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The air was crisp and the boat glided through the river he held her closer to his arms as she shivered a little under the blanket of stars. Mahadev gazed at the clusters of stars admiring the beauty of the skyline...yes the Mahakal was in awe of the very cosmos which he could embrace, engulf and end at his wish but tonight while holding his bride close to his chest he was for once neither Rudra nor Trikaldarshi he was just Shiv her shiv as she would haughtily proclaim he always loved the way she would proudly straighten her nose when she claimed he was exclusively hers. Although it was the expulsion of this very ego that would be her ultimate step to reach him, to be capable of his love but hadn't he reached out to her already? The part of him that had come to her had already loved her with all her human follies but he was Mahadev the supreme God whose Adi shakti had to be created and in the process...his heart shuddered at the thought of the final debacle and unknowingly his massive arms squeezed her delicate frame causing slight pain which stirred her,quickly noticing the change of rhythm in her heartbeat his eyes suddenly struck in the river which had changed its colour from dark blue with white sprinkles of reflected stars to deep purple and red hues. He gently whispered in her ears "Sati you should look up at the sky" the two lovers were lost at the sight of such intoxicating beauty it was terrifyingly beautiful. Sati was awe struck and so was Shiv only their object of fascination differed her was the ever changing colour of the night sky while his was the pair of eyes that reflected that light he sometimes wondered how could it exactly resemble with that of a doe. Isn't it beautiful" her soft whisper brought him out of the trance yes" it almost came as a growl which shuddered her very being. Failing to respond she silently gazed at the bright hues.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Man...
u've written it soo well...
i m just speechless... i really don't have words to express what i m feeling rite after reading it...
awesome...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u so much it means a ton to me..it's ur encouraging word that keeps me going with my writing😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wao thats a superb creation Gunkesari, seriously no words to express ur each n every word touched my heart.

Excellent and outstanding...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u sukhi its ur appreciation that keeps me going😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OH MY GOD.OH MY GOD😲..gunkeari my dearest friend what have you written..🤗 a master peice man yahoo👏 I had ..a shudder while reading extremely beautiful & sensuous..dear pls keep writting more...Now I wont leave you...& you want to say I write well ..mein toh kuch bhi nahin..!!😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Extremely marvellous!!!!!👍🏼
Please keep on your superb work.
Thank you
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mia.spark17

@gunkesari..u r a true star..kya likha hai..wow..people like u make our forum exciting..loved loved loved it till infinity..thnx 4 sharing!

😊 thank u so much dear m rly overwhelmed and u guys r the real stars for lifting a person's heart and spirit i am no one compared to u beautiful people out there.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: TOTAL-ROMANTIC

OH MY GOD.OH MY GOD😲..gunkeari my dearest friend what have you written..🤗 a master peice man yahoo👏 I had ..a shudder while reading extremely beautiful & sensuous..dear pls keep writting more...Now I wont leave you...& you want to say I write well ..mein toh kuch bhi nahin..!!😈

coming from u its an honour for me thank u n i've already mentioned ur my inspiration🤗m truly honoured today😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooji2012

Extremely marvellous!!!!!👍🏼

Please keep on your superb work.
Thank you


thank u dear for ur encouraging words and i'l surely keep writing for such dear friends like u😊

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