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sauris

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Hai Kesra really a good start,so update fast

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Faryal-Makhdoom

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part 2:

It had been a week since Gulaal had announced to Kesar and his family that she was pregnant but the house was already full of toys in waiting for the baby's arrival. She was standing in front of the mirror after dinner and reminiscing the past moments she had spent with Kesar. He had changed a lot these days. He was now trying to be more mature to become a proper dad. She placed her hand on her stomach and said, Tumhe Pata hai, tumhara papa aur bakhi sab bhi tumko bohot pyaar karenge aur mein bhi. Kesar took a lot of her care like not allowing here to do anything and when she needed something he would make sure someone was here to give it to her. He had even made her to go to sleep by making her lie down on his lap and patting her head. She loved him being so caring and enjoyed having so much attention from him. He had even got her some interesting books and music to keep herself engaged. He even held her hair and forehead when she threw up. She didn't like him to see her in that position but he never gave her a chance to say go away. He gives her tablets and kisses her goodnight before saying a bye to both his jaans. He had made a list and made sure she did everything to keep herself in good shape from her diet to even her walks. Speaking of walks, she laughed when she remembered how he had taken to her the park at the same time while he was jogging. He had even ended up chasing a dog since it was blocking her path by removing its tied rope. Unfortunately the dog's owner got mad at him and he had to get the dog back for him. She laughed at his cute expressions when the owner had a very stern face at him. He has been such a sweetheart and she loved him a lot.She suddenly snapped out when someone embraced her from behind, She smiled and shied at the same time as she knew who it was. He asked her with his mischievous smile asked how both his hearts were doing. She replied saying that both were fine and they spent the night finding out about how the day had gone before he patted her to sleep.She had slept off but when she woke up in midnight she felt like she needed some ice cream. She woke up and at her slight movement Kesar opened his eyes too. Gulaal tum ut gayi? kuch problem hai kya? Nahi Kesar woh mujhe bas kuch ice cream chahiye. He smiled and asked her is raat mein and she quickly replied haan Kesar mujhe bohot man kar rahahe laa ke dona. He traced her face and said anything for you. He ran out and he was back within seconds with a small cup of delicous ice cream. She snatched it and started eating. HE laughed at her urgency. She smiled back at fed him a spoonful.After which he was feeding her a spoon. Before long the cup was empty and their stomach's full. They hugged each other and thei eyes slowly snozed off.

(this time this scene is after Talli's given birth and they are all at home now. The track has taken a 5 months leap)

Gulaal never felt how fast time brushed past her but now she was getting to know. Her stomach was getting a bit larger these days. She shied everytime Kesar looked at her. She couldn't believe that a long time had gone and now after the arrival of her di's baby it would be her own in some months time. She was estatic and could not wait. Kesar never got tired to taking care of her and some events in the last few months she would treasure a lot. She thought back to one such night. She had been relaxing on the bed and Kesar was sitting next to her busy in his offfice work. She kept quiet not wanting to disturb him. All of a sudden, She had felt a movement in her stomach. Kesar she screamed. He panicked and came to her side to see if everything was ok. "Kya hua Gulaal, tum teek tho ho" "Haan Kesar mein teek hoon par mujhe lagta hai ki baby ne kick kiya" "kya?" he replied. "such" "haan Kesar abhi laga" Then he placed his hand and suddenly he felt it. A very small kick it was and he loved it. He smiled and he talked to the baby toh aap apne maa koh bhi marne lage" abhi se aisi maare he hain toh agar bahar aayi toh kaisi maare gi" She noticed how he used pronouns like he thought it was a girl. "Kesar tumhe ladki chahiye kya", "haan tumhara jaisi sweet or loving bhi" "kyu tumhe kya chahiye" "mujhe toh ek ladka chahiye bilkul tumhare tarah, aur woh bhi tumhare tarah bohot sare surprises ke saat aye" "nahi mujko toh ladki" "nahi ladka hoga" she replied with a little anger on her face. Now he didn't want that so he said "joh bhi hoga accha hi hoga aur me usse bohot pyaar doonga teek hai". She smiled and then they both had enjoyed the rest of the night looking at good baby names for the child. Kesar had printed off a list from the internet and after every name their would be an argument until they found two names that both of them liked just as equally. If it was a Boy it would be Neeraj and if it was a girl it would be Nirja.There was also another incident like last moth he had taken her to the clinic for her monthly check up. The doctor had asked whether they wanted to know the baby's gender by under going a test. Referring back to the night of argument Kesar had refused saying that whatever the gender the baby will get everything. Gulaal didn't argue. The doctor smiled at his answer and said that now was the time she had to be more careful. That word was taken extra serious by Kesar that now even dropping her off to the bathroom was part of his daily routine. She liked him to accompany her she was finding it a bit hard to walk very easily so his help was required alot and he never complained. He even made her juices and drinks when the others were busy with Dulli or had gone out, Every day made her love him just more and more. Kesar was always Kesar and he made sure he kept the surprises coming after the firth moth of finding out Kesar had gifted had a wonderful present and she loved it. It was a full moon night when he came and opened his hand out which contained a lovely little heart shaped box. "yeh kya hai Kesar" she said, "yeh toh tumhare liye ek chota sa gift mujhe papa joh banane wale ho aur waise bhi yeh maine kareedi hai aur woh bhi mere paise say joh mujhe contract se mila tha" she smiled and opened the box. Inside was a little heart shaped pendant with a small thin chain. I looked simple but very elegant with some gems fitted on every side. She loved it. He waited as if there was something more "thanks Kesar bohot acchi hai" "tum ne toh khola hi nahi" "kya" and then she understood what he was saying there was a little locket on the side and when she opened it inside was a picture of Kesar and Gulaal and a space on the other side she understood that must be for their baby and she loved it. "yeh toh bilkul tunhari tarah hai, bahar sa seedha saada aur andhar se pyarr aur khubsurat say barah" This was one of the most memorable days for her and as she traced the necklace around her neck she shied at how Kesar had slowly tied it around her and then gave the necklace a small kiss saying that soon it would be complete.

