OS-My ex fiance waz shyam...

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Spoorthy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Wish aisa hi kuch hojai show may bhi. Wonderful os by the way

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livy

@livy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

really good. thanks for the pm.

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saba

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

very nice i love it thank u for pm me

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Maya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

nice one princess!!

I always like it when you write hindi dialogues as you're very good with it..perfect grammar n all...and hindi dialogues always make it easier to imagine our characters really doing and saying those things on the show!

Loved the way you chose to reveal the truth and also the part that Anjali already knew the whole truth except for the fact that her husband Shyam was the same one who cheated Khushi...

Keep writing..and thanks for the PM!

Cheers!!

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dhahi

@dhahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

This s superb...

I so so so wish tat it happens...

But alas!!!

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ruby-red

@ruby-red

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

awww, that was so nice.

what the...akash and payal only at staring and talking with the eyes stage even after 2 months of marriage...wow,, inki to hogaee chutie, insay to koee umeed nahin hay.

plese continue and thanx for the pm.