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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Kesarmania

Hi inu i luved ur gulaal part2 ur ff is sabse alag. And i salute ur imaginatin. Dulli daughter of talli and dushayant. Aur ur superfast hun chap 2 mein hi leap le liya. Ok i m ur frn na so i can demand anything from u right? See gullu has son , mujhe uski wife bana de, mera wala ditto kesu ka duplicate ok. Next chappi and 25 year leap kab ayega?

Hi shradu. aww thank you love ya 😛. no its boring i find it weird, :S. thank ya salute your comment😆. yh dulli kyun ki shes a headache😭 yh leap lana hi tha naah. depends what do you demad. son and daughter 😆😆😆😆
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lol uski wife are meri maa woh ab ek hafte ka nahi hua aur tu uski ki biwi 😆 Rofling 🤣 ditto dekh lungi acha. 25 year leap dekhongi jab wo 25 ka hogaa but nice idea though lubb ya loads
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: NivRen_1

Thanks for the update

loved gulaal's confusion at the hospital and Kesar was enjoying confusing gulaal
waiting for you update

your welxs
hahah lol loved it tooo
ill update i dont no when ...
thanks for the comment though
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Posted: 13 years ago
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haila kesar its u... u changed ur identity😭
woooh i never knew u wrote an ff mummy where was i
anyways res😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: arti07

haila kesar its u... u changed ur identity😭

woooh i never knew u wrote an ff mummy where was i
anyways res😳

Haila Arti 😲😲😲😲😲
*flash back to a year ago* its me dont worry just changed thats all
tum sach mein tum hi ho na koi sapna nahi 😕 odd for you to come on FF thread i though Arti nahi aa rahi so id rather start something really boring to fill up the time...*sigh*
yh i had to cuz of my baby Amir and his fiance look down ... love them ma babys!!!! i love ya theyre Engaged heheheh loved the ceremony Embarrassed yeh i wrote an FF, whilst you were getting ready to become Mother India for your kids which aint even born yet 😃😆. update your comment soon and your FF darling you know how much i love it. Update yours soonn ⭐️
Wife to be: Amir Khan became formally engaged to Faryal Makhdoom at the couple's lavish engagement party last night at the Reebok Stadium in Bolton
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was Gulaal's first night back home and already she had been woken up twice by the babies and Kesar was becoming increasingly worried about how she is not going to get enough sleep so when the baby woke up the third time he thought it as his turn. He slowly lifted his son out of the cot and peeked to see if Gulaal was awake. She seemed like she was fast asleep. He tried to rock the baby to sleep but it was no use and the baby started crying louder so he began to worry.

Gulaal had woken up to the sound of the baby crying but when she saw Kesar taking the baby out she wanted to wait patiently and see what he was up to. He tried to calm the baby down and then he started to smell this weird smell and he immediately knew why his son was crying. "Yeh tu ne kay kiya" he said as he laid him on the bed. He had seen Gulaal handle a similar situation with his daughter in the morning and so he decided to try it. he collected all the necessary equipment but when he removed the pampers he was in disgust. He again peeked at Gulaal hoping she was awake but no so he slowly cleaned the baby. Now that the baby was spotless and he had thrown the garbage out. He had another problem on mind. As he did not know how to tie a pampers. More than him his son was getting very impatient and trying to kick his dad. he tried and when it looked alright he lifted up the baby and applied some powder just like Gulaal had done.

Gulaal was watching everything with half an eye and she saw that he had closed the pampers upside and she could not keep in the laughter any more. Kesar turned round to see Gulaal laughing. "Agar tumhe karna nahi atha toh tumne utaya kyu nahin" she took the baby and tied the pampers perfectly. Then she laughed again and took her shawl and wiped off all the patches of powder on his face. Then she took the baby and took a peak to see if her daughter was ok before settling on bed and rocking the baby to sleep.

Kesar washed his hands and searched for something in the drawer before leaving the room. She finished with the baby and placed him back in the cot before going to check out where Kesar had disappeared to. She walked to the terrace and saw him looking at the moon. Kesar she called out. Then he turned around. "Tum agayi" "Haan par kya baat hai Kesar" he slowly put his hand in his pocket and took out her heart locket which he had gifted her and then Gulaal remembered that she had taken it off on request of the doctor in the operating room and since then hadn't got a chance to put it back on. She took the locket and opened it and noticed that he had added the babies picture for her. She smiled and hugged him to say thanks. But Kesar had something else in his hand in another box. She took it and opened it to see another necklace like hers but tinier and she knew it was for her daughter. Then she saw a bracelet and knew it must be for her son. He smiled and said that these are his first proper gifts for his children. She adored how much love one person can shed and embraced him when she noticed another bracelet similar to her son's one on his hand. it had a heart shape hanging from it with the pictures inside. She didn't need to speak and she knew she was in a coat of love.

