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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 2

I ENTER THE ROOM AND SAW HER SITTING ON HALF BIRTH ' AS SOON AS SHE SAW MW SHW WIPE her tear but I noticed ' I walk up to her and put my hand on her shoulder'she look up and smile and I know that she is in so much pain '. I made her got up and hug her'.

In the evening we all gather at dining table to have a dinner and sidhi was much exited to see her fav. Paavbhaji seema made ' she thank seema and start eating when suddenly ma comes ans stop her ..

Veena: sidhi what r u eating? U know that anand doesn't like it so why r u eating?

Everyone really getting upset but what to do' kunal really getting mad at his mom he looks at sidhi and try to say something but sidhi hold his hand'

Veena: here I made u this kheer u should eat that ' and try to feed sidhi, she doesn't want to eat but veena look at her so angry and said u have to take care of anand and asked her to eat '

mr chopda ask veena to take rest but veena told him that until sidhi doesn't finish she want go from here'.

Sidhi is really not feeling good but she couldn't say anything and start eating the kheer ' she has tear in her eye.

Kunal show that and asked sidhi to eat latter, if she doesn't want to eat ' then he said ti sidhi'

kunal: sidhi u go and take rest and ma u also go rest if we need we will call u'.

Kunal also get up because he didn't feel like eating

Seema is really worried about sidhi'

In the bedroom:

Kunal saw sidhi crying and goes near her as soon as she saw kunal she hug him and start crying' and suddenly she felt very bad on her through' she just run from there to bathroom and throw up everything'.

Kunal run after her and asking her if she is ok or not ,hearing kunal calling sidhi seema papaji gavrav also came out ' kunal asked seema to go and check' seema went in and saw sidhi is washing her face.. Seema came and patted her back and asked her if she is ok' sidhi nod in yes. she hold her and bring her outside, as soon as she came out kunal took her hand and asked if she is ok and told her to get ready they r going to doctor. Sidhi told him she is ok. And ask him not to worry'. Seema and kunal took her to the bad. Seema told kunal that she will make nimbupaani and left. Kunal look at sidhi and hug her he is really worried, ' looking at him like t sidhi told him that it happen she doesn't need to worry

next part soon don't feel like writing... didint see good scene of kunal and sidhi since two days allways with bd so...
Edited by nigahlad - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Nice OS.
The kheer scene was ok but i was xpecting siddhi to throw up coz that wud happen in real life if a preg woman would hav made to eat food she dislikes.Then may b they could show as u wrote kunal worried n being more protective ,atleast we could get some gud sinal scenes.
Actually dnt know frm where creatives graduated.Ystd in one of their FB saw written he does nt read books.So just imagine if a person does nt read bks of known writers what kind of storyline he will create.That's why we r getting all these craps. Shame on them.They r disgracing their own profession 2. N EK i think hardly has a degree in anything.Only having an eye 4 selecting the right person for the role wnt do,have 2 know 2 give him importance.She should open her eyes now.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice..plz do update next part soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update dear ..and i fully agree ..seeing the presnt situation ..it seems no motivation is left ..hopefully things will be fine soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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NICE OS,,,,,,,,,AVI JO TRCK CHAL RAHAI USSE SE BAHETAR HAI...THANX FOR THAT
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanx alot dear for updating ...i really hope things in parichay become fine soon and you get motivated to update ...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
nice OS... wait for another too...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really nice scene .plz do continue soon.

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