She smiled when she noticed Kesar standing behind her. He said kya soch rahi thi, kuch nahi bas kuch hamashe rehne wale baatein soch rahi thi, sona nahi hai kya, haan kal godh baraai joh hai. He smiled and took her to the bed and they both slept off in each others embrace.

Hope you like the post! and excuse me for any spelling mistakes and keep posting your replies and any particular replies too are allowed

Edited by Kesar04 - 13 years ago

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Faryal-Makhdoom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sauris
Hai Kesra really a good start,so update fast

Hi sauris and thank you ive updated beaware and enter at you own will

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minizz

@minizz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Inayah,loved it a lot but beech mein yeh Viren kaun hai? anyways Kesar is such a loving husband.loved how he takes care of Gulaal and fulfills all of her desires.The ice cream incident-very cute😊loved the little but precious gift of that beautiful locket.Gulaal's dialogue is very apt.now please update soon😊

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Faryal-Makhdoom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: minizz
Inayah,loved it a lot but beech mein yeh Viren kaun hai? anyways Kesar is such a loving husband.loved how he takes care of Gulaal and fulfills all of her desires.The ice cream incident-very cute😊loved the little but precious gift of that beautiful locket.Gulaal's dialogue is very apt.now please update soon😊

Minnz

aww thank you

OHH..erm let me tell you long story short my friend in school she loves Viren from EHMMBH and she kept on going about his character and she confused me i was in class and the teachu ne kaha log off and i just updated it im really sorry i edited it know its gonna say Kesar Minnu mujhe maaf kar dogi naa 😭 pleashh

yh i figured that out. yh loving laga age age dekho hota hai kya. Ice cream aww i want some whio had ate it 😆

aww i loved that bit too soo sensitive😳

kal karongi pakka promise Ghod bharahi ki invites bhi dene hai naa 😉

Edited by Kesar04 - 13 years ago

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MR21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Inayah...this is a lovely chapter...

I was just smiling n smiling while reading this...

loved the ice-cream and locket scene...

Waiting for ghod bharaai...update soon ...

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alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Very cute update dear..liked it so much..update soon😊

Edited by alanta - 13 years ago

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Faryal-Makhdoom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Part 3:

