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Risha

@LivingInPajamas

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Ohmigosh!! That was WOW!! Jimmy Choo and Devi Maiyya-enough said😆Firstly I love that song now :D I am going to download it and listen to it until death :P The way you revisited the diwali and tyre scene in one go was magical😍As for your writing style-You have me interested now and I can't wait to read more!! Pretty please another one soon?😳

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: aadyakali
plz continue...it was lovely.

Originally posted by: magi11
awesome os...i think u must continue ...

Originally posted by: kitzdoll
it was awsuuum dear...pliz continue n do pm me wen u update,,,thnx

Originally posted by: shagun_sarun
awesum...its just too good...gr8 work👍🏼

hey do pm me.

Thank you so much for commenting! :) This is presently going to remain an OS! There is a slight possibility I might continue after my exams, in which case I shall definitely let you know! :)

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

brilliantly written, I must say 👏! devi maiyya sure has a wicked sense of humor 😆... wow, aman must be a really brave man to ignore asr: it must be a choice between the devil and the deep blue sea -- listen to the wife or boss!

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Omoraboti
loved it .. :)

Originally posted by: sukirtiraizada
a beautiful piece of work...

Originally posted by: GayuArnav
Wow that was very different and interesting one!
Thank god aman dint call him otherwise he should have definitely kissed his work goodbye!

Awesome one

Originally posted by: ainimonaya
Excellent excellent idea chitzy..who ever has written it, brilliant!
Dm...u guys must continue!
thnx budy 4 the pm 🤗

Originally posted by: Chika_gurl
loved it

Thank you so much for taking the time out to comment!! Its really encouraging considering this is my first OS!! Glad you loved it. :D

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Loved the idea and the way you brought it to life. Really enjoyable read. Maybe the start of a series of DM interventions?! 😉

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LAKSHMI

@barunslakku

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

loved it..it was so different...

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Your first OS and its a Sixer!! I loved it and thank God Aman decides to join his wife rather than make a pesky call to his boss!!😛 divine intervention indeed😊
It would be awesome if you continue this...