my first OS : confession of love !!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey peep ! my frst ever os ! i never thought that i'd be ever writing an OS ! but yeaa its arshi who just make me think about them 24-7... please do share your thoughts on it ! even if u dont like it do comment guys ! i know it sucks though ! šŸ˜†

6 months over. arnav knows that khushi is innocent. arnav tried out ways to get khushi's forgiveness! but khushi is admant not to grant him any forgiveness. Meanwhile naniji falls sick and khushi stays back for some more days in RM . now the day has arrived when naniji got better and khushi is leaving.
The night before her departure from RM. Arnav gets back from office and found khushi packing her suitcase.
Arnav (A) : ( in an angry voice which is clearly exuding his pain of khushi leaving him, taking his tie off and opening the closet ) toh tum kal ja rahi ho ?...
Khushi (K) : ( without looking at him , packing her clothes) Haa ...
A :( turned at khushi) Nani ke khatir rukne ke liye thanks...
K: (still not looking at him) Hum sirf naniji ke liye ruke huye the. unhe in halat mein hum akele nahi chhod skatethe
A: aur mujhe ? mujhe akela chhod sakti ho ?
Hearing this khushi looked at arnav in a surprised manner
A: rehpaogi mere bina ? ( almost glaring at khushi typical ASR style)
K : (shouting) Hum rehpaye ya na rehpaye... aap ko isse kya ! hum kal ja rahe hai . hamare jaane ke baad aap achchi tarha se rehlenge yeh hum jante hai.
A: (getting even more angry clenching his teeth... gripped khushi tightly close to him) kya maine aisa kaha ke tumhare bina rehpaunga ?
K: (surprised and says in a stammering voice ) toh kya nahi rehpaenge ?
a sudden pause . close-set eyes towards each other ! suddenly arnav realises what he said then moves her away and is about to walk towards the door while khushi stops him.
K: aap aise nahi ja sakte. kya kehrahe the aap ? hume kuch samajh me nahi araha
A: tum kabhi samajh bhi nahi paoge (about to leave)
K: ( shouting in anger) thik hai mr. arnav singh raizada ! kuch maat bataiye hume ! aap toh hamesha se hi aise hi karte hue aye hai. hamesha se hi humse mu modke arahe hai. hamare upar itna bada ilzaam lagane ke baad bhi aapko chain nahi aya. humari dhukh , dard , hamari jazbaat , in saab cheezo se aap ko koi fadak parta hai ? (bursting in tears )
A: (again turns back to khushi grips her tight, in his loud angry voice) haaa fadak parta hai ! jab bhi tumhe dard hota hai mujhe fadak parta hai.. jab jab tumhare akhon mein asoo aate hai mujhe fadak parta hai. (draws her even closer , eyes glistening, softens his voice a ) jab bhi tumhe kisi aur ke saath dekhta hu mujhe fadak parta hai...
K: (stunned by his words with eyes full of tears) arnav ji aap...
A: ssshhh (placing his finger on her lips )... 'jab jo bura kaha us ka koi matlab nahi...jab jo bura kia us ka koi matlab nahi...iss pyar mein sahi aur galat ka koi matlab nahi...bas ek cheez ka matlab hai...ke mein hamesha tum se... (yes he repeats the very heer ranjha dialouge which he left unfinished)
K: ( emoting all her love for him through her eyes. a drop of tear rolls down one of her cheeks).. humse ? humse kya arnavji ? usdin bhi nahi kaha... ( tears bursting out of her eyes )
silence in the air
A: hamesha tumse ... (stops for a while, lowers down his head, closes his eyes and taking gulps again looks at her) agar yeh fadak parna pyar hai toh pyar hi sahi... haa khushi hamesha tumse pyar kiya !!!!!
n after that... u guys decide !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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first one to comment.. YAY!!😃
awww!! this is soo cute! :)😳
Edited by zanonymous - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: zanonymous

first one to comment.. YAY!!😃
awww!! this is soo cute! :)😳

thanks ! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fabulous
i hope i could see such scene in the serial 😭
i loved when you insert HEER AND RANJA scripts it was great idea
first attempt ,,,, rocking one dear
keep it up
Edited by lostlove - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks alot !! everyone !! thats realy inspiring ! love ya all !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yay... awesome...

nd after that a looonnnggg kiss...!!šŸ˜›šŸ˜ā˜ŗļø
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Originally posted by: gd9424

yay... awesome...

nd after that a looonnnggg kiss...!!šŸ˜›šŸ˜ā˜ŗļø

aaawww i sooo wish it happens !!! i'll just faint ! if i ever get to see those two kissing !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wooow ur first OS is amazing
i love it sooo much
good starting
thnks for da pm also
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guys i'm glad that u appreciated ! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very beautifully written. The way u made him say it just completed one silent wish of mine that i have had since the day they showed him saying that dialogue. Phew!!! God only knows how long we have to wait to hear something like this from ASR's mouth in the show.

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