so he decided to go n meet Geet, he had not seen her since 32 hours n was missing her badly. He. was coming out of KM, just then his phone started ringing.

Maan come fast, here is an emergency. Shreya said from other side of the line.

What emergency?

No what... its important. Come fast. She told him her location n disconnected the call.

Shit man. Now he had to go to Shreya due to the so called emergency. He decided to meet Geet after coming back. He left KM n meanwhile Geet reached KM. Mr. Khurana was in the main hall reading some newpaper.

Oh Hello Geet. Mr. Khurana greeted.

Hello uncle. Where is Maan? She asked impatiently.

He has gone to meet Shreya.

Par usne toh kaha tha k he is busy. Geet absently spoke.

Yeh some magazine work. Right? But how could he deny his would be wife. Shreya called him so poor boy had to go.

Like the sky broke upon her. She ran out ignoring Mr. Khurana completely. Directly she headed towards Kiya's home. Her eyes were filled with tears, pain, fear. She till tried to reason. Maybe all this is just a big misunderstanding. My Maan can never betray me.

She reached Kiya's Mansion, whole place was shimmering with fancy decor.

She saw Kiya's mom. Aunty do you know where is Shreya or Maan?? Geet asked in a haste.

Shreya is out since morning for shopping n Maan i don't know bete.

Now what was she supposed to do. She cameout dejected. Geet... She turned behind n saw Kiya coming towards her.

Poor Geet don't know where her Maan is??? So sad. Let me enlighten you, Shreya was having some selected ring you know engagement ring. She must have called Maan in mall. But you should not distrub them. You are his past n Shreya is his present n future. Geet started walking, she wanted to clear everything as soon as possible.

You were very proud na.. Kiya voice again stopped her. About your n Maan's relationship. But look at you now, thats what happens with a whor..

Before she could complete a tight slap landed on her cheek. Thats what happens with a bitch like you. Geet said n hopped inside her car.


This is your emergency. Maan asked astonished.

Haan I can't select among these two rings. Shreya said with a baby face. Dad was with me but then he left to fix some things with the planner so I called you.

Uff these girls. Maan thought then said. Why are you selecting your own ring yeh toh ladke walo ka kaam hota hai.

Yep hota toh hai but my dear would be fater in law wanted me tro select my ring myself. Shreya said with a smile.

Whatever. Now do it fast.

What fast. You tell me which one is better.

How would I know I am not a girl.

Maan please...

Oh god... Why don't you try both of them on n see which one is better.

Good idea. She wore the first one its was nice then she tried the second one n bingo it was better n looked perfect in her finger.

Yeiii!! This one. Shreya shouted merrily.

Yeiii!! Finally. Maan heaved a relief breath.

Oh! No. Shreya spoke not very happily.

Now what?

Maan yeh nikal nai rai.

Hence proved shopping with female species sucks. He thought. How much you eat that its not coming out of your fatso finger.

What is my fault if its not coming out. N my finger is not fat.

Maan shook his head n held her hand in his to remove the stubborn ring.

Maan you will break my poor finger like this.

Your fatso finger looks pretty much strong it wont break this easily. He said grinning n Shreya hit his shoulder playfully.


Geet looked at the heartbreaking seen through the glass window. He looked happy putting the ring in Shreya's finger. Turning around she walked aimlessly towards the exit, defeated. Her hope, trust everything scattered into thousands of pieces to no repair. She closed her eyes, tears moved out n she eventually realised, Maan could betray her n when she said he was hers that was just an illusion.
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Posted: 13 years ago
😭poor maan doesn't even know whats happening 😭
Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
just awesome..
geet like mad seacrhing for him ...
and shreya she says maan is her friend and how come she does not seee tat maan loves geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh dear misunderstanding
poor geet
maan uski baat kayon nahee sun rahaa hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem maan not listnening her geet saw him with shreya woh bhi ring pahnaate hue poor geet please do next soon



Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
poor geet please do next soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!that was a dhamaka mu..
Maan dont noe wats happening..
And poor geet!taking it all wrong..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Poor Geet.
Kameeni Kiya ki bachchi.
Plz ab torture mat karo.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mera 1 e hope he ki Maan good boy bank apni bap k bat na manle.

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