RTMC FF ( The Ghost Woman ) A Short Story

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Short Story





The Ghost Woman


I embraced you...but it was unreal...







Rajat Tokas as Rohan


Mugdha Chapekar as Meera


Part1 Page 1

Part 2 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56400394



Part 1


Mrs Kalyani was worried for the guests...the two day train journey was tiring for


everyone...though she was happy as her only son Rohan finally got married... she had been


waiting for this day in her life so desperately...




Mrs Maya "Kalyani di, ask the bride if she needs anything...she is sitting in another


compartment..."




Mrs Kalyani "i asked her...i think she's sleeping now...she must be tired..."




Mrs Maya "but di...she is wearing such heavy dress and ornaments, I hope she's fine"




Mrs Kalyani "no no she's not like that...i know her very well...i always wanted Meera to be my


daughter in law...she understands our customs and rituals so nicely...i am happy that Rohan is


married to a homely and well cultured girl"




Mrs Das "well Kalyani ji now a days girls are so advanced that they sit with their husbands the day


they are married and even start talking with them..."




Mrs Kalyani "i know...but when I asked Meera...she happily said she will sit where ever I tell


her...now she's in a different compartment and Rohan is with his friends..."



Mrs Das "you are lucky Kalyani...whats the time??"




Mrs Kalyani "its 1:00am...we will reach in another one hour..."




Mrs Das "i was thinking if we can sleep now...one of us can sit with Meera...she's all alone in that


compartment..."




Mrs Kalyani "i thought Kavya is with Meera..."




Mrs Das "no no Kavya is sleeping...i will go..."



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Meera's eyes were closed...she was wearing her bridal clothes...she was a beautiful girl...she


had never spoken to Rohan before nor she knew anything about him but she was happy with her


marriage...


the train moved faster...all she could hear was the wind passing by the window...




Mrs Das entered her compartment "Meera...do you need anything beta??"




Meera "no aunty...i am fine..."




Mrs Das "alright...would you like to freshen up...??"




Meera said hesitantly "yes..."




Mrs Das helped her get up...she took her towards the nearest washroom... "i am standing


outside...if you need help"




Meera smiled and nodded her head...




After few minutes she came out... "aunty I feel like vomiting"




Mrs Das "don't worry Meera...you can stand near the door for some time...it must be suffocating


for you to sit for such a long time...come"




Mrs Das helped Meera towards the door... Meera relaxed as the cool air blowed on her face...


she leaned against the door...




Mrs Das "feeling better now??...i will get a water bottle...i am feeling so thirsty"




Meera "yes Aunty..." she said while nodding her head...



she stood near the door and looked outside...there was a smile on her lips...that suddenly vanished when she saw a woman sitting next to her, with her head bent down...


Meera "excuse me..."


The woman lifted her face to look at Meera...


The blood in her veins curdled at the horrific sight and she screamed...she immediately moved away from the door...




Mrs Das heard her scream"what happened Meera...are you alright?"



Meera "nothing aunty..."


she turned behind to look...but there wasn't anyone...


Mrs Das "Meera you must rest...i will take you back to your seat..."




Meera was still thinking about the terrible incident that chilled her spine in few seconds...


she didn't wanted to tell anyone about the horrific scene she witnessed...she tried to forget and closed her eyes...


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Belgaon was a small and beautiful village...it was not developed like other villages but people were


happy with basic necessities of life...



Train reached the small station at Belgaon... all the family and relatives got off the train to reach


home, they were tired after the long journey... the house was old and had a big courtyard with


some banyan trees, one well and a long path towards the gate...the house had three rooms...one


room was for Kalyani and her husband Debashish and one for Rohan and Meera, there was one


extra room for the guests...




One hour later



Kalyani "Meera you must have bath and wash your hair , we have to perform some rituals which


are important and must be performed on the same day of the wedding, since you will be going with


Rohan to Delhi soon...so I have to make sure we complete all the rituals..."




Meera smiled and nodded...


she had bath and came out wearing a nice saree, her hair tied nicely under a white towel...




Kalyani "Meera make sure you take this coconut and it should break the first time when you hit it


hard against the well...and also make sure your hair does not open unless you break the coconut"




Meera nodded...



Kalyani stood at the door step of the house...while Meera walked towards the courtyard with the


coconut in her hand...it was dark...there wasn't a single noise outside...she looked up the tall


tree...she made sure she was walking carefully...she looked at the well...suddenly her foot slipped


and she fell...the towel wrapped nicely around her head fell off...




Kalyani worriedly looked around "don't worry Meera," she said though she knew it was


inauspicious...


Meers got up and walked towards the well slowly...she tried to hit the coconut against the


well...but it didn't break the first time... Kalyani came towards her "don't worry" Meera tried again


and it broke into two half...