It was the morning of the Godh barai ceremony and the sun was shining brightly throughout the Room. Kesar had woken up early and a's usual was planning a surprise for Gulaal who was fasts sleep like an angel. Gulaal woke up to the sudden sound of a dropped vase and was astonished by what she saw before her. The room was completely different to what it had been last night.
The table and chair were removed and replaced with a small but beautiful cot and she just loved it a lot There was also a large number of toys which were of different shapes and sizes too. They looked so adorable. She tried to get up when she was embraced by Kesar who said kaisaa laga mera surprise. She replied with a smile that he should not have done so much but he refused that these gifts were nothing compared to what she
is giving him. She adored how Kesar could love her so much.
She slowly walked to the things and looked at what Kesar had purchased and noticed that there was two of everything one in pink and one in blue. She asked him why he wasted so much money but he replied saying that money was nothing compared to showing love. She noticed the dresses that he bought each in a different size and colour. They all seemed so pretty. She realized that he has even bought bottles and make up equipment for the baby.
She asked him why he bought two of each and what if it was a boy and then what would she do with all the rest of the things which are pink. Then he smiled and
put his hands around her neck and said that she wasn't planning on only having one child was she? She blushed and looked down when've lifted her chin an said that nothing will go to waste and that everything will end up being used.
Her heart raced when he traced with fingers along her cheek when there was a knock on the door. It was Paanba and she had bought her the dress for the godh barai ceremony. She smiled and thanked her. She then showed her all the things that Kesar had bought and she replied that he was going to be a perfect dad. She reminded them that she would send breakfast to the room
And she left.
Kesar looked at Gulaal and said that he can't wait till tonight and especially to see her in this dress. She shied.

Kesar had been chased out of the room by Talli as she wanted to get Gulaal ready for the ceremony. The dress chosen by Paanba was a splendid mix of tradition and colours. It had a marroon and reddish shade and was light weight so that Gulaal wont have so much trouble to move. To back it up she wore a very small necklace as well the one Kesar had gifted her. Some gold bangles with a lot of imitation ones too. She had put Mehendi too on the saying of Talli that morning and she liked it a lot. She was getting ready now and Kesar must already be downstairs mingling with the visitors she thought.

That was not true, he was walking up and down the hall waiting for Gulaal's appearence. He was wearing a blue kurta and he looked as handsome as always, All the guests made fun of him saying that he was a joru ka gulam and cant live without his wife for long. But Kesar was Kesar he never gave any attention to them and he continued to wait for her. Suddenly Revji and Poonam arrived and they all greated Kesar their blessings. Paanba was busy in checking all the preperations were going fine and she was carrying Dulli around with her. Motaba was talking and welcoming other guests. Paanba pointed at the stairs and gladly said that her bahu was coming. Gulaal was walking down with some ladies and Talli on her one side. Kesar coudn't take his eyes off her and he was drooling. She looked like an angel he thought. She slowly sat on the chair and the ceremony began.All the guests came and presented her with gifts and a whole load of blessing. Paanba, Talli , Sudha, and JK had even given their share of the presents. Many types of Sari's and jewellery were recieved. Gulaal was thanking everyone.

After a while the function was getting a bit boring and Kesar had the perfect idea to spark it up. He got everybody's attention and told them that they should play a game called pass the parcel. Most people agreed but JK refused and Kesar never took no for an answer and by the end of it he had forced everyone to play. He went and sat besides Gulaal with a small radio. He said everytime he plays the music the pillow will be passed a round but when the music stops the person with the parcel in their hand will be out and has to say a riddle, dance or sing and he and everyone will try and guess or just listen and enjoy. First person to get out was JK. She was asked to dance on the song Marjaani and Marjaani and my my the great grandmother was in full josh and she was hopping to the beat while everyone laughed. Next up was Poonam ba who sang a melody which she used to sing when Gulaal used to be small. Everytime when someone was doing their task Kesar would squeeeze Gulaal's hand and say that she looked very beautiful today. She shied and said that everyone is looking but he never listened.

Dulli had started crying so Talli wanted to quit. So she said a riddle which was: "what goes up but never comes down?" everyone was thinking hard but was unable to guess the right answer and she laughed and said that it was "age". Rewa was next and she did a very nice dance to the song tere liye from Prince and she kept pointing at Yogesh the whole time. Talli sang a song so bad that some of the glasses broke apart but no one said anything and just clapped to keep her going. It was a song that her mum had composed for her and trust me it fitted her completely. Motaba said a riddle too. "We all follow God but what follows us?" again everyone was in trouble and he declared the answer as "shadow".

Sudha was next and she sang a wonderful song about godh baraai just like she had done for Talli's funciton. On the next turn the pillow had been held by both Motaba and Revji therefore both of them danced to the song do you want a partner and evryone laughed on. This meant that Dushyant had won and he asked Kesar what was the prize and in response he said that he would give him anything he wished . Dushyant said that he needed nothing cause he has everything he will ever need,

Soon the guests began to leave and Gulaal and Kesar were all alone while Talli and Dushyant were in their room . Paanba was in the kitchen. Motaba wwas sending guests off. So Kesar suddenly pulled a nearby rope and shower of flowers and pieces of papers came showering down on them. Gulaal asked Kesar why he did this and he said he always likes to admire her and he will keep surprising her in order to get that wonderful smile.