Suddenly she remembered that she had left the kids and began to turn around when Kesar held her hand and said "kahan ja rahi ho" "room ja rahi hoon woh akele hain" "ab time kya ho raha hai" "time toh barah baj raha Kesar par tum aise kyu pooch rahe ho" "aaj ka date kya hai niveditha" "pata nahi Kesar" He smile and came close and said "aaj mera patni ka janam din hai aur woh bhi mera bachein ki ek din baad" Gulaal was in shock yes he was right and they were talking about it a week ago when Gulaal was saying that she wanted to get her babies on her birthday but she had forgotten in all the commotion. She hugged him again and this time she knew that she was crying. She could have never asked for a better husband. a better dad and a better friend than him. He said, "aaso nahi Gulaal " he wiped her tears and for the third time took a box from his pocket and she opened to see a beautiful ring with a sapphire in it and surrounding it Was the letter N and V arranged in such a beautiful way that she loved it. He took it and slowly placed it on her finger. She replies that it was very beautiful and he said no nothing is beautiful compared to you. She shied and he said that their was many more surprises for her tomorrow and she should wait. She loved him, admired him and never wanted to part for him. As they embraced and returned to their room.

Kesar had not told Gulaal where he was taking Today. it was her birthday and she had already received a present but she knew Kesar had more surprises planned. he had woken her up in bed with his own hand made breakfast and to back it up he had also showered her face with rose petals. The walls of room had hearts sticking and saying are you ready to go out with me and the kids? He wanted to know a yes or no answer but she knew o wouldn't be an option as long as Kesar so she happily accepted the yes. She smiled as he immediately lifted her in his arms and turned around the room saying that she would love what he has in store. He slowly placed her down and said that he would come in some minutes and for her to get ready.

She slowly dressed up in a pale blue salwar khameez which she found in a box in the cupboard saying I love you meri jaan aur yeh bhi tumhare liye. She wore it and well she loved it. she didn;t wear too much jewellery as it might harm the babies when she is carrying them so she left herself to her natural beauty.she dressed up the babies to in gowns that Kesar had put our on the bed and she liked them. She noticed how Kesar had decorated her room. The corners were filled with baloons. The banner above their head was saying Happy Birthday Gulaal. Their were rose petals covering the dressing table and side tables. She was loving Kesar and she knew she could she could never stop loving him.

Kesar was downstairs placing a double sided pram into his car. He laughed at the thought of what he had planned. for her. Gulaal finished dressing the children and feeding them and now she was hungry herself so she began to see what Kesar had bought for her. There was a large glass of milk and water. In the middle there was some sausages, an omelet, fruits and some sandwiches. she liked it and it would be different to her normal indian cuisine.

She climbed downstairs with PB who were each holding a baby. PB had come into the room to see if she was ready as she had seen Kesar getting anxious. She was blessed by all the elders and wished too. She had recieved some sarees and jewellery but the best gift from the family was Tallis's she had gifted a small bracelet which had a heart shape in the middle inside which their was a picture of both her and Gulaal when they had been small. They hugged each other goodbye. Gulaal slowly climbed into the car and placed the babies in car seats which Kesar had set up for them. Kesar told her she and babies looked beautiful and his selection was perfect and Gulaal agreed.

It had been a while since they left home and it was getting to the midday time and she started to question Kesar about where they were going but Kesar didn't seem to answer. After a while the car stopped at a small resort along the road. The resort looked similar to Gulaal but she thought she was just imagining things but no when people began to call her and Kesar in a more formal way when they got out. She knew where they were. Kesar had received another project after the first one and N Gulaal couldn't help him much cause she was in the early stages of pregnancy. She had designed some images though and the resort looked just like it,, She was emotional when she had seen her work come true.

Kesar guided her towards a small hut at the end and said that they would be using this for the day. The hut was just like the room had been decorated in every red shape and image. What she loved was that Kesar had put up some of their pictures on the wall. It started from the wedding one to some functions and then the one when they arrived home with the babies. She smiled when the babies began to cry. He had bought the pram and set up as a cot and they did enjoy it cause they thought it was like going on a ride. Kesar had left Gulaal for a while to work on his last surprise.

After a while Kesar had arrived and he noticed that she had changed to another dress which he had left in the cupboard for her and he smiled instantly. He hadn't expected her to have worn the dress. It was a silky blue modern dress which was long so it covered her in whole and was had straps. She had wrapped her self with a shall but he didn't mind. He knew she found it uncomfortable. She had tied her hair up in a curled fashion and she was looking stunning. He slowly came and placed an arm around her and said thank you, but she replied that when he could do so much for her then she shoudl keep her fear inside and wear this. he kissed her hand and her forehead. He quickly slipped into the bathroom and changed too. She wondered where they were going but he wouldn't give a clue.

