A MaanEet FF:Accidently Married:Part 3 Pg 3 28/12

hey this is Vish. I am a new ff writer so please please comment and criticize me so that i can learn from my mistakes.
so here is the beginning of what i have jot down from my wrecked up brain

It is useless to say I love you when you dont trust that person because you love the person you trust

Prologue
Dev: ummm...our wedding is 3 months away so i thought if i cud go out wid my frends on a boys' outing for these moths
Geet: dev what is there to ask you can go. i trust you enuff 2 let u go 4 these months because i know u can neva do anything wrong.
Dev: thank u geet. i luv u

Sumwhere in delhi

Savitri Devi: maan i have seen i girl 4 u.
Maan: Dadi y do u kip on doing dis wen u kno da ans will always be no.
SD: i want u 2 be settled in ur lyf.
Maan:dadi i dont wanna get married because i dont trust da female gender to marry me because she loves me but beoz she love my money so i just dont wanna get married. no more discussion.

Life doesn't go the way you want it to go. Life has it's own twists and turns.

ohplease tell me it's boring. but still if you like it dont feel shy i will accept it if you all dont want me to continue so please feel free to tell me i wont mind becaose from the very beginning i know i am a bad writer. so comment and criticize i will continue according to ur opinions
suggest me the names for this ff

Character Sketch
the khurana's
maan: a loving arrogant, lady-killer, short-tempered, rude, egoistic 28-year-old billionaire. his childhood incidents have made him the man he is now. loves his dadi maa and siblings a lot

Dadimaa:same as in GHSP but more tricky and childish at times

Vicky:Maan's extra childish brother, but loving and understanding. considers maan his idol and fatherly figure. can do anything for his sister and dadimaa

Anwesha/Annie: Maan's sister.loves her brothers and dadimaa a lot. maan is her idol and fatherly figure.

The Handa's
Geet: a jovial, loving, extra-talkative, childish, egoistic, pretty 25-year-old architect. her father owns a family business but doesn't wish to join

Yuvraj: geet's brother. married to the love of his life Mehak both met at college fell in love and got married and joined the Handa family business. spoils geet a lot

Mehak: Yuvraj's wife. loves her in-laws a lot especially geet. spoils geet a lot and has gotten in trouble a lot of times along with yuvraj with her mum-in-law. currently helping in their family business

Rano: geet's mother. loves her children but really strict especially with geet as she is very immature. treats geet, mehak and yuvraj equally

Mohinder: geet's father. not really strict. loves his children a lot. treats mehak, yuvraj and geet equally.

The Khanna's
Dev: a hard-working, soft-spoken, shy 28-year-old billionaire. loves and respects his naani and sister a lot. and is about to marry geet in 3 months time

Naani(Satya Devi):broadminded. loves her grand children a lot and has a very modern thinking. treats meera, dev and yash equally

Meera: dev's younger sister. loves her naani and brother a lot is a doctor currently engaged to yash.

Yash Malhotra: engaged to Meera. an orphan looked after-ed by the Khanna family hoping to marry meera on the same day as dev. loves the family as his own


Naintara Rathod: Geet's best riend, both are inseparable they love to get things which are identical. about to get engaged to Maan.

update soon

thank you so much for all your positive comments and will update as soon as i edit the first part

Chapter 1
Part 1

" Mom! Dad! Where are you? I am feeling scared. Mom. I am dying. Please help me, Dad! Mom. MMMOOOMMM!!!!!"
A man in his late twenties again terrified of the of the dream which has been haunting him ever since he lost his parents. sweating profusely and trembling with fear wishing he had someone by his side to help him get rid of the pain buried deep in side his heart. The great Maan Singh Khurana, the one who has the heart of a lion is scared of just a mere nightmare. That one particular dream takes away the hope in his heart of not visualizing that dream, it adds on to his sleepless nights and fear. He awaits that one angel to come into his life to sooth his pain, fear and his broken heart

At the same time somewhere else in Delhi

A girl standing close to the window in her room, gazing at the moon, thinking about how her life changed in a short period of time. She was engaged and wasw about to get married to the man she loves the most, Dev. he cancelled his trip just for her, her wish of shopping for their wedding. Her best friend, Naintara, was about to engaged to Mr. Maan Singh Khurana. what else did she want everything and everyone in her life was going great.

But who can challenge fate it decides everything for everyone. So let's go on a journey of weird incidents with these two different people from two different worlds

wow so interesting dear...
the CS is awesome...
cont soon and pm me...
sent the buddy invite too...
and one request update ur title every time u update like part 1 @ so page...

part 1
nice start...
cont soon dear...

First of all congratulations for ur first story on IF...the prologe was great and the storyline fantastic... chap 1 was a good intro of maan showing his most weak and vulnerable side...hm dev n geet ...n maan n naintara...exciting...waiting to see how the story unfolds...really great...good luck n wish u all the best...

thank you for such great comments and here is
Part 2
the next morning at Khurana mansion
Dadi:Maan do you remember that you promised me that you would do anything i ask you to do
Maan: hmm...i remember that, so, what do you want me to do???
Dadi: i want you to get married to the girl i have chosen for you
Maan: dadi how many times do i have to tell you that i don't want to get married
Dadi: maan you promised and i have made the decision so no more arguments
Maan: dadi...
Dadi: i said no more arguments!
Maan: fine! i lost! happy! i will marry that girl (making disgusted faces)
Dadi: now thats like my good boy
Vicky enters while munching on his chips and Annie fully annoyed with his presence
Vicky: dadi, bhai what are you two talking about
Dadi: your brother is getting married to naintara
Annie: so he finally agreed. i am so happy for you bhai.
Maan: don't be because i am not and i was forced.
Vicky: but you still getting married na
Maan: vicky, get lost before i murder you with my pen
Vicky: dadimaa, look bhai wants to murder me that to with his pen. see how ruthless he is he cant even see my innocent and frightened face.
Maan: huh! drama queen!
Dadi: maan stop bullying your siblings
Maan: now why do you have a sullen face, Annie
Annie: Vicky.
Maan: what did he do (while glaring at vicky)
Annie: he made fun of me and embarrassed me in front of my friends saying that i am scared of shopping alone that's why i always tag him around with me
Maan: vicky when will you stop harassing Annie.
Vicky: never
Maan: vicky if you don't stop this behavior of yours, i will make sure that you don't get that stupid bike of yours! is that that clear?
Vicky: yes bai (with a cute pout on his face)
Maan: dadimaa can i take your leave now
Dadi: sure beta i have no problem at all. BTW you remember we have to go shopping right.
Maan:what?! NO! NEVER!! i...i can't. no way. i don't like shopping. you didn't tell me. it was not part of the deal.
Dadi: i didn't tell you. oh. okay than i am telling you now so be ready at 3. oak see you at the ... Mall
Maan: but...
Dadi: i said see you at 3 at the mall
Maan left whilst cribbing at his doomed fate

Precap: Geet's side of life
Shopping