Arakshi_Lover thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#1
first of all guys...i'm just 15 so...i'll make sure the poen comes out well hit like button if u liked it!

sadiyon ka intezaar
hui poori tumhe paakar
tumhari uss maasoom si hasi
ko dekne hua mai bekaraar

jaantha..uss komal hriday
mein bastha sirff main hi tha
tumhe paane ki shakti nahi thi mujh mein
kyunki jannta ta ki ye haath tho bichad jaayega
jaantha tha ki adhura reh jayegi yeh kahaani...
jise likha kisi ne nahin...

ab chali gayi ho tum
apne shiv ko chod kar
tumhare yaadein tho hain, par tum nahi
tumhara pyaar chootha hai abhi bhi
par milthe nahin haath
chaahe tum ho jithna bhi dhoor..
mere mann par likha sirf ek naam - SATI .

😭😭😭😭...GOD! I WANNA CRY!!! VERY BADLY...INFACT WHILE WRITING THIS POEM...ALL SATI-SHIV MOMENTS JUST FLASHED ONE-BY-ONE IN MY MIND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
😭😭

Created

Last reply

Replies

4

Views

690

Users

2

Likes

13

Frequent Posters

Arakshi_Lover thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#2

Originally posted by: .Reshama.

sow sweet ...😊



thanks a lot reshma!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊
sukhi... thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#3
Oh! Sweety MINDBLOWING n SUPERB tribute u hv given to maa sati but u made me cry gal now i wont be able to control my tears...
Arakshi_Lover thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: Mia.spark17

I didn't like it...i LOVED it yaar...wow...the poem's really good..made me emotional..



god u scared me at first!!!!! it made me emotional too! 😭
Arakshi_Lover thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: sukhi...

Oh! Sweety MINDBLOWING n SUPERB tribute u hv given to maa sati but u made me cry gal now i wont be able to control my tears...



thank you! even i was crying while writing it!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".