He took her hand and lead the babies out to what looked like a small dome in the middle of the garden. Their was a large amount of crew surrounding them and she placed the babies in an area where should keep an eye on them. Soon a cake arrived and it was a double Decker. The top was Gulaal 's birthday and the bottom was for the opening of the resort from tomorrow. Everyone sang and Gulaal turned red but her heart was enjoying everything. She fed Kesar a piece and he fed her too and they laughed. They ate cake and then were roaming along the beach with the pram for some time until it got dark after which Kesar took her to the garden. She noticed that the whole set up had changed and now their were banners wishing her happy birthday, She slowly walked and Kesar flowed with the babies and told her to sit down. This was the last part of the surprise. He had arranged a candle light dinner. She loved it too.

Then the music began to play and when offered her a dance she couldn't resist. They twirled and danced around. After hours of fun they returned to their hut where they would sleep for the night and return home in the morning!

Hoep you like it guys! When you reply please write down the names for the baby that you would keep cause next up is - naming ceremony.

Here are some images of my scene:

Gulaal woke up to the light illuminated room. She tilted her head to see Kesar sleeping beside her. She thought back to the romantic things he had done for her yesterday and she was elated at how wonderful her birthday had been. The babies had woken both of them up and now that Kesar was getting better at sorting out the babies they did take turns unless the baby was hungry then Kesar would step away. She smiled seeing how cool and handsome he looked even with his eyes closed. After the babies were born they hadn't got too much quality time but yesterday filled up for it. She was still in Kesar's embrace and was trying to sneak out but Kesar pulled her back. She fell on top of him and he was enjoying tracing her face when the babies started crying. She got up and he didn't stop her then cause he knew they needed her.

Gulaal looked at the time and she panicked when she noticed that it was past 8 and they should have left home by now. But Kesar smiled and told her to worry as they would leave a little later after opening the resort and cutting the ribbon at 9.30. She agreed. Kesar was looking after the babies when the waiter arrived with food for them and set up the table. Gulaal was in a rush to get to the shower today. Everyone was ready but her. She had taken out a brown salwar and decided to wear it. She placed it on the bed and took a final look at the babies before heading to the bathroom.

She had taken a long shower and getting changed when she noticed what she had done. She must have left her pant on the bed. She was wearing her top and standing in front of the mirror when she noticed the missing pant. She couldn't go out she thought. What would Kesar say? Then she took a towel and slowly wrapped herself with it. She opened the door and peeped her head out and told Kesar to pass the pant but naughty Kesar had other plans in mind. He lifted the pant and smiled his mischievous smile as he was walking up to her. He tried to open the door too. But Gulaal held on with all her might.

She shrugged at the pant but he was not willing to let go. She pointed at the children and said the baby. Kesar turned round to see if everything was allright. In that split second Gulaal took her pant and shut the door. Kesar banged on the door saying she was lucky this time but he would get her very soon. She knew he wasn't joking!

Gulaal cut the ribbon for the opening ceremony and sooner or later they had left in the car. During the journey Gulaal and Kesar had been quiet and sat still until Gulaal suddenly shouted at Kesar to stop the car. He stopped with a sudden jerk and turned to see what was wrong. Gulaal smiled at Kesar pointing at the children and then he saw what she meant! The cute little darlings were smiling and that too looking at him. Gulaal and Kesar were elated today their children had laughed.

The car reached home and they met and hugged everyone. PB informed that the Pandit ji had said tonight would be a good night for the naming ceremony. They agreed and started with the preparations. Gulaal had already made the dresses she wanted her children to wear and she had put out a light blue kurta for Kesar and taken out a magenta pink saree for herself. The whole house was in laughter and everyone was enjoying the day. The rest of the day Gulaal was busy with preparing everything and making sure nothing went wrong. Kesar had left to the office to see if their was any work to be left done or pending.

Many guests and Visitors were entering and meeting with everyone. Gulaal and the children were getting reading while Kesar was waiting impatiently for their arrival. Soon the function began and Gulaal along with Kesar bought the children down and proudly named them Neil and Mansi and placed them in their cots. Kesar kept issuing signals with his eyes that Gulaal was looking fabulous today and she shied. The whole family was laughing and communicating with the babies. Soon after Kesar tried to divert the attention of Gulaal but she was standing on guard next to the babies as each visitor came and gifted her presents. So Kesar decided that he should spice up the party a little bit.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi... nice story.. keep wrtn...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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IF SHES NOT HERE WHO IS GOING TO UPDATE CAN I GIVE YOU A SUGGESTION IS IT POSSIBLE IF I CAN TAKE OVER PLEASE

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