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Very nice --- please make it an FF!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Excellent!

Always a pleasure to see a different POV - this time Devi Maiyya!! Excellent Idea, Fluid writing, Keepitup!!😃
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Nice undercurrents, hilarious intervention, great story. Good job!!
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Ha ha what a novel concept to bring in Devi Maiyya as a protagonist ... very nice day's work. And yes i think she has set the wheels in motion...as do you.. you have a great start to continue if you like with this story :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh my God!!

Your writing style is really like really great!!!!

was this your first OS!?? No way!!!! It's way too good for a first time!!!!

I really loved it! How they felt attracted to each other, nicely described!

Soo... will there be a part two!?? Please! 😳

xxhaffie
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Awesome job. Great concept. I read the entire thing and i am grinning like an idiot. Maybe you should continue. Do keep writing and also pm me for your future works.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice work!!..Enjoyed reading it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you Devi Maiya!! Aapne humari sunli!! :) :D

Awesome OS man! Damn, she's such a hard working er.. Goddess, Devi Maiya! :P

Great work anyway! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful job dear u should continue further!!
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Originally posted by: Newbiesoapfan

Very nice --- please make it an FF!



Originally posted by: TeleFan

Ha ha what a novel concept to bring in Devi Maiyya as a protagonist ... very nice day's work. And yes i think she has set the wheels in motion...as do you.. you have a great start to continue if you like with this story :)



Originally posted by: DarkDove



Oh my God!!

Your writing style is really like really great!!!!

was this your first OS!?? No way!!!! It's way too good for a first time!!!!

I really loved it! How they felt attracted to each other, nicely described!

Soo... will there be a part two!?? Please! 😳

xxhaffie



Originally posted by: Bunny_Bear

Awesome job. Great concept. I read the entire thing and i am grinning like an idiot. Maybe you should continue. Do keep writing and also pm me for your future works.



Originally posted by: jnfrjnfr

Wonderful job dear u should continue further!!



Thank you all so much for your response!! I cannot describe the feeling of elation in me right now. I left it open ended for a reason. But for the moment this will remain an OS. :)

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