'Meant To Be' ArYa FF Part2-Pg3,Preview Part3-Pg5 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Veryyy well written part!!
Loved it!!!
Continue sooonnn!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
awesome updates
u r writing good
pls continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Incredibly awesome!!!!!!!!

U r excellent!!!

Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks All.

I am working on the next part. Should be up in few days :)

here is sneak peek at whats coming

"You are making it sound as if I need you and that's basically what I have problem with Yashji" Aarti warned her tear ducts to behave. She was determined to leave this place, leave him behind and now was not the time to have second thoughts about it. The deed was done. Backing off now would be a grand hit on her dignity ' something she guarded more than her life. Whatever happened to your dignity when you were begging Prashant to take you back, on the day you were supposed to be married to another man? Her subconscious sneered at her. She ignored it and waited for Yash to react.

His eyebrows had disappeared in the hair that fell in a fringe on his broad forehead.

"I did not mean to sound that way. I just meant to say that it was never about you or me anyways. It was always about the children. You don't need me. I agree but Ansh does need and deserves a father to call his own"

His voice turned hard and unforgiving even without realizing it. Audacity of this woman to say she didn't need him. Was it difficult for Yash Scindiya to make her come begging to him!

He looked at her to see if his words had their intended effect on her. Apparently they hadn't. She kept looking out of the window like before, her mouth, that full lipped mouth remained rigid with its expressions of pure defiance.

Edited by Kshiti_Kunal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What a brilliant teaser! Seems like Yash has finally reached his breaking point, and now that Aarti is ready to leave he isn't willing to let her go!

These are two very stubborn people and the tug of war between their wills will be a pleasure to watch! Let's see what Yash does to change Aarti's mind because a few words aren't going to do the trick, especially in light of his completely unwillingness to trust her with his daughters!

Can't wait for the full update 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That's awesome. Keep it up.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loveee the teaser!
Waiting for the part!

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