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sweetsanyo thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
reso jii
😊

~~**EDITED**~~
very true di.😃
actually if even i have a story in ma brain, i don't write it.
if feel as if doing some offence.😆
just can't stop thinking about rtmc...😉...

seriously big fans!😳

u noe i have written 5 short stories.😳
very soon i will post them all.
some editing omitting is required.😊

so now for ur story!😃
i remember di, wen u said dat u r scared of supernatural things.
but now u gonna write a scary story all by ur-self.👏
dats amazing...⭐️
di has become bold haan!😉
yeh!

so now for banner too.😳
its so cute and so perfect jii.
i loved it, mugzz, oops! meera☺️ luks so innosent here, rohan is charming.👍🏼

mrs.das n mrs. kalyani r good too.😊

but this rohan enjoying wid his friends in other compartment..😡...what d hell he is doing there.😡??????????leaving ma beautiful princess bride meera all alone.😡
how nervous she would be 😡,all alone, kissi ne socha h kabhi...😡...
i hate rohan for this.😡

she saw a ghost in train too!.😲
meera is really cute n sweet daughter in law.😳
but, her towel fell😒 and cocunut din break at once...😭...

this is inauspicious.😭

di i don't noe wats ur story is , but plz keep meera all safe n sound in rohans arms...they both should be alive at end, no compromise wid their life plzz.
its a request .😍...

but the line u used in beginning-''i embraced u...but u were unreal.😍

this really makes me excited.⭐️
ud soon.
u noe na hw much i love such supernatural n thrills.😍

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omggg!!!this is scary !

Bt loved to read on rtmc,how crazy fans we are
im super dooper upar crazy fan of rtmc

u know what rtmc is my first fav couple ever on tv

now update is just mindblowing,awesome n scary

oh ho newly married couple rohan n meera lovely names
n they travelling in train or wo bhi alag alag haye she was alone

koi is rohan ko samjhayo ki uski shaadi meera se hui h uske dosto se nhi

to read the title i thought mugdha will be ghost in this story..hehehehe
yehi hota h bina baat dimag chalane ka result

loved meera,she is so cute and sweet...oh cocunut was not break in first time..,
poor meera

that train scene was really scary even i also scared yr

nice update bt loved it thoroughly becoz its different
thanks 4 pm

pls update soon
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
wow...RTMC SS !!! 🥳
di...luvd d 1st line !! 😍
Meer n Rohan cute names !!
dono alag compartmnts mein !!! 😔
her saas belivs in lots of superstitions...
hopefully nothng inauspicious will happen !!
lik d story !!!
its mystrious n scarry !!! 👍🏼
do continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ohhh teri
ye to vhoot wali story hai sach me
dhawni i love such storries n loved the starting

continue soon plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start of ss do continue soon.
shruja thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for SS n pm
loved 1st part!!
beautiful banner!!
so both meera n rohan just married!!
and going to their place
but in diff compartment? she also din't meet her before!1
tht was very scary when meera saw tht women!! is there any connection to rohan or his family?
Feel sad tht unauspicious thing happened while rituals!!
hope nothing will happen bad to new married couple n family
waiting for rohan meera moments and other interesting rituals if any
Edited by shruja - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start , please continue soon
ridzzi thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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scary story...😛...thank u so much...🤗
u know i really like this type of story...ye toh apko shikhar ke time pe hi pata chal gaya hoga...about that white dress lady...
u know what i read this type of stories in morning...n at night the scenes keep haunting me...😆...n i don't go anywhere alone at night...specially in darkness...😳...but still i didn't stop reading this kind of stories...or watch movies like this...
ok now to the update...
rohan n meera...nice name...👏
n they are just married...😛...but travelling in different compartment...😲...haye...
n di really that door scene was really scaring...that lady...😲
poor meera got scared...
n she fell n her hair got open...n that coconut also didn't broke at first...
god many inauspicious things are happening...
hope their married life will stay safe from this evil power...
n they are going delhi together...gr8...😊
n yup the banner...really good...👍🏼
update soon...
luv u...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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[/b]hii di
1st of all sorry
ffs pr cmnt na krne ko
bache ki tbiyat kharab ho gai thi
waaoo bhut wali ss
i love this type of stories and movies😳
bt raat ko baad me yaad krke dr lgta h 😆
@TEJJO DI SAME HERE
HMNE BHI YHI SOCHA KI MUGZ BHUT HOGI OR RAJAT KO PYAR KRTI HOGI 😆
abt ff siggie
it suppeb
isme mugz bhut pyari lag rhi h
n rajat ka to jawab hi nhi my cuti pie
bt this bhut 😡 ise thoda alag rkhte na
dono k upr dekho kaise aa rhi h 😭
kanha ji plzz help me ~_~
mere cuti or mugz ko bachao is bhut se 😡
ye kyu dikh gai meera ko
dar gai na bachi
or ye kya ek bar me kaise tutega vo
itna hard to hota h 😡
hmse bhi nhi tutega 😡
dusri baar me tut gya na vo kafi h
is bhut ko to m chodungi nhi 😡
thnx di aisi story k liye
i love this type of stories
n i love u 😊

@RASHU jaldi likho sari stories
i want to read [/b]

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