OS : Divine Intervention

Very nice --- please make it an FF!

Ha ha what a novel concept to bring in Devi Maiyya as a protagonist ... very nice day's work. And yes i think she has set the wheels in motion...as do you.. you have a great start to continue if you like with this story :)

Awesome job. Great concept. I read the entire thing and i am grinning like an idiot. Maybe you should continue. Do keep writing and also pm me for your future works.

Nice work!!..Enjoyed reading it😊

Wonderful job dear u should continue further!!

Originally posted by: Newbiesoapfan

Very nice --- please make it an FF!

Originally posted by: TeleFan

Ha ha what a novel concept to bring in Devi Maiyya as a protagonist ... very nice day's work. And yes i think she has set the wheels in motion...as do you.. you have a great start to continue if you like with this story :)

Originally posted by: DarkDove

Oh my God!!

Your writing style is really like really great!!!!

was this your first OS!?? No way!!!! It's way too good for a first time!!!!

I really loved it! How they felt attracted to each other, nicely described!

Soo... will there be a part two!?? Please! 😳

xxhaffie

Originally posted by: Bunny_Bear

Awesome job. Great concept. I read the entire thing and i am grinning like an idiot. Maybe you should continue. Do keep writing and also pm me for your future works.

Originally posted by: jnfrjnfr

Wonderful job dear u should continue further!!

Thank you all so much for your response!! I cannot describe the feeling of elation in me right now. I left it open ended for a reason. But for the moment this will remain an OS. :)