Kesar had cut some apple pieces for Gulaal and she was refusing to eat them but each time Kesar would tell her that if not for herself she should atleast eat for her baby and then she would take another bite. Kesar told her that maybe it would be easier for her to eat some more if she diverted her mind on something else and he suggested her to listen to some of the CD's but Gulaal refused saying that she had heard them so many time during the past few months. So Kesar said that then he would play a new tune on his Morjang for her. He went to the cupboard and brought his Morjang and assembled it. Gulaal waited with a smile when he began to play the tune that was a part of every meeting they had. Sooner or later Gulaal finished and Kesar said now that's a good girl and went off to collect some water from the kitchen.

They were alone at home. Sudha, Motaba and Paanba had gone to a temple for praying for the well being of the family. JK had gone to her friend's house for lunch and she wouldn't make it back until late. Dushyant was in the Karkhana and had dropped Talli and Dulli over at her Aunties house. So Kesar was collecting water in the kitchen.

Gulaal was sitting on the bed and was reading a nearby magazine when she felt a sudden jerk in her stomach. The pain was revolting and she was unable to control it. She knew she needed to call Kesar and tell him that it was time but her pain had engulfed so much that when she opened her mouth she couldn;t manage to call him she grabbed the vase nearby and threw it on the floor hoping Kesar could hear it.

Kesar was returning upstairs when he heard a drop of the vase. He immedaitely droppped the glass in his hand and rushed to the room to see Gulaal in pain. She was turning and tears were pulsing out of her eyes. Seeeing her in this manner he began to cry uncontrollaby but he knew he had to be strong. He rushed to her side and asked her what was wrong but he already knew the answer. He had seen it happen a month ago when Talli bhabhi had been in the same position. He collected her in his hands and assured her that everything was fine. Before rushing her downstairs and went straight to the car.

He placed her in the back seat and adjusted her head on apillow. She was screaming in pain and he couldn't see her. He immediately climbed into the front seat when he saw a man at the gate. Who was he? he did not know but somewhere his mind said that he knew him. He was broken from the entrance when Kesar screamed out again. He hit the accelerator and they were off.

He rushed on the road. When he noticed a road block ahead.

It wasn't a road block but it was Durgesh smiling at him and saying that this was the end. Kesar did not pay attention and rushed past him when he saw him ordering three cars to follow him. Kesar kept turning to keep an eye on Gulaal when he noticed that she had fainted. His heart was racing. He saw three cars gaining on them and closing in on the sides. He understood the plan. They were trying to squash his car and before they closed in he accelerated forward and the cars collided on themselves and skid of the track. He could see Durgesh's face and he knew that he would be back but now Gulaal was important.

he carried her into the clinic and the doctor took her to the operation room. Kesar was scared and he was marching up and down in panic. He called up Dushyant and informed him about what had happened and soon everyone had arrived one by one. Kesar was scared and Motaba assured him that everything was alright. Talli was praying at the mandir and said that Gulaal had done the same for her.

Doctors and nurses kept rushing in and out of the room and they said that their was a slight complication. After half an hour of crying praying and frustration, the doctor came out and Kesar asked her if everything was fine. The doctor told him "aap ki dono bachein teek hain" Kesar smiled and asked how she Knew that he liked to treat Gulaal as a child. But the doctor shaked her head and said "no no mr Kesar aap ki patni ke bare me nahi baat kar rahi hoon main toh aap ki twins ki bare mein baat kar rahi hoon. app ko ek ladka aur ladki hui hai. mujhe toh iss bare main pehle hi batah tah par app hi neh mana kiya tha sonography karne ke liye". he said "such doctor thank you" and everyone congratulated him. He wanted to see Kesar and the doctor gave him the permission to do so.

Here's what i think the babys look like i couldnt take a decent picture Kesar jaane hi nahi de raha tha andar kitni bheer lagatein hai yeh log 😉🤣

Updated new chapter do not hit me with Tamatar or Mojris hit me with a bat but nothing else that is all i will accept Bad comments too as i know this is bhangaar enjoy guys no update till Monday now 😛 only if i change my mind 😆

Edited by Kesar04 - 13 years ago

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minizz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

awww so cute Inayah.loved the whole ceremony and the performances😃my fav one is Talli's😆Who was the man at the gate?he was not Durgesh right. or is it him?I am confused.very nice chapter.please update soon😊

Edited by minizz - 13 years ago