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Posted: 13 years ago
we want 50 more updates of GMYH ..thats it..kiase wo aap jane...


ABOUT OS:

mayank kabhi indain buses mai nahi chada kya ...use ye nahi pata ..ki seat ke alawa chat bhi hoti hai...


or nupur to kamal hai CYA to aise bol kar gai jaise mayank ko janmo se janti ho...


OK JOKES Apart//

nice and cute os specially jealousy part ...

and wo apni mehnat dikhane wala ...and most important the proposal... loved it hats off...
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Posted: 13 years ago
That ws sweetest dii...
Totally MNish and so adorable...Specially i loved the pre confession part where mayank whispered in her ear that feelings wont change ever...
Loved this os...

And haan fr GMYH u know i've already accepted the coma part as its ending...So i'll want the epilogue fr that part...
But think majority vote 2nd wala ko hi jayega...as sab confrontation ki continuation chahte hai...
Anyways write what u want to ok...
Love uuu..<333
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was beautiful... Thanks for sharing it with us 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesomesttt update

hayee mere mayur
it was full on mayurish n mjhtian😆
n wo jealousy wala toh..😆👏
nupur ke gusse se mayank was toh like🤢
hehehe
loved it...
di plss aise os aur likho...
with this i will feel i m watching mjht...
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
ps- plss 1 chotu sa ..cutu sa epilouge😳
Edited by parul_bansal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Edited my Both comment API...
love u lodsss...🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME STORY LOVED IT...
too sweet...cute...amazing...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow fiza...
after like ages i read such a beautiful os...
loved it dear...
wht a journey... 😍
now how they goona met again...??
pls pls cum soon...
love ya... 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 2:
fiza u r dam good jani...
wht a ending and wht a beautiful confession...
loved it ...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautifully written Fiza... very nice 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Humain Jab Se…



Hectic life with high busy schedule..huh… have just left me with this, the sense of loneliness, me and myself, alone and frustrated.

The sound of the dry leaves, irritating my ears, the flow of wind and spreading so much dust…uff… I am hating evry little thing on this world. Driving myself back to my so called luxurious home on these almost empty roadies, obviously at this hours only youngsters for fun or rather people like me..workholics…. ya ya ..so what else I should do know adays, I have nothing to do…

Humain jab se Muhabbat hogai hai

Yeah duniya khubsorat hogai hai..

As my car stop at he signal..ya I know its empty road and I can easily break the signal but I wont, ya so my car stop at the signal and here the adjacent car a boy was enjoying the soothing tune of this beautiful song. With all the frustration and all anoynes I was feeling inside me, I felt my lips automatically curled in to a subtle smile.

Suddenly the whole atmosphere become so peaceful, the ambiance was peaceful, bliss, the smile grew more as my eyes glittered with the beautiful memories of ours..

But now the feeling of not going home increased more, home that is allotted by my company here when I am away from my city, my home, my family and You, I turned my car towards the river beside which I was driving..making myself cum down and sat beside the river..

It was a beautiful night, so dark yet so bright with feeling that was now all over me, I lyed down on the grace which was drench in the mist and close my eyes. The cold wind made its fingers softly placed inside my hairs..sigh.. I turned to the left side, still my eyes cold and felt the warmth I was missing so much beside me.. placing my head on your lap, I felt your soft fingers taking out all the stress from me.. feeling your soft peck on my forehead..gosh I was feeling slowly getting lost in u.. as I tried to pull u more near me… I came back to earth with…as the same car by passed again

Fizaaon mein nayi ek roshni hai
Havaaon mein ajab si taazgi hai


The whole dark river, slightly glittering with the light of street lamps, the firefly flying over it marking the bank of river.. the music of the dry leaves making the night so beautiful…

I felt your hands softly crawling from back, engulfing me in you, holding them pulling you more closed… leaning to kiss you… found u shying away from me…yet I hold u, and felt u yet again so closed , so mine.. me always yours…

Tum is vadee mein mujhse mil rahi ho
Zameen lagta hai jaise ga rahi hai


I opened my eyes slowly .. and found u sting in front of me, smiling mischievously rising your eyebrows in wht.. I chukled.. I asked you to came here and u leaned to me and whispered no and run away…

Running behind u I just stopped in track… I have lost it…ya I have…hiting my head..and took my jacket and strt walking towards my car..

Nayi rut ki mahoorat ho gayi hai
Ye duniya khoobsoorat ho gayi hai


With all these days away from you, things have changed the feeling has changed, it has grown much strong .. now I wanna hold u much much more longer, through out my life and here after..

Hai lipti dhund mein dilkash nazaare
Nadi khaamosh hai chup hain kinaare


But than I stop in track and turned back….Slowly I saw u walking towards me, with your eyes dancing with expression of love, ur lips having a subtle smile.. u came near me and pulled u more close..driving myself with the way ur eyes were telling me

Hai ek chhoti si kashti aur hum hain
Chale jaate hain lehron ke sahaare


Kissing your forehead, capturing your eyes… I gave my fingers the honor of tracing you lovingly. closing your eyes u let ourselves feel the moment… as I lean to capture your lips sealing the desire,

Suhaani ab lo sangat ho gayi hai
Ye duniya khoobsoorat ho gayi hai


As I open my eyes all that was left around was the feel of yours, your aura, your warmth…

I love You…

I whispered and strted the walk to car, strted it n just when I was about to make it move.. the beep of my cell took my attention..

Hmm so thak gay ho samhj ata hai …per is k yeah matlab nhi k msg kerna bhool jao Mr Sharma…

I smiled more widely it felt my confession reached u there…

Ma'am ap yaha bhi humain kuch yaad nhi rekh ny dayti..sigh… kya kerain ..apky elawa sab bhool gya…

Acha ji … tu hum se door reh kr koi kafi romantic hogaya hai..baat kiya hai..

Resting my head back I felt like driving back to her.. ahh.. I so want to be with her..

I love you…

😊 …I know… u know what….

I chukled knowing what is coming next….

What…

I love you to… drive safe…

I will.. takecare of my queen…

I will….

The whole journey that strted with frustration, was now with the feeling of being drench in love… true..

Humain jab se Muhabbat hogai hai

Yeah duniya Khubsoorat hogai hai..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago

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